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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: suchi_245

Hey

awesome

poor shaan , bechara kya kya kiya aur karega pyaar mein, lol
pahle pipe aur phir galat room mein ghus gaya, hehehe

loved it

then mil gaya sahi room but jhanvi ne haath he nai choda uski khanak ka ,

after few minutes they suceed in escaping and then hot hot romance and kiss *blush blush *

oh ho itne wrong time pe kaun aa gaya ? Ronit ? Raj ?

Waiting for next

update soon


Thanx Suchi 😊 he's always stuck in his own plans first kara n now near bu to be caught in wrong room 😆 Janvi is always fighting with Romit but in dream she want him near 😉 hot kiss was indeed ☺️ socho who land there n disturb sleepy khanak n despo shaan 🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago

Thanx Sneha 😊 but yeh kya itn arukha sukha comment 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭
Edited by heer_85 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ktym

😃Lovely update heer...😃 Supeb it is...

lol shaan eneterd into jaanvi's parents room 😆
now who have disturbed them again on the terrace😕
waiting for the next part.
update soon...


Thanx Monika 😊 shaan bachgaya 😆 but met khanak guess who disturb them
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: priyani143

part 20

wow!!! amazing update Heer👏
Khanak said kaun Shaan??🤣omg!!! & he reminded her saying about their kiss🤣...lovely.👏
he insisted her to say I love u & she did, but mujhe toh jo terrace pe hua uska recap dekhna tha😔😆.
he was angry as she didn't talk to him properly & thats why ignored her in the morning.
omg!!!! kya bahana banaya Shaan ne. Akshay & his convo was so funny. 🤣🤣because of her he had to drink the kara 2 times🤣, bechara Shaan.🤣
yeh kya again misunderstandings😲!!!!!! dono bilkul Burthal hai yar.😆
Shaan is going to meet Khanak at Jaanu's house...lagta hai pitega yeh ladka😆...

part 21
hilarious update Heer...cant stop laughing🤣🤣
so he went to meet her. I agree with Shaan, sabki shaadi ho jayegi Shanak ki shaadi rahe jayegi.😡
omg!!! he climbed the pipe & but entered in the wrong room that too into Jaanu's parent's room🤣🤣🤣. aj toh Shaan definitely pitney wala hai.🤣
but because of Jaanu's mom bechara bach gaya.😆

" yeh gar hai ya bhoot bagla koi soh

hi nahi raha sab raat koh tehel te hain kya ."superb dialogues yar,👏 hats off to you.⭐️
finally Khanak milgayi ussey. 😃he placed his palm on her mouth & was asking him to say something🤣...cuteee.😃
omg!! Jaanu held Khanak's hand thinking it was Romit.🤣
I always skip a beat when they go to terrace😉😳... haye the kiss was so passionate & so so hot☺️☺️. they really missed each other yar.
chalo, now he will talk to Sunil..good.😊
khanak was about to say I love u but someone came...who is that kabab mein haddi???😡😡


Thanx Piyu😊 for comment on part 20 n 21 yeah she was sleepy n dreaming him so said koun shaan, shaan neh kaha kiss so she remember how can she forget his kisses 😳😆 yeah poor him had to drink kara in his own plan
me too was cracking while write and thought u will definitely hold ur tummy 😆 yeah he was almost caught if there wasn't sudha jee 😆 he should thanx her
thanx for loving dialogues n yes he succeed to meet her but then Janvi hold her hand but finally they went at terrace n u know shanak n terrace
environment became romantic it self 😉 ☺️ lets will he be able to talk to sunil think about it 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ktym

update soon please!!!!


Will try to update soon may be tomorrow or Saturday coz of busy schedul at work didn get time to penned down 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: heer_85


Will try to update soon may be tomorrow or Saturday coz of busy schedul at work didn get time to penned down 😊


Ok will wait for your update...😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey heer...R u planning to update after our mission spam 🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: maneesha28889

Hey heer...R u planning to update after our mission spam 🤣


such kaha i m on mission spam so could write an update 😆 🤣
will update Saturday actual got busy at work our director came
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: heer_85


such kaha i m on mission spam so could write an update 😆 🤣
will update Saturday actual got busy at work our director came


Hahha i know lol😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Thank you so much to all who pressed like button 😊

( sweetcharvi, khushboo, Poo, Ona , Saroj, Priyani , Jaisy chand, suchi

Mounika , Diyak , Maneesha, Saranya, Aasma, Rida , sneha )

Thanks to all who comment 😊

Here is part 22 enjoy and please ignore any grammatical error😊 as i wrote in

hurry

Part 22

Shaan: come on sweetheart, eek baar kaho na

Khanak: thikh hai, I ... LOVE...

