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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome ...Super cute Update Heer 👏 👏 👏

Loved this So much, Thanks a ton for posting dear 😃

Khanak Demanded 2500/- 😲 😲LOL joote hain nahi pass aur itna confidence 👏 way to go girl ...Love your style. 😊 Akshay was ready to give but shaan stopped him saying first joote 😆 love their super cute nok jhok 😛 both are Such cutie pies, love them a lot when thy are fighting also, 😆 loved the song & sequance you used for joota chupai. HAHK ki yaad aa gayi. 😃 beautifully written !!! 👏 👏

khanak didnt knew where jootis gone ...even shaan lost it, 😆 😆 loved the little chase between shaan & khanak 😛 shaan involved jay too 😆 😆 shaan patoing her to give jootis was cute, 😃 bidaai was emotional but finally love birds got married. 😃 khanak asking fofr dwarchakai & shaan saying " abh kya neek ? yeh shadi hai yah barbadi'' Kitna cash lagta

hai isme" 🤣 🤣 loved shaan here so much. 😃 shaan teasing akshay & later the way sunil join thm was hilarious 😆 wow guys are gonna have so much fun bechaara Romit uski SR ki waat na layage toh accha ...waiting for some stealking moments of romace from shanak. bechaare kitne dino baad wapis apne ghar jayenge warna itne din khanak yaha toh shaan waha


This Is exciting waiting for next ...Please update soon.


Love

Pranjal.

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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely update heer...😃
Lol their teasings are awesome...
Finally khanak is back in the khandelwal house...
waiting for the next part...
heer_85 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: aasma1

Loved the part, shanak and their nok jhok is sooo cute thank god u updates on 3rd anniversary :-D:-D:-D:-D

Thanx Aasma 😊
-pranjal- thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
WOW ...are you posting today Heer ??

Please say Yes 😊
chandu8881 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
That was awesome kats👏😃
Thank you for the imagination treat😆
jhoothe ka part took away the cherry on the cake😳😃
Hum aapke hain kaun! Till now the most watched movie by me😆
ek aur hain, tum guess kar lo...mujhe pata toh chalein ki tum badam kha bhi rahe ho ya nahi😛😆
Khanak switching sides..ha ha..i loved that part😃
hmm..waiting for next, do update soon..😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thank u to all who click the like button 😊


pranjal-, Maneesha_Shanak, aasma1, jaisyjazz, poo_j,

Thank u to all who commented 😊

here coming a small part hope u will enjoy reading and please ignore any

grammatical error 😊

Part 35

Sunil to himself " kitne naughty he mere bache, akhir baap pe gae

hai "

Khushboo, Nidhi and Khanak took Jaanvi to her new room

The room was decorated very nice, flower scattered on the bed, candles

around the room, Khanak and Nidhi observed the room it was superbly

decorated.

Khanak: wow!!!!!!! Kitne achese sajaya hai yeh room kyu Jaanu

and wink at her

Jaanvi shyly lower her eyelashes

Nidhi: hoyeee!!!!!!!!!! hoyeee!!!!!!!!! Kya sharmati ho

Khushboo: yeh saab shaan neh decorate kiya hai

Khanak thought of shaan, she shyly blush and become pink

Nidhi: wese khanak tumare gaal itne pink kyu horahe hai

Khushboo: haa khanak batao nah

They tease each other and make Jaanvi sit on centre of the bed and

Khushboo was teasing her not be nervous

Khushboo: don't be scared just enjoy the flaw

Jaanvi: bhabhi !!!!!!!!!!! and lower her gaze

Boys side

Shaan: so Romit are u ready ?

Romit: what ready!!!!!! kya mein koi mission per jarahahu

Shaan teased him and said " ha mission Jaanu …………"and wink

Boys chuckle and hide their smile, Romit gave them a look

Boys with Duhle raja headed to the room , girls were coming out and they

met at the door

Nidhi : jijuuu!!!!!!!!!! Kaha jaraheho aap

Raj: kaha jaraheho matlab

Shaan: wese abh tum maat kehna keh tumeh neek chahiye

Nidhi: shaan tume kese pata chala tum kitne samaj dar ho

Romit: bolo kitne chahiye …. Shaan iseh nek dedo

Shaan: what!!! mein kyu duh shaadi tumari hai aur bend mera

baja raheho

Romit: shaan dedo nah yeh last wala hoga kyu Nidhi

Nidhi: how romantic !!!! Jaanu se milneki itni jaldi hai aap koh

jiju

Boys and girls laugh and let Romit enter the room, they bid him night and

told him they are leaving

In the hall of Romit house

Shaan: I m so tired yaar…. aab gar chalet hai saab

Khushboo and Nidhi got worried

Akshay: kya huwa Baby tum tikh ho nah

Shaan said with concerned " bhabhi app tikh ho na."

Khushboo: ha mein thikh hu

Shaan: acha abh saab chalo, Khanak kaha hai?

