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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey people😃
will be posting a part tonight...hoping it to make as funny as possible..as usually with a touch of cuteness in it😉 what say??
Sorry for disappearing suddenly, had to rum for the whole two weeks, at the end of the day i was🤢
whoever missed it, will get a regular updates from now😉 if your bored, and if you want me to end it, im ready to wrap it up in 5 updates..choice is completely urs...
Thanks a lot for liking my story and commenting, and yes thanks for the wishes too😃

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Posted: 12 years ago

chanduuu where were uuu😡

my dhamki is still on🤣dnt dare to end...

god missed u sooo muchhh😭

i want superlong shanakalicious updateee

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: snigdhanagar

chanduuu where were uuu😡

my dhamki is still on🤣dnt dare to end...

god missed u sooo muchhh😭

i want superlong shanakalicious updateee



arrey!! i had my exams baba, missed you too😳
shanakalicious toh hain, lekin lamba yeh ki nahi, tum batade na 😆
Edited by chandu8881 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hello😃
Thank you once again for all of you for liking my story, im gratified😊
Sorry for being late...

Part 79

Shaan is walking along the corridors of hospital, talking to his bhaiyya…

Shaan: bhaiyya aap sun rahe hai na???

Akshay: haan sun raha hun Shaan!! Waise Khanak has got some point!! (pouring in his file)

Shaan: bhaiyya!! (shreiks) main aapse pichle dus minute se wahi toh keh raha hun ki, I want her like as she was for me intitially!! (frustrated whisper)

Akshay: Shaan think about it, agar wohi pehli ki tarah Khanak rahi na, then who knows, tumhare saath waapis aane ke baad bhi, phirse bhaag gayi toh?? (Shaan stops in his tracks)

Shaan: bhaiyya you're being pointless, main aise hone thodi na doonga…

Akshay: wahi Shaan!! She doesn't want you to burden up, she doesn't want to land once again where she's now….(Shaan has got all ears)

Akshay: she loves you, you know that…but she's trying hard this time, so that she could be perfect for you!!

Shaan: how by going on silent mode??? By not being herself?? Tell me onething bhaiyya, do you expect bhabhi to change?? I mean, jaise aap chahthe ho??

Akshay: hell no!! (suddenly attentive)

Shaan: then even from my side, its hell no!!! waise aapko kaise pata, that she's trying this for me?? I mean main toh sirf yeh kaha thi ki, she wants to change…

Akshay: who aaj subah, Khanak ne Khushboo ko call kiya tha…(sheepish) I think that day was bad…

Shaan: which one??

Akshay: the day she left us!! May be at that time she needed some guidance, agar uss din usko kisine samajha diya ho tha na, she wouldn't have taken that step…

Shaan: hmm…Bhaiyya, abb batau, how do I convince her?? She doesn't have to change an ounce for me, I did talk to her, but she's adamant, she's not ready to listen…

Akshay: just like you!! (chuckles)

Shaan: very funny!! (not at all smiling) abb aap kuch bolenge bhi…

Akshay: arrey yaar mujhe kya pata..tum toh aise bhol rahe ho jaise mujhe iss main experience hain…and waise bhi you know her better than me..

At that moment, Sunil enters Akshay's cabin, Akshay smiles at his father, puts his phone on loud speaker, Sunil looks on..

Shaan: bhaiyya stop ragging me, this isn't helping me…(shouts into the phone)

Both the Khandelwal's chuckle…

Sunil: shaan beta seekh lo abb, patniyan toh aise hi hothe hain…

Shaan: dad!! Aap bhi…

Sunil: achcha abb problem kya hain??

Shaan and Aksahy explains the whole thing….

Sunil: hmm…ek kaam kart u uski tarah ban ja…

Shaan: matlab?? (even Akshay wants to know)

Sunil: I mean, if she wants to be the serious one, then u become the opposite!!

Shaan: you think it'll work???

Sunil: of course!! (smiles and pulls his collar up, Akshay gives a mocking look at his dad)

Shaan: kya baat hain dad!! Not bad ha….ok fine abb main jaa raha hun, thanks dad!! (smiles and cuts off the call)

Sunil and Akshay, says Bye to beep tone, and smiles conspiratorily…

Khanak comes back to home, today a tad bit early, as she had nothing to do, and extremely exhausted as she didn't sleep properly last night, Nikhil's (whom Shaan is treating) case was beating her, chemos were helping to keep him stable, but still the situation was becoming the worser each day, he was a great kid, Khanak enters the hall, and is shocked at the sight….