Khanak didn't complete her words and heard something fall, she pose for a second

Khanak: yeh kya tha……( open her eyes at the disturbance )

Shaan: kya sweetheart

both detached from the hug and looked into each other's eyes

Shaan: kya yaar aab koun hai (he said in annoyed tone )

Khanak: shaan please tum jao yaha se ... ( and looked around)

Shaan: mein kyu jao aur pehle tum bolo...( looked at her )

Khanak: shaan please jao nah...( looked into his eyes )

They heard footsteps approaching them khanak pushed shaan and he hide behind the

pillar

Khanak saw someone coming near her, first she was scared but then see the face .

Khanak: Romit tum!!!!!...( surprised then looked where shaan hide nervously )

Romit: Khanak tum!!!!!!!!!!!... ( in his mind khanak yaha kya kar rahihe )

Khanak: tum yaha iss waqt... kya kar raheho?

Romit: mein... mein...yaha... yuhi baas... eseh hi...( fumble with words )

Khanak: itni raat koh tum esehi...( hide her chuckle )

Romit give her a look and said

Romit: thikh hai yaar... mein Jaan seh milne ayahu... please yaar

khanak kuch toh karo...woh mujse phirse naaraz hogai

Khanak rolled her eyes and behind the pillar shaan was listening to their conv

Shaan to himself slowly " toh milo na apni Jaan seh meri Jaan koh toh akela

chordo...pata nahi kaab ... kaab ...( looked at the sky like complaining

to God) meri aur khanak ki mulakatoh meh disturbance khatam hogi

...hadh hai yaar pehle gar paar aur aabh yaha... (and then pop slight

from behind the pillar to look at khanak ans Romit )

Romit: stop yaar khanak... tumari ankhein bahar ajaengi

Khanak: thikh hai bolo...aab kya huwa (fold her hands across her

chest)

Shaan again " khanak bhi nah... kya bolo aabh woh apni puri

mahabarat sunaega ..." irritated

Romit narrate how he again had a little fight with Jaanvi on their phone conv

Flash back of Romit and Jaanvi conv

Jaanvi: hiii Jaanu...( smiling on the terrace )

Romit: hiii Jaanu ...( smiling too )

Jaanvi: suno nah ...

Romit: Bolo nah Jaanu...( on his rest his head on a backrest and pillow on his

lap )

Jaanvi: kaal mein kounsa dress pehnu woh Pink wali yah Blue wali ?

... (waiting for his reply )

Romit: mmm!!!!!!!!!!!!! ( thinking )... kuch bhi pehenlo

Jaanvi: Ahse kese kuch bhi pehenlo ... Jaanu please batao nah

Romit: thikh hai mmmhhh!!!!!!!!! Blue wali...( smiling )

Jaanvi: woh Pink wali kyu nai...( pout she love pink)

Romit: Blue wali pehenlo...( insist blue and started to argue )

Janvi: nahi pehle yeh batao pink wali kyu nahi

Romit: kyuki tum usme moti lagrahiho...( said without thinking )

Jaanvi: thikh hai...

Then jaanvi realize what Romit has just said and she continue

Jaanvi: What???????????????????? ...( open her mouth in shock )...Mein

tume moti lagrahihu ...( angrily )

Romit sat straight on his bed and tried to find words so to make her calm

Romit: woh mere kehne ka matlab woh nahi tha...woh mein...

Jaanvi: toh phir kya tha...aab toh tum mujse baat matkarna aur kisih

aur ladki ko dundo aur use engagement karlo ...mein tumeh moti

lagrahihu nah

Romit: Jaanu suno tho sahi ... mein yeh kehna nahi chah rahatha

He didn't complete to say and jaanvi cut the phone.