Khushboo and Nidhi giggled

Back to the room

Romit moved to the bed where his bride was sitting on centre of the bed

Romit sat facing her, his bride face was cover with her odhani

Romit: Jaanu, I love u

Khanak was in the gongaht, and Jaanvi behind the curtain, khanak control

her

laughter

Romit: tumbhi bola na u love me

Khanak: mmm!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Romit: what mmm!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Jaanu, wese aaj tum bohut

khubhsurat lag rahiho, bilkul eek rajkumari ki tara

Romit touch khanak's hand and she became nervous

Back to hall

Khushboo and Nidhi spoke slowly and control their laughter

Nidhi: bhabhi wese waha kya horaha hoga

Khushboo: pata lagana parega

Akshay: tum log kya baatein kar rahiho, aur Khanak kaha hai

Shaan: ha yaar yeh Khanak kaha rehgai mein bohut thakgaya hu

Khushboo and Nidhi laugh loud, boys were looking at them

Raj: kya huwa bhabhi aap log inta kyu haas raheho

Nidhi could not control anymore and spoke " omgeee !!!! Pata

nahi waha kya horaha hoga ."

Shaan: waha matlab.. ( looked at them with a question look )

Khushboo: Romit ke kemreme..( looked at shaan )

Shaan was shocked " what???????? Khanak waha hai

Khushboo: bechara Romit, Khanak bed paar aur Jaanvi pardeke

piche

Shaan: kyaaa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ( shocked )

Nidhi and Khushboo laugh and boys were shocked

Jai: di kamreme aur woh bhi Jaanvi banke

Boys looked at each other again

In the room

Romit touches khanak's hand and she got nervous

Khanak changed her voice little lower and said " Kya kar raheho

jeee

and smile to herself

Jaanvi too was controlling her laughter

Romit: Jaan!! tumari awaz koh kya huwa aur tum muje jeee!!

Kyu keh rahiho

Khanak as Jaanvi: kuch nahi, tum bhi aaj bohut handsome

lagraheho

Khanak suddenly lift from the bed and moved a little distance from Romit

Romit: kaha jarahiho Jaan

Khanak did spoke and again giggled slowly

Romit was full in Romantic mood so with out thinking he said " Jaanu

agar tum chahti ho ke mein tume lift karu jese filmo meh hota

hai toh muhje pehle thori energy lani hogi kyuke tumara wazan

bohut bar gaya hai ."

Khanak opened her mouth in shocked

Jaanvi heard and fumed in anger

JaanvI: what???????????? Mein tume moti lagrahihu

Romit turn and saw Jaanvi coming from curtain and again looked at the

khanak

Romit slowly agar tum yaha ho toh phir yeah koun hai

Khanak raised her gungaat and started laughing loudly

She was laughing like a hell and hold her tummy and said while still

laughing

OMGEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Romit kya dialogue tha

At the same time boys came to the room, the room was opened as

khushboo didn't lock it coz they knew Khanak was in. they heard khanak's

laughter and opened the door

Nidhi: kya huwa …..and she too started laughing

Khanak still laughing and said " u won't believe Nidhi Romit neh kya

kiya

Jaanvi: ihse toh mein aaj nahi chorungi

Nidhi: paar kiya kya jiju neh

Shaan looked at Khanak the way she was laughing

Jai: Romit!! kya di neh band bajai hai tumari?

Romit give him a look

Shaan : Khanak tum haya kya kar rahiho ? aur romit tumne kya

kiya

She didn't answer him and start laughing again, after few second she

Composed herself and narrate what happen

All had a good laugh, then bid good night , and sweet dreamz to the couple

teasingly.

Romit romantically make jaanu melt to him and they had their beautiful

night

Khandelwal's were on their way to their house, Raj and Jai in one car other

in another car

Shaan was driving, beside him Akshay was seated and three ladies at back

seat

Khushboo and Nidhi asked Khanak what else Romit did

Khanak narrate them again and they start laughing

Shaan: wese Khanak, kisike kanreme itni raat ko jana buri baat

hai

Akshay recall when shaan was despo to go to khanak's room and said "

really choote ."

They reached Khandelwal house and all were tired, Khushboo and Akshay

were

the first to head to their room and then Jay

Khanak, Nidhi , Shaan and Raj were in the hall

Khanak: chalo Nidhi , I m so tired yaar

Nidhi: haa chalo, lekin phir kaal ka kya plan hai

Khanak: maatlab?

Nidhi: hum reception toh nahi rakh rahehe, toh phir kaal kya

karenge

Shaan: dinner, kaal hum saab dinner jaenge

Khanak: nahi hum kaal dinner nahi jaenge

Shaan: kyu bhai, kyu nahi jaenge dinner

Raj: wese Khanak, Dinner janeka idea bura nahi hai

Khanak: ha, lekin meh nahi asakti

Shaan: kyu nahi asakti

Khanak: mein bohut thag gaiyu mein kaal bataungi, mein sone

jarahihu, ok Gud night guys

Nidhi: ha yaar I m also tired

Shaan: Khanak……….. tum……….

