RAABTA-Part 96 on page 148 on 9/3

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jaisyjazz

@jaisyjazz

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#841

awesome!!!

and let me tell u that u did very much justice to my request 😃 actually i wrote it just like that but u took it seriously and fulfilled it thank u so much :)

ahhh haa toh ayush is back to being nautanki i loved father -son's plan or dont know if its a plan and ayush is really very angry by his mother but enjoying this very much

i loved how he pulled her into room and the hug was so emotional shan's breaking down infront of her and hugging her was very emotions se bhara hua i loved that

now waiting for next :)

ok will wait for sunday or monday update

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Maneesha Reddy

@Maneesha_Shanak

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#842

Lovely update chandu :)

Awesome writing👏 superb...i liked your way of presenting aayush infront of khanak...

shaan is trying hard to win her back...

Aayush is so cute...aww am loving him even more!!!!!

poor shaan he outburst his emotions by hugging khanak tightly...

loving this track completely!!!!

waiting for the next part...

update soon...😃

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Heer

@heer_85

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#843

👏after so long had a grin on ma face 😃 thank u for a wonderful update

dil khush hogaya Chand 😊

Aayush caught a cold and refuse to take tablets love the way shaan make his entry and told him to take a tablet

aww!!!!!!!!! Aayush pout first but then hurried up to pack and order shaan too 😆 as they are going to meet DR Khanak Khandelwal

they reached and 👏 nice u make shaan pull her i knew it it must be shaan aww!!!!!!!!! poor guys broke down infront of her and khanak hug him as she missed him to as he missed her

but yeh kya khanak broke the hug and move out the room

Dr Karla's room part was awesome Aayush is der n doctor examine him khanak is worried and then shaan joined him 😊

Awww!!!!!!!!!!! how sweet i love the way Aayush didn look at her mother n khanak just looked at him n want to hear his voice

shaan hehehehh he just stared khanak to see her expression too good yaar i love it

Aayush is eating ice cream n khanak snatch th bowlhow sweetly he shout n call his dad

khanak said u hv cold n eating ice cream and what he said was awesome

now shaan n Aayush are on mission get back home Dr Khanak Khandelwal love it

next update on Sunday or Monday 😭

koi baat nahi wil wait😊

want to know the next step of Shaan n Ayush

Edited by heer_85 - 12 years ago

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SJ6...

@SJ6...

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#844

wooow chandu fabuloys update, funny and cute..
babe I might not be frequent with my updates because ive got sooo much work to fo but I will try and defo read... x

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poo_j

@poo_j

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#845

Wow!!! 😊Awesome!!! 👏Absolutely loved it!!!😃

Awww!!! Aayush is not well ..:( You ve penned beautifully the points on separation..👏true!!! His stubbornness of not having the tablets didn't stand in front of Shaan's love..😊 but loved how he said ,what is the use of taking tablets when the cold anyways gonna be there for six days even after taking medicines..😆cute!!!

How Aayush is so happy hearing his mom's name..😊he is so excited to see Khanak!!!😃 Its so hard for him to be without her..😭 its commendable how he managed everything without her..👏

Awww!!! Shaan and his method of giving surprise to Khanak..😳 cool!!!😳 for a moment ShaNak forgot everything..😉 when she realized that Shaan is actually there and she needs to put a distance away she walked out on him.. Poor Shaan..😭

Awww!!! Aayush is ignoring her and both Shaan and him putting an act that they don't know her in front of Kalra..😉superb!!! 😊nice twist!!! 👏its gonna be fun..😆

Ha..Ha..Shaan bought Aayush ice-cream..LOL😆 they know very well how to infuriate Khanak!!!😆

Looking forward and thanks for writing a superb update..😊

Edited by poo_j - 12 years ago

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monika_aa

@monika_aa

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#846

loved shanak reunion !!!!!

lovely update...aayush is so cute...

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IF_rida

@IF_rida

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#847

simply awesome... i loved it loved it loved it
i guess its better that shaan went back coz having ayush with him is a plus point
i like the duo as always... shaan and ayush together are super cute
the lil conv abt not medicine was cute and wht followe after that was lovely
the way shaan teased him and the next sec aysuh was out of bed
and now they are in dehradun
hayee i was waiting for the shanak moments... the highlight of the update
penned beautifully that he whispered that he misses her and he cried and she could feel the wetness and they both were lost... hayee ye cell fone kis ne bana diya
ayush was ignoring khanak it found it cute
shaan sahi training de k laya hai
and khanak has to be furious ... he was having ice cream when he is not well
i loved it when i read they both were angry and shaan put his hands up being defensive
it was super duper cute update
lukin fwd to more cute moments... em luvin it
update soon

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ktymfan

@ktymfan

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#848

hey, its interesting...aayush z ignoring her to get her back in dere life! wow...waiting for dere next antics...-saroj

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snigdhanagar

@snigdhanagar

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#849

Originally posted by: chandu8881

Thanks Sneha😊
so many days?? sirf do din ki chutti li thi😆😉

fr me it was twooo daysss😆😆

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Chandana. H

@chandu8881

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#850

Originally posted by: snigdhanagar

fr me it was twooo daysss😆😆

Jhooti!! sharm nahi aati tumhe jhoot bholthe hue!!😆 (result of watching shanak scenes more than 10 times😆)
so sweet of you sneha, will be back on monday😃

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