Romit : yeh kya kiya mein neh...jaanu gusa hogai...lekin mein bhi

bolnese pehle kyu nahi sochta

Present


Shaan who was hiding behind the pillar control his laugh and Khanak opened her

mouth in shock

Khanak: tumne uhse moti kaha... i don't believe tumne itna bara risk

liya aur kaal tumari angegment hai... aab tumari kher

nahi...Jaanu ke saath panga

Khanak start laughing and looked at Romit. Romit looked at her annoyed

Romit: khanak stop it yaar...woh toh mere muhse nikal gaya

Khanak: omgeee!!!!!!!!!! Romit tum neh ...ok...ok... (laugh

again) ach thikh hai ......( composed herself )

Now it was his time to ask Khanak why she was there

Romit: wese tum muje eek baat batao...tum yaha kya kar rahiho?

( looked at her )

Khanak : woh mein... mein... eseh hi yaha...ha woh muje neendh

nahi arahithi toh mein yaha agai

Romit: acha thikh lekin yaar...aab please meri kuch help kardo

Khanak: isme... mein tumari kese help karsakti hu?... ( looked at him )

Romit: Please yaar Jaanu koh bulawo na...please

Khanak: kya !!!!!!!!!!!! tum pagal hogae ho kya...iss waqt tumeh Jaanu se

milna hai no way agar kisi koh pata chala nah toh meri kher nahi

Romit: Khanak yaar!!!!!!!!!! please kuch karo...tum kesi dost ho meri...

( make a baby face )

Khanak: wese tum kuch bolnese pehle kuch sooch nahi sakhte...

Romit: please yaar...tumara yeh lecture mein baad meh

sunlunga...pehle meri help karo

Khanak: what lecture!!!!!!!!!!!! ...mein tumeh lecture deh rahihu...abh toh

mein tumari madad nahi karungi

Romit: khanak please yaar...ach thikh hai i m sorry... please jaanu koh

bulake lao...i promise jab tumein bhi Raj se eseh milna hoga mein

milaunga

(just said to see her reaction )

Khanak looked at him shocked and then to shaan who was behind the pillar

Khanak in her mind " Raj se milne no way..."

Shaan listen everything from behind the pillar and started to speak to himself irritated

" Iss Romit koh toh mein nahi chorunga...pehle yaha agaya disturb

karne aur yeh Raj ka topic ..."

Khanak: thikh hai baba...tum yahi rehna...mein abhi ati hu

( moved to her room )

Shaan : kya yaar!!!!!!!!! Saab mere hi piche kyu parehe...koi khanak se

thikh se milne hi nahi deta...mein saab koh dekhlunga

Shaan was very annoyed at the interruption and to himself " aur yeh Khanak pata

nahi kaha chaligai ."

Khanak went to wake up Jaanu but she didn't wake and told Khanak to sleep

Khanak was trapped so she couldn't go again to the terrace

Shaan and Romit were waiting eagerly for them, after sometime they left the place

annoyed

Next Morning

Khanak woke up with smile on her lips, she remember how shaan came to meet her

and took her to the terrace , she got a flash back of their kiss and blush with a smile,

Jaanvi woke up at the same time and saw Khanak grinning and blushing


Jaanvi: Khanak tum pagal hogai ho kya...ekeli ekeli kyu muskura

rahiho (looked at her )

Khanak was not responding and Jaanvi shake her

Jaanvi: Khanak mein tumse baat karhahihu...tum sunn rahiho nah

Khanak came to present


khanak: Haa... muje kya huwa hai ( sat straight looked at Jaanvi )

Jaanvi: toh phir tum akeli akeli kyu smile kar rahithi ...( raised her eye

brows in teasing way )

Khanak was trying to find something to say and then she said

Khanak: areh Jaanu ... woh haan Romit ...( looked at her smiling )

Jaanvi: uska toh tum naam maat lo mere samne... eek baar mere samne

toh aye uhse toh mein ...

Khanak cut her off and said " aab baas bhi karo ...chalo utho der horahihe

kitni tayari ya abhi baaki hai aur sham koh tumari sagai hai ."

Both freshen up, had their breakfast and start arranging Jaanvi's outfit and her

matching jeweler , both girls were having a great time, after sometime khanak

called Khandelwal house and Madhvi picked up the call

Madhvi: hello!!!!!!!!

