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Part 28
Romit house
Shaan: so guys whats the plan for the evening
Romit: what plan ?
Shaan: dude'''ladies sangeet and mehndi enjoy karne wali hai, toh kya
hum esehi bete rahenge'( rotating his phone on his lap )
Raj: baat toh sahi hai yaar'. I think we should have a bachelors
party'..what say guys good ides nah
Romit and Akshay: bad idea ' ( and looked at each other )
Shaan understood why they said that and chuckle
Akshay: aur haso humari halat par sabki bari ayegi
Jai: I think it's a good idea'..( excited )
Akshay: shut up Jai it's the worst ide''''agar khushboo koh pata chala
nah to mera murder hojaega
Shaan smile at him and started laughing
Akshay: chotey'. and give his a killing look
Romit: aur Jaanu mera uhse bhi bura haal kardengi''...Romit imagine what
jaanu will do with him and said no!!!!!!!!!...( loudly)
Jai: what No romit'.( looked at him )
Shaan: Jai''.romit neh imagine karkiya Jaanvi uske saath kya kya karegi
Shaan and Raj laugh at his state
Romit: tum dono koh bahut hasi ara hihe nah, tum logo ki baari jaaldi
ayegi
Raj: Ok toh phir hum kya kare
Shaan said " I have a superb idea and smiled mischivios .
Akshay: chotey is tara smile karna band karo aur idea batao
Shaan: cool bhaiya''relax acha thikh hai, I think hame sangeet aur
mehndi meh jana chahiye
All looked at him shocked and stand from their seats and said
" WHAT??????????? "
Akshay: lagta hai chotey tum pagal hogae ho'( looked at shaan who was cooly
sat on a couch )
Jay: I think yeh superb idea hai bro'.( jai sat beside shaan )
Romit: lagta hai tum log hamari band bajana chahteho''.kyu kih abhi
taak tumari shaadi nahi hui hai nah isiliye
Akshay: exactly'.( to romit )
Shaan: thikh hai bhai'''mein toh janewala hu function mein
Jay: I m too coming
Raj: I think its wil be the best''''I wil also join u guys
Akshay and Romit looked at each other
Shaan: bhaiya esa kuch nahi hoga joh aap log soch rahehe, so please chill
yaar, wese waha hame koi nahi pehchanega
Romit: ese kese'. tum kya keh raheho shaan
Shaan: hum saab ladies wear meh jaenge
Akshay: whattt???????????????? Chotey tum thikh toh ho nah and check his
temperature
Other trio argues with shaan and later they were convinced
At Jaanvi's house
Jaanvi's house was very well decorated , all arrangements were done very well,
Jaanu's relatives, Khandelwal ladies, guests and mehndi artist had arrived, family
members welcome them warmly
Ladies were ready with their dholak. Khandelwal came with the shaagun ki mehndi
Jaanvi came to the hall she was wearing a nice choli dress of light green color, Riya a
nice choli in pink, Nidhi too dressed in yellow and Khanak was wearing a nice cap
sleeve choli in blue which was gifted by shaan, dresses were fitted the ladies to their
right curves on their body .
Madhvi apply shangun's mehndi first on behave of Romit relatives, then dholak was
playing by old ladies, few girls were dancing, mehndi artist start drawing a nice
pattern on Jaanu's palm, Khanak and Nidhi were seated beside her admiring her
mehndi and teasing her
Boys side
Shaan: bhaiya kya kar raheho aap''( looked at Akshay ) gar par think nahi
karsak tehthe aap
Akshay was adjusting his wig and other waiting for him to make entry in sangeet
Akshay: chote yeh saab tumara idea tha samje tum and looked at him annoyed
Shaan:wese bhaiya aab thikh lagraheho''..aur bohut sexy bhi..aabh chalo
All trio laugh at him and Akshay become more annoyed
Akshay: very funny!!!!!!!
When they were about to make entry someone's phone rang
All looked at each other to see whose phone was ringing, then Akshay said " mera
hai."
Shaan: bhaiya aap hame paka marwaoge'. apna phone switch off nahi
karsakteh kya'.ager bhabhi keh samne yeh baja nah toh aap toh gaye
kaamse
Akshay: chotey kyu dararaheho''..
