FF Pyaar - part 37 page 109 ( 24/09

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Mounika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#491

😃Lovely update heer...😃 Supeb it is...

lol shaan eneterd into jaanvi's parents room 😆

now who have disturbed them again on the terrace😕

waiting for the next part.

update soon...

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priyani143

@priyani143

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Posted: 12 years ago

#492

part 20

wow!!! amazing update Heer👏

Khanak said kaun Shaan??🤣omg!!! & he reminded her saying about their kiss🤣...lovely.👏

he insisted her to say I love u & she did, but mujhe toh jo terrace pe hua uska recap dekhna tha😔😆.

he was angry as she didn't talk to him properly & thats why ignored her in the morning.

omg!!!! kya bahana banaya Shaan ne. Akshay & his convo was so funny. 🤣🤣because of her he had to drink the kara 2 times🤣, bechara Shaan.🤣

yeh kya again misunderstandings😲!!!!!! dono bilkul Burthal hai yar.😆

Shaan is going to meet Khanak at Jaanu's house...lagta hai pitega yeh ladka😆...

part 21

hilarious update Heer...cant stop laughing🤣🤣

so he went to meet her. I agree with Shaan, sabki shaadi ho jayegi Shanak ki shaadi rahe jayegi.😡

omg!!! he climbed the pipe & but entered in the wrong room that too into Jaanu's parent's room🤣🤣🤣. aj toh Shaan definitely pitney wala hai.🤣

but because of Jaanu's mom bechara bach gaya.😆

" yeh gar hai ya bhoot bagla koi soh

hi nahi raha sab raat koh tehel te hain kya ."superb dialogues yar,👏 hats off to you.⭐️

finally Khanak milgayi ussey. 😃he placed his palm on her mouth & was asking him to say something🤣...cuteee.😃

omg!! Jaanu held Khanak's hand thinking it was Romit.🤣

I always skip a beat when they go to terrace😉😳... haye the kiss was so passionate & so so hot☺️☺️. they really missed each other yar.

chalo, now he will talk to Sunil..good.😊

khanak was about to say I love u but someone came...who is that kabab mein haddi???😡😡

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Heer

@heer_85

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Posted: 12 years ago

#493

Originally posted by: maneesha28889
Aww supr cute update heer...😃
loved it...
lol shaan climbed up holding the pipe and galat room mein land kiya😆
lol jaanvi's father was tooo sharp...he suspected that someone is in the room...
lol could imagine shaan's face if he was caught...😆
the kiss is passionate and hot heer...😳 they really missed each other very much...😃
waiting for the next update...😃

Thanx Maneesh 😊 shaan was despo to meet his sweetheart so kya kya karna parta hai pyaar meh and climbed through pipe but land in wrong room 😆 thanx for saying the kiss was hot n too surprise how i write such kisses 😉😳

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Heer

@heer_85

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Posted: 12 years ago

#494

Originally posted by: aasma1
oooh heer I love how u write man ur acfually reallly goood mashallah loool,
anyways loved the update.. the kisss haha x

Thanx for commenting Aasma and for loving my writing 😊

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Heer

@heer_85

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Posted: 12 years ago

#495

Originally posted by: jaisyjazz
oh my my the kiss was sooo hot and passionate
😆 seriously ek minute ke liye toh laga ki jaise aaj shan toh gaya but thank god aisa kuch nahi hua but it seems ke terrace pe hoga
update next soon :)

Thanx Jaisy 😊 was that really hot omgeee!!!!!!!!😳 thanx yaar shanak our terrace n if no kiss update will be khali khali 😉😉 will try to update soon as exams are next week need to prepare exams papers

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Heer

@heer_85

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Posted: 12 years ago

#496

Originally posted by: poo_j
Awesome!!! 👏 It was hilarious!!!😆 too good!!!👏

Poor Shaan ended up first in Jaanvi's parent's room... He needs to thank her mom for saving him from getting caught..😆 Really thought he'll be caught in the1st time.. it was too close..😆

Loved how he kept his palm on her lips..😳 and he was asking her to talk with that..😆awww!!! reminded of RBO Kuch Khas morning scene..😃 one of my favorite scene..😳

How Shaan was able to joke even in this situation!!! 😆 that antakshari line is so funny..👏Jaanvi is in her dreamland dreaming abt Romit..😳

Awww!!! The kiss..☺️ very hot!!!😳 Good, Shaan finally decided to talk to Sunil abt their love..😊they all will be so ecstatic!!!😃

Shaan is so eager to hear those three words from Khanak 😳 but again some disturbance..😡

Is it Romit???😕

Looking forward and thanks for writing..😊

Thanx Poo for a long comment 😊 i was cracking my self while writing the whole part , yes u r right he needs to thank Sudha jee for saving him, burthali is asking her to speak while his hands rest on her lips, thanx to say kiss was hawt!!!!!!!!!!!!😳 but the question is will be get chance to talk 😆

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Heer

@heer_85

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Posted: 12 years ago

#497

Originally posted by: chandu8881
loved it kats😉
hilarious🤣 Shaan entered a wrong room😆 bechara..
pipe chadne ka scene se, mera wala yaad agaya😆
haaye the kiss😳 steaming hot!!
abb kaun aa gaya?? don't tell me that Raj agaya😆 kidding...
waiting for next one..update soon😊

Thanx Chand 😊 yeah bechara khanak keh pyaar mein pipe chargaya kya kya karna partahai pyaar mein wow!!!!!!!! steaming kiss that's for that 😉

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Heer

@heer_85

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Posted: 12 years ago

#498

Originally posted by: IF_rida
lovely update
finally romeo pipe pe charh gaya
seriously sab inhe k peechay par gaye hain
loved the shanak lik conv and romance
she is always sleepy when it cums to say i love you
i guess that sound of coz romit was there trying to meet jaanvi
super cute update
continue soon

Thanx Rida 😊 ha Romeo neh pipe ka sahara liya apni Juliet seh milne keliya 😆 but land in wrong room poor him yeah she's always sleepy when coming to say I LOVE U 😆