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Posted: 12 years ago

Thank you so much to all who pressed like button 😊

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Here is part 21 enjoy and please ignore any grammatical error😊

Part 21

Sometime later Shaan thought I can't sleep without talking or meeting Khanak, so he

decided to go at Jaanvi's place to meet her

Shaan to himself " khanak mein arahahu tumse mile." Smiled to himself

Jaanvi and khanak were sleeping but khanak was tossing in bed, she wanted to talk to

Shaan

Shaan came back to his room take his car keys and drive to Jaanvi's house

Shaan on his way to Jaanvi's house in the car

Shaan: mein ja toh rahahu lekin mein khanak se milunga kese……gar toh

muje pata hai lekin adar kese jaunga itni raat koh

He was talking to himself to find the way of entering in Jaanvi's place

Shaan again " khanak koh bhi ha hi kehti thi mana nahi kar sakti Jaanvi koh

Saab ki shaadi hojaengi hamari reh jaegi agar hum ese speed peh chale toh

Shaan beta aabh yeh nahi chalega ."

Khanak at Janvi's house in the room

Khanak in her mind tossing in bed " muje shaan se baat karni parengi subha se

hamne baat nahi kih……. Lekin uska phone bhi toh nahi lagraahe " she

then looked at Jaanvi who slept beside her, she thought to take a land line phone to

call shaan but then drop the idea as Jaanvi stir in a little in her sleep

Khanak: shaan koh meri koi fikar hi nahi waha adda shaadi kih baat kar

rahehe aur shaan mujse baat bhi nahi kih .

Shaan reached his destination to meet khanak

Shaan: aabh mein pohach toh gaya……. lekin beta shaan adar kese jaoge

…..kuch soch shaan ……..aabh kya karu

Shaan: wah kya idea hai…………..lagta he yahi karna parega ………lekin room

kounsa hai

He looked at the house of 3 floor

Shaan: pehle charta hu baad mein dekha jaega……..shaan shuru hoja ………

abeh pyaar mein kya kya karna parta hai yaar…………khanak tuhme toh

mein ………….

He climbed through a pipe but didn't know in which room khanak was sleeping, he

moved into the house through balcony and slowly enter the room, he saw a man was

entering in the room from a door and he hide behind the curtain, the man switch on

the lights as he saw something odd while entering the room. Shaan was in Jaanvi's

parent room

Jaanvi's mom ( sudha): kya kar raheho jee, lights kyu on kih tni raat ko

……...( turn to her husband )

Jaanvi's dad : sudha muje lagta hai kamreme koi hai and move toward the

curtain where shaan was hided

Shaan listen to their conv, when he heard someone approaching him ,he closed his

eyes

Shaan to himself slowly " shaan aaj tumari shamat anewali hai."

Sudha: lagta hai apne phir se pee hai itni raat ko koun asakta tah hai

hamare kamreme, sojaiye aap aur muje bhi sone de kaal subha jaldi

uthna hai kitni sari tayariya baki hai

Jaanvi's father listened to his wife, turn before he reached the curtain, he switch off

the lights and lay next to her wife

Shaan was still behind the curtain , relaxed himself and opened his eyes and said

" Thank God lagta hai aaj mein pitne wala hu."

After few minutes latter shaan, slowly looked from the curtain and saw they were

sleeping, he tried to move toward the door but again hide behind the curtain as

Jaanvi's father again speak to his wife and switch on the lights

Sudha: kya kaar raheho jee aabh kya huwa ." in irritated voice, she was tried

due to engagement preparation and now her husband is playing with light at this odd

time

Jaanvi's father : sudha mein keh rahahu karrenme koi hai

Sudha wake up, sat on the bed scan the room but couldn't spot anyone

Sudha : koi bhi toh nahi hai yaha, aab aap sojaiye …( annoyed )

Janvi's dad woke up and sits on bed

Sudha: aabh kya huwa

Jaanvi's dad: wash room jarahahu mein……..kya mein waha bhi nahi jah

sakta

Sudha: thikh hai lekin lights on mat karna….muje neendh arahihe

Jaanvi;s father woke up and move toward washroom but this time the lights were off

Shaan got the chance and came out of the room and said " bach gaya lagta hai aaj

mera bad luck hai , pehle khanak se baat nahi hui subha se aur abhi pitne

wala tha mein , khanak tum kaha ho." Shaan with light steps move more into

the house and spot another room.

