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Posted: 13 years ago
Lovely update Chandu
its chotu but awesome, shanak feed each other n dat the favorite mithai of khanak gulabpaak
Raj is being kabab me haadi loolzzz
Poor shanak
they won't be allowed to meet til wedding day heheheheheheh!!!!!!
i want shaan to go at mid night n meet khanak
filmy style lolzzz
wil wait forblong update
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice part :))

Firstly thank u so much for taking pains & updating from cell just for our sake :)) U are awesome ...Thank you :))

Shanak moments was blissful loved the Discribtion totally :) So Lunch date sounds super cool :) the idea of including Gulabpak was marvelous :) & their wedding will be at her old house. its so sweet of khandelwals to take care of her parents wish :))) LOved it

LOL raj didnt allow them to see each other :) Ab aayegaa mazaa as per the rituals they are not allowed to meet naa?? but why so soon ?? or its a prank by khanak's friends to tease RLB's :) I am loving it :))

thanks :D

Waiting for next part .,,,,,,,,,,,,,,Continue soon

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Posted: 13 years ago

dts soo sweet of u to update fr ur reader...u dnt need to say sryyy nxt update should be super longgg...😆😆

update was super cute...

awee shanak cant meeettt...love to see desperate shanak...😳

wht will happ to launch date...😆😆 update soon.,..

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Posted: 13 years ago
Hello😃
my lappy is back, ok now, thank you for liking the engagement part and commenting, i actually wanted to still write about engagement function, because of my charger issue, couldn't do it, no problem i'll fulfill that in coming updates😉
Sorry for the last update, it was so chotu, hope this one is long enough and hope you enjoy this part.
Thank you so much for all the praise im so embarassed😳 anything for you guys😃
@ jaisyjazz - Thank you so much jaisy for lovely commennts and you logged on at a late hour to read my story, Thanks a lot lot😃 im so blessed to have you people around me😊
@ rida - Thank you so much rida, thanks for liking attires and rings😊 Thank you so much for liking my small part also😊
@maneesha - Thanks a lot😃
@ niki - Thanks a lot niki😃
@heer - Thanks for liking both the parts and commenting😃Thank you so much for all the encouragement and Shaan visiting Khanak's at midnight will be fulfilled😉, but in next update😊
@aasma - Thanks a lot aasma😃
@ Sneha - missed you too😊 Thanks for liking both the updates, hope its long one😊
@ Pranjal- Heyyy!!! ur back!! good to see you! Thanks a lot for commenting, loved reading it😊
yes!! Dhruv's mom has not come, but u don't know what happens next😉 and Khanak thanking Shaan, when ur in a relationship, i don't think so Thank you is needed, but yes i'll try to give more shanak moments, as you wish!!! And me thanking you was very much needed, otherwise that thought wouldn't have come to my mind!! so thanks a lot😃
@ktym - Thanks a lot mounika😃 missed you too...
Thanks for neethurose, diyak, Virika-deewani for liking, Thank you so much guys😃
Guys start suggesting songs for sangeet and mehandi, i'll get time to add everything for the update😃
If you want anything added, please tell😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
heyy Chandu
read both the parts...& loved them.
engagement part was full of fun, I loved the relationship between Khanak & DD...that's sweet. I started laughing when Dhruv said that he & Khanak will continue their affair after ShaNak marriage🤣 . & when he said that Khanak ghar me hai, Shaan's expression was worth watching.😆
loved their attires & rings. the way he said he make her understand that they'll take care of everything together, was so sweet.
hayeee ... the tight hug & kiss.☺️

part 28 was short but very cute. loved the Gulabpak scene. so, they aren't allow to meet each other before marriage...hmmm...it's going to be really fun then.😉

awesome writing Chandu👏
take care
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved this update, and yes tgey story os entertaining xxx
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hello😃

Part 29

Khanak: Raj this is ridiculous!!

Raj turns towards her, but still shielding them, mujhe kuch mat bolo, DD ko jaake kaho!!

Shaan: Raj!!(sweetly, but frustrated) u know na that im Khanak's guide!! Atleast usse mujhe assist toh karne de!! Raj now turns towards him.

Raj: sorry Dr. Shaan, voh kya hai, aaj mera duty aapke saath hain, aur waise bhi agar Khanak ko koi bhi problem hogi, she can call you!!

Shaan and Khanak: lekin raj!!

Raj: lekin vekin kuch nahi!! (tired) yaar mujhe toh chein se apne duty karne do!! Aur Khanak tumhara duty Dr. Abhimanyu ke saath hai!! (standing in between)

Khanak: now who's Dr. Abhimanyu????

Raj: arrey naya doctor, chalna kaam karna, mujhe bhi kaam karne do!!

Khanak: fine!! (irritated)

Shaan moves backwards to Raj and signals her to call from his hand, after that he smiles(fake smile) at Raj, leaves the place, Khanak also give him a fake smile and leaves from there!! Raj follows Shaan!!

Shaan gets a call when he was taking rounds, till now Raj was with him, now Shaan had excused himself telling it was personal, now he had moved to a corner, as it was call from Khanak!!

Shaan: Hello Khanak!!

No response from her side'

Shaan: Khanak!! Kya hua?? (worried)

Khanak: Don't ask, this got be the worst day of my life!!

Shaan: (chuckles) why??

Khanak: this new Dr. is such a pain!! (disgusted)

Shaan: kyun?? (walking towards his cabin, Raj had now left him)

Khanak: he's just ranting, he wants to go for a hospital tour, he wants me to accompany him, do I look loke a guide???

Shaan: (laughs out loudly) chill Khanak!! listen send some nurse with him or tell him that your engaged!! So he'll stop using those pick-up lines..

Khanak: Shaan!! Ok yeh batao had u gone for a hospital tour on your first day???