Romit: Please yaar saab apna phone switch off karo
Shaan took Akshay's phone and switch it off
Guys enter the hall in sarees with their purse and high heel sandals
Romit, Akshay and Jai: purse lena zaruri tha kya'. ise kese carry karte hai'
pata nahi ladies purse kyu rakhti hai'.aur yeh high heels kese saath kese
chalteh hai '..(balancing them selves )
Akshay: acha hai mene heels nahi pehni..mere yeh joote kafi hai
Shaan: jese aap apni wallet rakhte hai'..wese hi woh purse rakhti hai aab
chalo saab
Jay: wese bhai'apko kese pata yeh saab'.
Shaan: Jay''.hum badme yeh sari discussion karenge aabh chalo saab
Ladies side
Ladies were dancing in dholak beat, Khanak ,Nidhi and Riya were dancing, Madhvi
and Reva joined them.
Nidhi: khanak kaha jarahiho'
Khanak: mein abhi ayi'.Riya hai nah tum dono dance karo
Khushboo was talking to herself and Khanak came to her
Khanak: bhabhi kya huwa aapki taabiat toh thikh hai nah
Khushboo: taabiat toh meh Akshay ki thikh karungi '( hold her phone )
Khanak: aabh bhaa neh kya kiya'..
Khushboo was about to tell her then one lady called her, she moved to the dance floor
again
Khushboo was walking annoyed and suddenly she collide with a another lady, those
ladies were shocked seeing khushboo
Khushboo first without looking said " sorry ," and then looked at the lady, there
were other 4 ladies,
Khushboo looked at them carefully
Akshay as a lady who collide with khushboo was stunned seeing khushboo he
suddenly became nervous
Shaan slowly: bhaiya relax''.itna nervous kyu horaheho'.. aur pasine
kyu chut rahehe'.. iss hall meh AC hai'.( hide her laughter )
Akshay gave him a killing look other chuckled
Khushboo: jee aap log koun hai?...( looked keenly at them )
Akhsay first in heavy voice : woh''''.
Khushboo looks at him and shaan in a low tone said " bhaiya kya kar raheho
aap'.marwonge aap "
Shaan in ladies voice: jee woh hum Jaanu keh rishtedar hai aur aap?
Khushboo: wese mein ne'' aap ko yaha pehle toh nahi dekha'( doubt on
them and observed them keenly )
Romit: hum aaj hi peda huwe hai''''.( slip of tongue and then looked at
khushboo )
All four looked at him in shocked but khushboo didn't heard him properly
Khushboo: kya kaha apne ?
Raj: nahi who'''..hum aaj hi ayehe isiliye apne hume kabhi dekha nahi
pehle
Khanak came to all call khushboo and spot her with 5 ladies
Khanak: bhabhi aap yaha kya kar raheho '.( and looked at ladies)'. aur yeh
saab koun hai
Shaan to himself in a low tone " beautiful and sexy." Said for khanak
Shaan admired khanak's beauty and lost in his dreams
Khushboo: woh Jaanu keh rishtedar hai aaj hi ayehai
Shaan jecked form his dream at khanak's sweety sexy voice
Khanak: acha'...bhabhi'. woh maa bularahihe apko
Khusboo: thikh hai chalo '. ( and walk away toward dance floor )
Khanak to the ladies " abhi ayi nah ."
Shaan: bhaiya please now relax'..khushboo bhabhi thi''. koi boot nahi
Akshay: woh boot se kaam hai kya?
Shaan: what????... ( looked at Akshay and other chuckled )
Akshay : kuch nahi''mein toh kehtahu hum yahase chalteh hai and turn
toward entrance
Shaan: hum kahi nahi jarahehe ok'..aab chalo saab ( hold his hand )
Jay: kya Bhaiya'' abhi toh humari entry hui hai'..aur aap ho keh .. aabh
hum chale kabse khare huwe hai aur yeh high heels'per dard kar rahehe
They move to where ladies were seated and other were dancing, shaan saw Khanak,
how beautiful she was looking and dancing with other girls, Raj kept looking at Nidhi
and admired her, Romit eyes were on Jaanvi, Jay looking at Riya
Dadi passes by them and asked them: aap log haya kyu hai chalo dance karne
chalo
Shaan to himself : O God Dadi!!!!!!!!