Shaan : lagta hai khanak iss room mein hogi then he said " nahi agar yaha

bhi nahi hui toh, aab mein kya karu , risk toh lena parega, pehle andhar

toh jaa shaan baad meh jobhi hoga dekha jaega ." before he move in the room

he heard footsteps and hide behind the pillar. Someone wake up to drink water in the

kitchen, shaan got irritated and to himself " yeh gar hai ya bhoot bagla koi soh

hi nahi raha sab raat koh tehel te hain kya ." after some time, when he saw the

way was clear he move toward the door, it was open after Jaanvi finished her phone

call few hours back she came to her room and forget to close the door

Shaan enter the room in light steps, the window was slightly opened and moon light

was reflecting in the room, he saw khanak was sleeping beside Jaanvi

Shaan relaxed seeing khanak and said " ise dekho yaha meri jaan jah rahihe aur

yeh aramse sorahihe, ise toh ……… ." he didn't complete his sentence and

started

admiring khanak sleeping form, how beautiful she looks, her hair curls on her face

and

sleeping like a baby, shaan slowly move toward her and looked at her again

Khanak stir in her sleep and slightly opened her eyes, she saw someone looking at her

and she opened her mouth to shout but shaan closed before she alter anything, his

palm resting on her soft lips, khanak trembled at his touch

Shaan: Khanak meh hu kyu chila rahiho …..( slowly)

Khanak looked at him in shock and thought am I dreaming?

Shaan: khanak…!!!!!!!!!!!! aab kya huwa bolti kyu band hogai tumari

Shaan forget his palm was still on her lips and looked at Khanak

Khanak tried to say something but couldn't due to his hand on her mouth

Khanak: mmhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!

Shaan: kya ??? bolo nah mmhhh!!!! Kya kar rahiho

Khanak gesture with her eyes and shaan saw his palm on her mouth

Shaan: ohhh!!!! Sorry woh mein….." and remove his palm from her mouth

Khanak release her breathe, sat on the bed and first looked at Jaanvi who was fast

asleep smiling in her sleep khaank thought " Romit ke sapne ne hongi ." and shake

her head and then looked at shaan

Khanak: shaan tum yaha kya kar raheho aur woh bhi itni der raat koh..

Shaan: wah!!!!!!! ekto mein intni der yaha aya risk leke aur tum ho keh

sawal pe sawal puche jara hiho

Khanak: lekin tum yaha kya kar raheho ….( looked at Janvi and then shaan )

Shaan: mein yaha itni raat koh tumare saath antakshari khelne

ayahu…..abh shuru hojao khelne kehliye " in irritated tone

Khanak looked at him and said Kya ?

Shaan again got annoyed and told her to follow him

Shaan: chalo mere saath

Khanak: shaan iswaqt kaha jana hai ……… agar Janvi uth gayi toh

Shaan: soh rahihe woh……….aur dekho kitna musku rarahihe

Khanak was about to wake up from the bed but her hand was caught by Jaanvi

Khanak become shocked at sudden tug on her wrist

Janvi was dreaming " Romit matjao nah………"

Shaan and Khanak looked at her, Khanak tried to remove her hand from her grip but

Janvi holds her hand very tight

Shaan was very annoyed and told Khanak to move her hand from Janvi's grip

Shaan: khanak uska derese hath hatao……..( irritated )

Khanak: shaan kese karu mein inti tight se pakra ha

When khanak was struggling to remove her hand Janvi wake up and saw khanak

siting on the bed, Jaanvi was in sleepy form so she didn't saw shaan as khanak was

blocking her, shaan ran behind the curtain and hide there frustrated

Shaan to himself " are yaar yeh saab mere pyaar ke dushman kyu baan

rahehe koi kyu Khanak se milne nahi de raha."