Nisha and Aayush are having pillow fight, Shaan too has joined them, Shaan is in vest and his tracks in front of Nisha, this is shocking for Khanak…All three of them are enjoying to the best, Khanak is surprised seeing Shaan freely laughing, but this does bring smile on her face. She leans on the wall and watches him…

Shantanu Khandelwal, is laughing in front of other girl, she doesn't remember him like he is now, he didn't even speak much with misha, nor any girl in that matter, but he's enjoying Nisha's company, realizing that she smiles still more…

Aayush sees his mom…

Aayush: Mom!! (exclaims, Aayush is in Shaan's arms, Shaan looks at her, even Nisha..)

Nisha: arrey waah aaj aap jaldi aagayi…(Khanak smiles at Nisha, looks at Shaan, Shaan slowly releases Aayush, she smiles genuinely at him, but he's brimming)

Well that smile from him, confuses her, she frowns looking at him…

Nisha: ok Aayush!! Break time…

Aayush: haan mujhe bhi.. (crashes on the sofa)

Shaan focuses on his work, his agenda to irritate her..

Shaan: arrey itni jadi tak gaye, aisa nahi chalega (bends down and picks up Aayush…)

Aayush laughs and screams, Nisha laughs looking at the duo…Shaan is tickling Aayush, Khanak sits on the sofa, tired, meanwhile Nisha's phone ring, she excuses herself….

Shaan with Aayush lands next to Khanak, too close, his body brushing hers. She's hot and bothered, Shaan doesn't notices that, Shaan and Aayush continue to play…Nisha enters back, Shaan continue's to remain in the same position, now he knows that Khanak is disturbed by the sudden intimacy…

Nisha: sorry guys aaj main aap logon ke saath dinner nahi kar paungi, im going out with my old friends..

Khanak: kyun??

Nisha: arrey jabse aap aaye ho na, main un logon ke saath bahar ja rahi hun, aate aate late ho jaongi, don't worry, who doosra wala key hain na, who main leke jaane waali hun…

Khanak: aur kuch??

Nisha: nahi bas hogaya…(she beams and leaves)

Khanak shakes her head, looks at the duo sitting next to her…

Aayush: papa, kal Sunday hai na, kya hum kal bahar ja sakthe hain??

Shaan: ofcourse jaayenge na…

Khanak is surprised hearing it, Shaan aur who bhi bahar goomne ke liye, itni jaldi maangaye, not bad!! She thought in her mind..

She got up from her place, but she can't move more forwards, as her dupatta is held by Shaan… She turns around amused.

Shaan: aap kahan jaa rahi ho?? (grinning, Aayush on his lap, is also grinning)

Khanak: what do you mean by that?? (slowly) He leaves her dupatta, Aayush stands up and even Shaan does….Aayush runs to room to get his PSP

Shaan: (moves closer and stands in front) Khanak, abb baat karne main kya problem hain, chalo aaj saath main dinner banate hain…

Khanak: ok Shaan…pehle main fresh ho jao…

Shaan looks like as though he's confused, Khanak steps more closer to him, he inhales deeply..

Khanak: don't you think I smell of blood, dettol..much more like as though im in a hospital…(softly as she approaches him)

Shaan waits…

Khanak: u see, I've got a good looking husband, I've to keep the pace right?? Agar kissi aur ke saath chala gaya to…

He brings his right hand, carreses her cheek, both are looking deeply at each other…

Shaan: you don't have to do anything you just top my list, I love you more than myself…

Khanak smiles, he does to, he leans more and kisses her on her forehead, she closes her eyes, he looks down at her, she has her hands clutched on to his vest, both of them breathing audibly…

Aayush: mom!! (calls her from the room)

Both of them steps back, Khanak goes into the other room, while Shaan goes to Aayush..

Aayush had started to feel the cold climate, he wanted his cold clothes, but Shaan is not feeling cold..

Shaan looks into the bag which he had packed for them, thank god, Dadi had told him to keep those clothes, if not, then Khanak would have made Shaan run at this time and get clothes for Aayush…The thought made him chuckle…

Aayush: papa aap has kyun rahe ho??