Khanak: hello Maa... kesi ho aap...( smiling )

Madhvi: khanak !!!!!! mein thikh hu beta , tum baatao tum saab kese ho

aur ... waha paar sab tayari yah kese chalrahihe

Khanak: Maa yaha paar saab thikh hai...app log sham koh kitne baje taak

ajaenge

Madhvi and khanak talked for a while, khanak told her to send her phone with a

driver and end the call

Later in the afternoon khanak called shaan, shaan was very excited seeing her name

flash on his screen, he receive the call

Shaan: Khanak!!!!!!!!!!!!! Thank God tum wapas agai, mein abhi arahahu

gar paar ...( started to pack his stuff in the office )

Khanak: Shaan meri baat toh suno mein gar paar nahi hu, mein abhi bhi

Jaanu ke gar hu

Shaan: toh phir... tumara phone ...( disappointed sit back on his chair )

Khanak: woh mein neh Maa ko kaha driver keh saath bej neko

Shaan: acha thikh hai...tum wapas kaab ara hiho

Khanak: aaj sham sagai keh baad ...tum araheho nah sham koh

Shaan: offcourse sweetheart aur wese bhi aaj toh tume bolna hi parega woh

teen shaabd

Khanak in a teasing tone answered him " Dekhenge ."

Shaan: really !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! aab toh mein bhi dekhunga

Khanak: wese shaan office meh saab kaam kesa chalra hahi

Shaan: saab thikh hai yaha, wese Khanak tum kitni unromantic ho yaar

jaab dekho toh office ki baat, yah yuhi kuch na kuch kehti rehti ho, tum

mere jesi romantic nahi hosakti kya …..

Khanak: shaan please mazak choro na woh muje tumse kuch aur bhi baat

karni hai…. …

Shaan: haa bolo kya baat hai

Khanak: Shaan kya tumne Adda se baat ki……….

Shaan: Khanak mein baat karlunga , woh dad aaj thora busy hai isiye baat

nahi hopai tum pareshaan maat ho mein unse aaj sham koh baat

karlunga

Khanak: thikh hai mein phone rakhti hu

Shaan: khanak……….mujse baat karoh nah

Khanak: shaan woh Jaanu arahihe ………aut tum na office meh kaam par

dhyan doh... bye ……bye

Shaan: Khanak ……………… I love u and ...

Khanak end the call first, Jaanu was calling her and shaan got little irritated,

whenever he tried to talk to khanak people came and disturb him and now even on

phone call they don't let him talk properly .

Jaanu and khanak were in the room arranging clothes and other stuffs, after some

time Sudha came to their room

Sudha : areh tum dono abhi taak yaha kya karraheho , abh bahar chalo,

Jaanu tumari bua ayi hai

Jaanvi excitedly said " Bua ayihai ." Jaanvi and khanak came out of the room to

meet Jaanvi's bua

Jaanvi run to her bua and hugged her, khanak hug her too

Jaanvi: Bua aap akeli hi……………. Nidhi nahi ayi?

Nidhi is bua's daughter and she is Jaanu and Khanak friend too, whenever she come

to Jaavi's house, trio get well very nicely, they sometimes shop together, trio are

good friends

Bua jee ( Reva ) : nahi woh nahi ayi……….." with a sad face

Bua didn't complete her statement Jaanu interrupt her " Kya….??? Woh nahi ayi

uhse toh mein ………….."

Jaanvi was very angry and scolding Nidhi for not coming non stop

Jaanvi was about to call her and said " mein uhse abhi baat karti hua ………."

she didn't complete her words and someone from back closed her eyes

Jaanvi tried to removed that hand after few seconds she recognize who closed her

eyes

Jaanvi: Nidhi……………….. ( she was very happy )

Both sisters hugged and then Nidhi and Khanak hugged and Hi5, it was Nidhi and

khanak's plan to tease Jaanu, she looked at then angrily and run behind them

Jaanvi: tum dono koh toh aaj mein nahi chorungi ……….. ruko abhi maza

chakhathi hu ...( ran behind them )