All became nervous
Akshay slowly to shaan: chotey aab kuch kar dadi paka hume pehchan lengi
Shaan: iss mein meh kya karu'( nervous )
Romit: shaan yeh bakwas idea tumara tha'.( aabh kuch karo )
Shaan: aur haa iss bakwas idea keh wajase' tum apni Jaanu ko gur gur keh
dekhrahete '( looked at Romit )
Romit: Acha thikh hai..bakwas nahi hai lekin abhi toh kuch karo
Shaan: jee hum abhi une join karlenge'.( smiling )
Someone called dadi and she left
All said " Abb pata nahi koun koun ayega'jaan bachi "
Khushboo was beside Jaanvi who was applying mehndi, Khushboo called Khanak and
told her to start their dance, Khanak had too applied mehndi by other lady, Nidhi
came to her along with Riya
Nidhi: Khanak tum yaha kya kar rahiho'''let's start yaar
Khanak: thikh hai''arahihu'lekin pehle yeh dupata zara adjust kardo
Jaanu was excited and Khanak said " Madam aap yahi par raho. " Khushboo
giggles at her excitement
Jaanu: think hai aab khush'mein yahi par hu'.( pout )
Khanak: bohut khush and laugh at her
Nidhi adjust khanak's dupata on her shoulder
Dance started
Music played, khanak moved toward Jaanu and start singing gesture her palms full of
mehndi, Riya and Nidhi joined her
( This is my favorite song hope u all will like it )
khanak: Hatho meh''.. in hatho meh
Likh ke mendhi se sajna kah naam''Likh ke mendhi se sajna kah naam
Hatho meh''.in hatho meh'..jiseh parti hu mein subho sham
jiseh parti hu mein subho sham''..Hatho meh in hatho mein
Likh ke mendhi se sajna kah naam''.Likh ke mendhi se sajna kah naam
Khanak move on music to Jaanvi . and then with few words of the song.
Khanak dream singing for Shaan
Yaad muhje jab aaa'unki aye, haye re hayeee bara sataye
Yaad muhje jab aaa' unki aye, haye re hayeee bara sataye
Dekhu suraat mein unki subh ho shaam, Dekhu suraat mein unki sub ho
sham
Hatho meh in hatho mein, Likh ke mendhi se sajna kah naam
Aab uske bin lageh na maan woh jogi hai mein hu jogan
Aab uske bin aaa lageh na maan woh jogi hai mein hu jogan
Sapne dekhu sajan keh subh ho shaam, Sapne dekhu sajan keh subh ho
shaam
Nidhi shake her little and she came back to reality and start singing again
Hatho meh'. in hatho meh,
Likh ke mendhi se sajna kah naam, Likh ke mendhi se sajna kah naam
Likh ke mendhi se sajna kah naam
Hatho meh , in hatho meh
jiseh parti hu subho sham, jiseh parti hu subho sham,
Hatho meh , in hatho meh. Likh ke mendhi se sajna kah naam
Likh ke mendhi se sajna kah naam
There was a Loud of applause when danced finished, shaan looked at khanak
Lovingly
Jaanu's mehndi was almost finished to applied; other ladies were still dancing on
dholak tune.
Khanak: mein thak gai paani peene jarahihu'.. ( to Nidhi and jaanu )
Khanak was struggling to hold a glass of water, coz her mehndi was little wet, at the
same time a lady came near her
Lady ( shaan): mein help kardu kya'. ( admiring her )
Khanak looked at her at first, she looked doubted at that lady, she was tall and with
strong body but then she didn't care for it
Khanak: jee nahi mein lelungi...Thank u
She again try to hold a glass and then looked for Nidhi if she was coming toward her
Lady ( shaan): wese mein peladu kya'I mean agar tum glass hold karogi
toh tumari mehndi kharab hojaengi
Khanak felt different about the lady and she didn't reply to her and just stare at her
At the same time Romit came to shaan'..shaan got irritated and said to himself
" yeh phir se agaya'..kudh toh romance nahi karraha aur mere romance
meh tang ladarahahe ."