Jaanvi: kya huwa Khanak tum so kyu nahi rahi still in sleepy tone and move

her hand from khanak's wrist

Khanak: nahi woh mein baas pani pene uthi thi and laid again on bed

Shaan was throwing glances from behind the curtain and gesture khanak to wake up

from the bed

Khanak was looking at shaan and then at Jaanvi

She saw Jaanvi was sleeping and thought " abhi yeh nahi uthegi ." and slowly

wake up and move toward shaan

Shaan and khanak moved out of the room and both moved to the terrace, they

reached the terrace and looked at each other said " thank God ."and started

laughing, they composed themselves and looked at each other again lovingly

Shaan put khanak curled around her ear and caresses her cheeks and said " I missed

u khanak, i missed u so much ." Khanak hugged shaan, her head was on shaan's

chest and hands around his waist

Khanak: Shaan mein neh bhi tumhe bahut miss kiya ………..( hold him tight )

Shaan still hugging Khanak and said " dekha mene keh tumne muje kitna

missed kiya subha se kitni baar tumeh phone kiya aur tumne eek baar

bhi nahi uthaya ."

Khanak: acha jab mein phone kiya toh tumne bhi toh mera phone nahi

uthaya , tumih mujse baat nahi karna chahte teh aur keh raheho muje

miss kiya ." and she detached from the hug and both start arguing like a kids

Shaan: ohhh Madam!!!!!!!! Kaal raat se mein tumse baat karna chahtata

lekin tumne toh mera phone cut kardiya aur tumari wajase muje woh

arggghhh!!!!!!!!!!!! Kaara pina parra

Khanak started giggling and smile spread on her lips seeing shaan making a face when

he said about kaara

Shaan : aur hasu meri halat par tume pata nahi aaj tumari wajase mein

pitne wala tha

Khanak start laughing seeing his face when he narrate how he climb through a pipe

and land in wrong room, khanak start laughing more and she couldn't control herself,

shaan got annoyed and pull khanak to give her a hard kiss on her delicate lips, shaan

kissed her deeply, khanak struggle to move at first but then she too respond to his

kiss, they both kissed very passionately and the cool breeze hit then, khanak's hair on

shaan's face. Shaan deepen the kiss khanak moan and hold his hair at his nape and

caresses them, shaan too hold her face to give more pressure on her lips. Kiss became

hot as they won't leave each other and telling how much they missed each other very

much , they broke the kiss to catch their breath and both started breathing hardly.

Still breathing hard, they both said how they missed each other so much and hugged

tightly no space for air, they stayed in each other's arm for some time.

Khanak was still hugging shaan and said

Khanak: Shaan

Shaan: mmmhhh!!!!!!!!

Khanak: aaj joh Adda nei kaha woh, shaadi keh bareme, muje bohut dar lag

rahahe ………..aab hum kya karenge

Shaan detached her slightly from him, cupped her face and spoke

Shaan: Khanak mein esa kuch bhi hone nahi dunga , mein dad se baat

karunga aur hamare bareme saab kuch batadunga, thikh hai

Khanak hugged him again and they both started talking

Shaan: Khanak tum yaha Jaanvi keh gaar kya kar rahahiho

Khanak: woh kaal Jaanu ki engagement hai na toh, woh chahti hai ke mein

uske saath rahu ……..( closed her eyes still in shaan's arm )

Shaan: mmhhh!!!!!!!!!

Shaan: Khanak bolo na

Khanak: kya ?...( eyes closed enjoy to be in his warm ambience )

Shaan: I LOVE U ……………………( squeeze her for more closeness and hold her tight )

Khanak: mmhhh!!!!!!!!!!!! ( tried feeling sleepy so eyes were closed )

Shaan: kya mmmhhh!!!!!!!!!, bolo nah Khanak

Khanak: muje neendh arahihe shaan ……

Shaan: khanak this is not fair…………. mene toh kaha abb tumari bari

Khanak: nahi abhi nahi……………

Shaan: come on sweetheart, eek baar kaho na

Khanak: thikh hai, I ... LOVE...