Shaan: kuch nahi aap yeh pehno, main aapki mom ko dekhkhar aata hun..(winks at his son)

Aayush giggles seeing that..

Aayush: aur main apne Ben10 ko..(showing his teeth)

Shaan smiles, and pats his head and leaves….

Shaan sees the door of the other room opened, slowly peeps in, nope! She's not there..he hears the water running in kitchen, goes in, there she is…Busy doing her own work, Shaan smiles…

Shaan kya kar raha hain, u have to let her know that, her decision is wrong, and she's just perfect for him..haan par, use action lane main hum wait toh kar hi sakthe hain, as you see madam is in romantic mood…Speaks to himself and grins…

Shaan moves towards her, she very well knows that he's behind her, she smiles and starts to remove the dabbas from the shelves…

Shaan: Khanak ur tired right??

Khanak: haan!! Lekin kya kare, khaana toh banana hai na…(answers as she turns towards him to look at him)

Shaan: haan toh teek hai na, main kardunga na..(declares proudly)

Khanak: seriously?? (mocks)

Shaan: kyun nahi, tum hato toh sahi….(tries to shove her off)

Khanak: shaan aaj nahi, kisi aur din..(gets the dabba of atta)

Shaan: arrey main keh raha hun na…abb hato…

Khanak doesn't speak but she doesn't budge, Shaan looks around, sees the empty counter just next, without any further ado, he smiles to himself, and then in the next moment he liftes her off the ground and places her on the counter, she's shocked, he's grinning, his hands are still on her waiste…

Khanak: Shaan what was that? (slaps his hands, which is on her waiste)

Shaan simply shrugs…

Shaan: abb, you're going to give instructions and im going to make…

Khanak: how sweet!! (smiles sweetly)

Shaan: haay haaye…(places his hand on his heart and smiles widely)

Khanak: abb khana banao..(shouts in front of his face)

Shaan closes his eyes..

Shaan: (opens his eyes) teek hain!! (yells back)

Khanak: pehle who atta vala dabba kholo..

Shaan listens and opens it, she instructs him how much he should take, he takes it furiously and puts it on a larger plate. At that moment, atta flew into his eyes, his closed his eyes tightly…Khanak giggles seeing that…

Shaan: Khanak!! Tumhe hasi aa rahi hain, sachchi main aankhon main chali gayi hain yaar..(eyes still closed)

Khanak: aww…idhar aao..

Shaan: kidhar..(he stretches his hand)

Khanak gets hold of his hand, pulls him near her, her legs beside him, he in between her legs…

Please comment😊
ok it might be not that funny, but cute zaroor hain😆😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
awww ofcourse cute hain infact very cute 😃
i loved dad's suggestion it will surely work
i loved khanak's romantic mood aye haye i love her like this and shan woh toh mauke ka fayda uthana kabhi nahi chodta
thanks for this cute and long update :)
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

glad to see u baq!!!!!!!!!!!

cute update..khank is in romantic mood😳 loved dad sugession...

lovely update n nw nxt part soon...n lenth was ok😆

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Posted: 12 years ago
awww loved it chandu
hoipefully shanak will get back together and go to their family.
i loved how khanak rang khusboo before she left and asked for advice..
missed u chandu, glad ur back
xxx <3 <3 <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
super cute hai
like the conv between akhsay shaan ans sunil
:main aise thodi an hoone dunga"... hayeee
prefect advice hai... he needs to be like her if she is trying to be like him.., opposites attract and this will tell them that they are perfect as they are and perfect for each other
hmm quite surprising that he was so much at ease infront of misha but that worked
finally she is talking and was in a romantic food
em happy that she didn't jerk him off and romeo is not goin to leave a single chance
lukin fwd to the dinner
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow u r back...
super cute update...
loved it...😃

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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow!!!👏Superb!!!Loved it..Sunil gave a perfect idea to Shaan..👏 Khanak can see the changes in Shaan's behavior..😳 But must say love this Shaan too..carefree and having fun and all..😊 Though he was like this before but with Khanak alone..😳She is gonna feel possessive soon if he continues to behave like this..😉
Looking forward and thanks for writing a cute update..😊

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