Khanak has already gone, and Raj too

Shaan to himself " kaal bataungi kya matlab muje abhi jannahai

Shaan moved to Khanak's room but them stop in mid way and said "

oohhh shittt!!!!!!!!!! Yaar, Nidhi uske saath hai, khanak koh

bhi kya kehneki zarurat thi, Nidhi chaal sakti hai kya ? ." he said

in irritated tone

Shaan: but I have to talk to her, soch dude abh kese khanak se

milonge

Khanak and Nidhi were in deep sleep, when Khanak heard something fall

in her room, she wake up and saw shaan near the window, the moon light

wasreflected in the room so Khanak was able to see him, Khanak looked at

Nidhi first and saw her in deep sleep. Khanak whisper his name, when he

saw him adjusting flower vase on the table

near the window, shaan looked at her,khanak was coming near him

Khanak: shaan tum yaha kya kar raheho

Shaan: mein Nidhi se milne ayahu said in irritated tone

Shaan: chalo and hold her hand

Khanak: shaan choro na please sone do, mein bohut thakgayi hu

Shaan didn't listen to her and dragged her to the terrace

Khanak: thikh hai abh batao

Shaan: kaal tum kyu nahi anewali dinner paar

Khanak: shaaannn!!!!!! Itni raat koh tumne muje jagaya yeh

puchne keliye

Shaan: ha abh batao

Khanak: kaal baat kartehai. Mein jaa rahihu sone

Khanak was about to go shaan held her wirst and pulled toward him,

khanak collide with his chest, shaan wrapped his arms around her waist

Khanak: shaan!!!!!!!!!! Kya karraheho, choro muje

Shaan: pehle batao

Khanak: shaan choro na

Shaan started nuzzling her hair

Khanak: thikh hai, kaal mein ekk dost ke saath dinner jarahihu,

abh khush

Shaan: Kounsa dost ? and turn her to face him

Khanak thought to have some fun

Khanak: hai koi, abh mein ne batadiya nah, kyu nahi asakti, toh

abh jane do muje

Shaan: yeah konsa dost hai tumara he said annoyed

Khanak: hai bohut purana dost and hide her smile

Shaan curiosly wanted to know abt his new raiser friend

Shaan: kesa dikhtahai ?

Khanak: shaan! yeh kesa sawal hai, issan jesa dikhta hai bilkul

hamari tara

Shaan: Khanak!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Khanak smiled to him and said " tuhme kyu jaana hai uske bareme

Shaan: kyu tumare saabhi dost mere pyaar ke dushman hai

Khanak chucked and looked at him and said " acha ese kese…."

Shaan: Khanak mein bilkul mazak ke mood mein nahi hu

Khanak: thikh hai, woh mera ekk dost hai, hum collage mein

saath the, woh kuch din pehle India ayahe to usne muhje

phone kiya aur dinner keh liye pucha

Shaan: aur tumne ha kardiya. Aur woh tuhme akele kyu buyala

dinner paar, Romit aur Janvi koh bhi bulasakta hai nah, tum

saab collage meh saath the nah

Khanak: ha lekin Romit aur Jaanvi ki shaadi huwi hai aaj , to

woh unlogo ko space dena chahtahe

Shaan: tum nahi jaonge uske saath, samji

Khanak: shaan are u Jeaolous ?

Shaan: tum joh chaho woh samaj lo

Khanak: mein jaungi, warna uhse bura lagega aur uski wife koh

bhi

Shaan: acha hai keh uski wife koh bhi bura lagega toh he

said it casually and

realize

Khanak looked at him

Shaan: woh shaadi shuda hai !!!!!!

Khanak nodded her head smiling at him

Shaan: khanak!!!!!!!!!!!!! Tum ……………….

Both smiled and hugged each other very tight

Khanak: shaan, muhje bohut neendh arahihe. Abh Jaane

do

Shaan: thik hai, and kiss on her head which was lied on his

chest

Before she left she gave shaan a quick peak on his lips, shaan

was shocked

Shaan: aaj needh bohut achi ayegi and said I love u

Khanak

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SJ6... thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awww how sweet
where habe u been heer???xxx
poo_j thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
Very nice update..😊 Finally Khanak returned to her home..How cutely she is teasing Shaan..😆Can we move on to ShaNak marriage if possible..
Looking forward and thanks for writing a superb update..😊
Edited by poo_j - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow it was supub... Love it 😊

thanks for aswome update heer
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow super cute update heer...
Loved it...
Lol khanak was in place of jaanvi... Shaan toh bahut pareshaan hogaya lol...:
Shanak conversation on the terrace was lovely...
Waiting for the next update...
Update soon...

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