Both sudha and Reva laugh at trio childish behaviour, they let trio had a good time,

and both move to see the last minutes preparations

Trio run after each other in Jaanu's room and then collapse on bed with a loud

laughter, and then trio had a group hugged

Sometime later after teasing and chit chat, trio came to the hall, the hall was

decorated very nicely and other servants were busy preparing other things

Reva and sudha were seated and talking, Jaanu , Khanak and Nidhi joined them

Reva: Bhabhi betiyaan kitni jaadi bari hojati hai...( smiling looking at Jaanvi )

Sudha: haa aur phir ekki din apne gaar chalijati hai...( emotional )

While saying all this sudha's eyes become watery

To lighten the situation Nidhi spoke " mein toh nahi jaungi aapni mom aur dad

koh chorke agar koi ladka muje dekhne ayega toh mein use kahungi gaar

jamai banneko kyu Khanak ."and wink at her

Sudha: Khanak koh kyu pooch rahihe woh bhi toh kuch dinome chalijaegi

aapne sarural Mandhvi koh chorkeh ...( looked at khanak )

Khanak become tensed and looked at them

Nidhi shouted " kya!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Khanak ki shaadi kaab aur kihse ."

Jaanu was looking at Khanak and her nervousness, only she knew the truth, she didn't

want to miss the chance to tease her with Nidhi

Jaanvi: haa ………….. Khanak ki shaadi Raj ke saath and hide her cheeky smile

Nidhi: Raj………………… yeah koun hai . she was very excited and happy for her

friend

Both teased her for sometime

Later

In Jaanvi 's room

Khanak and Nidhi make Jaanu ready, they did her makeup and hair

Nidhi was very excited about Khanak's shaadi she started to ask her about the guy

and at the same time they were too getting ready.

Nidhi: Khanak !!!!!!! tum toh bari chupi rustam nikli, shaadi karrahihe aur

hame bataya bhi nahi

Khanak: woh Nidhi………………………………

She didn't know what to say and Nidhi cut her off

Nidhi: wese Khanak ….. woh dikhne main kesa hai ." she said dreamily

Jaanu was ready watching them she spoke

Jaanu: Nidhi tum Khanak se kyu pooch rahiho... tum khud dekhlena Raj

koh

Jaanu stress the word Raaajjj!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And khanak's heart beats

raised fast

Jaanvi: woh bhi toh sagai meh ayega …………. Kyu Khanak

Khanak didn't answer and change the topic.

Khanak: wese Jaanu aaj tumari sagai hai toh tu meh Romit keh bareme

soch nah chahiye

Jaanvi: Romit !!!!!!!!!!!!!!! usko tum aaj ane don, chorungi nahi uhse

Nidhi: Hayeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Itna pyaar keh uhse chorna nahi chahti

( dreamily )

Khanak knew what Jaanvi mean by uhse nahi chorungi

Jaanvi started her chatter box again

Jaanvi: uska toh me ajj shalad banadungi anedo use

Nidhi: what shalad……………. Aab kya huwa tumloge keh bhich

Jaanvi told her about the call and both khanak and Nidhi laugh

Evening time

Guests started to arrive

Khanak was very happy at the thought of meeting Shaan and smile to herself

Nidhi notice her and said hayeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Lagta hai aaj love is in air

and hit her shoulder slightly on Khanak shoulder

Nidhi: Kya baat hai Khanak unke sapne dekhe jarahehe din mein and wink

at her

Khanak gave her a stern look

At Romit house

As it was decided Khandelwal wil be on Romit side,they decorate his house . Shaan

and Romit became friends after shaan misunderstanding cleared

In Romit room

Romit: so Shaan ... mein kesa lagharahu ( ready looking at shaan for

compliment )

Romit wore a nice sherwani and looked at himself in the mirror.

Shaan chuckle " wese waha jakar pata chalega keh tum kese lagoge ."

Romit: kya…………. Tumne kuch kaha kya shaan

Shaan: no dude ………… wese u are looking very nice!!!!!!!!!! Tumari

Jaanvi…. paka tumeh dekhkar dori chaliagi ." then to himself in low tone

" chapal le ke."

Romit : hope so dude ……………………. Kaal joh huwa uske baad……. And take a

sigh of relief

Shaan just spoke without thinking

Shaan: haa yaar tumhe use moti nahi kehna chahitha ……… and Romit

suddenly turn to him and looked at Shaan



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