Romit: woh shaaa '''.. he didn't complete and got a cold look from Shaan
Khanak looked at Romit first and then turn to shaan
Khanak: shaaa''''' !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Romit: woh Shaanti''. hah shaanti''.. tum yaha kya kar rahiho shanti
Shaan looked at him with angry look
Shaan: nahi mein toh saab esehi''chale
Before they left Khanak moved from there
Shaan: Romit kya hai ''' aur wese tuhme aur koi naam nahi mila
shaaanti Yuhk!!!!!!!!!! Mein shaaanti lagra hahu
Romit: toh kya mein shaakuntala kehta'..acha hua mein ne shaa ke baad
ti lagadiya aur shaati hogaya and laugh at annoyed shaan
Shaan: not so funny ok aab chalo'.. dekhteh baaki teen kya kar
rahehe..kahi hume marwana deh
They move toward ladies and found other trio talking to each other annoyed with
their getup
Shaan: kya horahahe? And looked at their annoyed faces who were trying to adjust
their outfit, shaan control his laughter
Akshay: its not funny chotey'. yeh tumara idea tha!!! abb dekhliya nah
sangeet so aabh chaale yahase
Shaan: what chalo thori der aur rukhte hai nah 'while saying this he was
looking for Khanak
Akshay: chootey aab tum yeh maat kehna tumein mehndi lagani hai
Romit, Raj and Jay laugh at shaan''shaan gave them a killing look
Romit: yeh hume thori der rukna chahile'' woh Jaanu'''
Raj: kya romit yaar '..kaabse yaha telraheho, milnahi saakhtethe kya
Romit: woh'''I was making myself ready yaar to meet Jaanu'. uski
nazaar bohut sharp hai'..agar mein gaya na uske paas toh woh muje
kacha chabajaengi
Jay: esa kuch nahi hoga'..woh busy hai waha par so go to her now
Romit: ha bhai meri band bajao tum log
Shaan: meh toh chala'.tum logo ko joh bhi karna ho woh karo' sare
darpokh ho
Akshay: haa chootey tum toh yeh hi kohange nah, kyuki tumari abhi tak
shaadi kaha hui hai. Mein toh almost bachgaya, khushboo neh agar muje
pehchan liya hota na toh pata nahi mein abhi kis halat mein hota..( dream
his state )
Shaan: meh toh chala'.. aabh socho kesa haal hota and move from trio
Shaan was searching for Khanak and collide with her, khanak's dupata slightly
detached from her waist and exposed her tiny waist
Shaan: woh mein'' sorry
Khanak: aap phirse''kuch chahiye kya ( politely )
Shaan to himself " ha chahiye nah tum ."
Khanak: jee apne kuch kaha..( looked at him )
Shaan: nahi kuch bhi toh nah''kya mein help kardu 'dupata laganeme
Khanak looked at him again and said " nahi meh lagalungi'.thank u'aur aap
bar bar kyu mujse takrate ho " ( annoyed now )
Khanak moved to her room where she slept last night and shaan followed her slowly
Khanak leave the door slightly open and start to put her dupata in her gagra ( choli
skrit ) she was struggling coz of her palm filled with mehndi, suddenly someone hold
her hand and she raised her head to see the same lady
Khanak: app ???????????? ..( shocked )
Shaan: mein kardu'' and looked at Khanak when he hold Khanak's hand khanak
left uneasy at his touch
Khanak: thikh hai'.. ( she was lost at that touch n agreed )
Shaan slowly take her dupata, he brings it forward from her shoulder, he brushes his
palm on Khanak's waist, khanak felt shiver and looked at shaan, she somehow
recognizes that touch and became nervous and lower her head she knew this was
shaan so she didn't say anything
Shaan stared at her and smiled teasingly to her, he didn't tie her dupata instead
started caresses her waist like he is struggling to tie for her, Khanak become more
nervous and she looked at him and observed him keenly
Shaan smiled at her mischievously and khanak slightly open her mouth in shock
Khanak was speechless for a minute and stare at him in shocked
Shaan: sweetheart ( mischievously )
Khanak with much difficulty said " Shaannn ."