Khanak didn't complete her words and heard something fall, she pose for a second

Khanak: yeh kya tha……( open her eyes at the disturbance )

Shaan: kya sweetheart

both detached from the hug and looked into each other's eyes

Shaan: kya yaar aab koun hai…………. he said in annoyed tone

Khanak: shaan please tum jao yaha se ……………and looked around

Shaan: mein kyu jao aur pehle tum bolo……………. ( looked at her )

Khanak: shaan please jao nah………..( looked into his eyes too )

They heard footsteps approaching then khanak pushed shaan and he hide behind the

pillar

Khanak saw someone coming near her, first she was scared but then see the face .

Please press the like button and feel free to comment😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
Aww supr cute update heer...😃
loved it...
lol shaan climbed up holding the pipe and galat room mein land kiya😆
lol jaanvi's father was tooo sharp...he suspected that someone is in the room...
lol could imagine shaan's face if he was caught...😆
the kiss is passionate and hot heer...😳 they really missed each other very much...😃
waiting for the next update...😃

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Posted: 12 years ago
oooh heer I love how u write man ur acfually reallly goood mashallah loool,
anyways loved the update.. the kisss haha x
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh my my the kiss was sooo hot and passionate
😆 seriously ek minute ke liye toh laga ki jaise aaj shan toh gaya but thank god aisa kuch nahi hua but it seems ke terrace pe hoga
update next soon :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome!!! 👏 It was hilarious!!!😆 too good!!!👏

Poor Shaan ended up first in Jaanvi's parent's room... He needs to thank her mom for saving him from getting caught..😆 Really thought he'll be caught in the1st time.. it was too close..😆

Loved how he kept his palm on her lips..😳 and he was asking her to talk with that..😆awww!!! reminded of RBO Kuch Khas morning scene..😃 one of my favorite scene..😳

How Shaan was able to joke even in this situation!!! 😆 that antakshari line is so funny..👏Jaanvi is in her dreamland dreaming abt Romit..😳

Awww!!! The kiss..☺️ very hot!!!😳 Good, Shaan finally decided to talk to Sunil abt their love..😊they all will be so ecstatic!!!😃

Shaan is so eager to hear those three words from Khanak 😳 but again some disturbance..😡

Is it Romit???😕

Looking forward and thanks for writing..😊

Edited by poo_j - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved it kats😉
hilarious🤣 Shaan entered a wrong room😆 bechara..
pipe chadne ka scene se, mera wala yaad agaya😆
haaye the kiss😳 steaming hot!!
abb kaun aa gaya?? don't tell me that Raj agaya😆 kidding...
waiting for next one..update soon😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely update
finally romeo pipe pe charh gaya
seriously sab inhe k peechay par gaye hain
loved the shanak lik conv and romance
she is always sleepy when it cums to say i love you
i guess that sound of coz romit was there trying to meet jaanvi
super cute update
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
lol Pyr mE kya kya nhi karna pad rha bechare shan ko...waiting for next n sorry for LATE CoMMEnts...-saroj
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Posted: 12 years ago
WOW HEER UPDATE WAS JUST ASWOME AND SHANAK KISS WAS SO HOT YARR AND ERILY WATING FOR NEXT PART
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey

awesome

poor shaan , bechara kya kya kiya aur karega pyaar mein, lol
pahle pipe aur phir galat room mein ghus gaya, hehehe

loved it

then mil gaya sahi room but jhanvi ne haath he nai choda uski khanak ka ,

after few minutes they suceed in escaping and then hot hot romance and kiss *blush blush *

oh ho itne wrong time pe kaun aa gaya ? Ronit ? Raj ?

Waiting for next

update soon

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