Shaan raised his eyebrows and pulled khanak more closer to him holding her waist
from back, coz of the pull she rest her hands on shaan's chest
Shaan: I love u sweetheart
Khanak was still staring at him
Shaan: khanak''gurna band karo muje
Khanak relaxed and said " shaan tum yaha aur ese.!!!!!!!!! "
Shaan: sirf tumare liye'( moved closer to capture her lips )
Khanak mind strike something and said " woh dursi ladies ." and open her mouth in
shock
Shaan smiled to her
Khanak: tum saab pagal hogae hoh kya agar kisine pehchan liya toh
Shaan: koi nahi pehchanga'.we all dressed in ladies outfits sweetheart
Shaan: wese Khanak tum bohut haawwt !!!!!! lagrahiho and move his face
toward her's
Khanak: shaan kya kaar raheho''darwaza khula hai
Shaan: ha toh phir band kardeh'' ( naughty )
Khanak: besharam''.and whacked him on his chest
Shaan raised his one hand and caresses her face and her lips, khanak felt shiver run
down her spine and her lips trembled
Khanak: shaaannn!!!!!!!!!!! Tum'' and move little apart from him
Shaan: khanak mein lady ke getup meh zarur hu lekin meh shaan hu
Shaan pulled her again and within a minute he sealed his lips with hers, they enjoyed
the kiss for few minutes and moved little to catch their breath , shaan again moved
closer to her and hide his head on Khanak's neck and drop few wet kisses on her neck
and shoulder
Khanak hand rested on his shoulder and slowly called shaan's name who was busy
kissing her and nuzzling her neck and shoulder
Shaan looked at her and khanak insist to go out of the room. They came to the hall,
khanak saw guys in ladies avatar and hide her smile, she moved with shaan to the
ladies ( guys)
Khushboo was calling Akshay but his phone was switch off, she became more angry
and pass near the guys and said to herself " Akshay ."
Akshay: yes Baby '.. and all guys with khanak looked at him, guys closed their eyes,
shaan raised his brows in annoyed
Shaan : margaye!!!!
Khushboo stop and turn to them''Akshay become nervous
Khushboo: yes Baby? '' ( looked at them )
Shaan: yeh yes baby''.. woh inka naam hai pointed to Romit
Romit gave him a stern look to shaan
Khushboo: baby !!!!!!!!! yeh kesa naam hai..( to Romit )
Shaan: woh hum saab ihne baby bulate hai gar par
Khanak chuckled and looked at Romit
Before khushboo asked anything farther khanak cut her off
Khanak: bhabhi kya huwa aap itni pareshan kyu ho
Khushboo: woh Akshay'. ( looked at her phone )
Khanak: bhaa ''''. Bhaa keh kya kiya
Khushboo: haath meh anetoh doh uhse'.pehle toh mera phone kaatdiya
aur aab phone switch off kardiya
Akshay was standing like a statue and shaan said " relax bhaiya." Guys became
nervous
At the same moment Riya and Nidhi came there
Nidhi: tum log ehse kyu khareho ?...chalo saab dance floor par
Khanak: bhabhi hum chale'woh Jaanu akeli ha'chaliye yahase
Nidhi: haa chalo nah aur yeh log'''. Koun hai
Khushboo: Jaanu keh rishtrdar ha
Nidhi: humare rishtedar'..kaabse
Nidhi looked at them, boys became nervous
Shaan to Khanak slowly: sweetheart'..yeh question quiz koh yahase lejao
Khanak: Nidhi chalo nah'
Khushboo: eek minute Khanak'..muje ehsa kyu lagrahahe'.mene inlogo
koh kahi dekha hai'( looked at them keenly )
Shaan: ha woh' thori der pehle milethe nah
Suddenly Nidhi's phone rang and before she attend, it slips from her hand, she too has
applied mehndi, she bend to take her cell, khanak and khushboo turn to leave
Suddenly Nidhi said " joote."
Nidhi: bhabhi '''''( still bend to take her phone )
Khushboo face her " kya huwa."
Nidhi looked at the lady who wore shoes and khushboo follow her gaze
Khanak looked at them, close her eyes in panic, boys looked at Akshay who wore
shoes
Khushboo: tum'''. And stare at him
Khanak pretend she didn't see the shoes
Khanak: bhabhi kya huwa chalo nah
Khushboo: eek minute Khanak to a lady " tumne shoes kyu pehnehe ?."
Lady ( Akshay): woh ''''.. woh'''''. and smiled nervously and said greeted
teeth slowly " chootey ''. Kuch kaar,"
Khushboo stared at them and had a doubt on them, Nidhi too ask the same
Khushboo: chalo khanak hum chalte hai.
Boys had signed of relieved, ladies move little and khushboo said
Khushboo: Nidhi wese muhje kisise milna hai, woh joh ladka mila tha nah
muje kitna hottt !!!!!! and handsome !!! hai yummmyyy!!!
Akshay: khushboo!!!!!!!!!! tum
Khushboo turn to him and fold her hands on her chest
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