Shaan: yes!! But all alone, as you were late on that day!! (remembering their first day) achcha Khanak listen, abb hum lunch ke liye milrahe hai na??

Khanak: oh yes!! Listen just stay in your cabin after your duty, baaki sab mein dekh lungi!!

Shaan: are you sure??

Khanak: oh yes 100% sure!! Wait and see!!! Achcha suno''..

Shaan: Kaho!! (smiles sweetly)

Khanak (laughs out): Shaan!! Got to go!!

Shaan: itni jaldi!!

Khanak: Shaan I guess your thoughts are getting wild!!

Shaan: oh yes!! You can't even imagine how wild its getting!!

Khanak wants to continue the talk, but there enters Dr. Abhimanyu, she's silent!!

Shaan: where r u?? (has reached his cabin)

Khanak: cafe!!

Shaan: can I come??

Khanak: please come!! That's enough for Shaan, he runs towards the caf, he can see her, she's still holding the phone, he can see a person seated opposite to her, he's quite good looking, Shaan slowly enters with a smile, Khanak sees him, she smiles brodly at him, Dr. A is confused, as to why she was smiling!!

Shaan: Hello Dr. Khanak!! (smiles broadly and takes a seat next to her, he's close)

Khanak is surprised!! But still she's smiling. Shaan extends a hand towards Dr. Abhimanyu

Shaan: Hello, im Dr. Shaantanu Khandelwal!!

Dr. A (shakes his hand): Hello im Abhimanyu!! Just joined in!! Raj enters and stands next to Shaan, starts patting his legs on the ground, Dr. A has no idea

Shaan: Raj!! Join.. (coolly)

Raj: Khanak!!!

Khanak: fine!! (gets up, bids bye to Shaan and leaves from there) After that even Shaan leaves disappointedly, Raj follows him, Dr. A is left alone'.

Afternoon, Shaan is done with his duty , he's waiting in his cabin for Khanak, he knew that she'll be there. As expected Khanak enters his cabin, running, she enters and closes the door. Shaan smiles and Khanak returns back the smile'.

Shaan (excited, moves towards her): I thought you won't able to make it!!

Khanak: aise kasi nahi aati!! Jab meri honewale pati ne jo bhulaya tha, mujhe toh aana hi tha!! (both of them hugs eachother)

Shaan: aur raj!!

Khanak: don't ask!! (giggles) I've tied him with a girl!!

Shaan: what? (smiling)

Khanak: you don't know na, there's girl, who's still doing her internship, she loves Raj, but Raj doen't like her, i made her go behind him!! (giggles)

Shaan: your impossible!!

Khanak (moves out of the hug): khaana nahi khaana!! see what i've brought (places a carrier on his table)

Shaan: u got the lunch!!

Khanak: yes i did!! pehle kolo toh sahi!! Shaan agrees and opens it, he's surprised to see his favourite kheer, in the first dabba, he smiles and looks at her, she is grinning, her eyebrows are dancing...

Shaan:wow!! you made this for me!!

Khanak: aur bhi hai kholo!! Shaan opens the next one, he's happy to see rajma!! he wonders how she knew that he liked rajma!!

Khanak: (not allowing him to ask): dadi told!! (easily shrugs, still smiling)

Shaan has no words for her, Khanak can see that he's happy, he's now seated on his chair...

Khanak: taste nahi karoge?? gives him a spoon, he tries both of them,

Shaan: wow Khanak this is so good!!

Khanak thank you!! (playfully) (saying this she clears his table, and coolly leans on it, just opposite to Shaan, Shaan pulls her hand she turns and land hardly on him, now she's sitting on his lap!!)

Shaan: Thanks to you Khanak!! your the best gift in my life i would have ever got, thanks for coming into my life!!!

Khanak: (slowly gets up, bends to him) agar aisa hai toh, mujhe bhi tumhe bahut saare Thank you bholna hoga, because your the person i'll be sharing my life!! so thank you rehne dete hai!! aaj ke baad no sorry and no thank you!! (hugs him)

Shaan hugs her back, Afterthat, lunch goes on smoothly, both of them at times feeding eachother, walking all over his cabin, at sometimes Shaan running behind her making her eat, both are happy, each one of them in their minds think that they are the luckiest persons in the whole world, to have each one of them!!!

Shaan's intercom starts ringing, Shaan receives it, he gets to know that he's got visitors, he asks them to allow them in, Khanak is still present!!

Shaan is happy to see the person, its Samar, with a girl, Shaan is unable to recognize, both of them greet eachother and hugs are welcomed, Samar knew about Shaan's engagement, so now he knows Khanak!!

Samar: nice to meet you Khanak!! have heard a lot about you from Shaan!!

Khanak: really!! but i don't know anything about you!!

Samar: no problem!! you'll get to know me from now onwards!! Khanak smiles at that, Shaan is still wondering who the girl is??

Samar: Shaan!! i know your wondering about who the girl is!! this is Kiya!! Shaan remember!!
Shaan has no idea!!

Kiya: i was there in your batch, in London!!

Shaan: oh ya?? im sorry, i seriously don't remember!!

Kiya: that's fine, that doesn't surprise me, your still the same!!

Shaan: anyways Kiya, this is Khanak, my fiancey!!! (embracing her shoulder)

Kiya: oh nice to know!! congratulations!!!

Talk continues, they get to know that Shaan friend Samar had arranged a party, he invites both of them, Shaan is not sure, whether he'll be attending or not, Khanak is fine with it!!

Shaan: Khanak shaayad tum bhul rahi ho, that we are not suppose to meet!! (reminds her, Khanak now gets into the reality)

Kiya: what do you mean your not suppose to meet, ur still together now!!

Khanak: oh that's a long story (to kiya) no problem Shaan i think, i can ask DD for the permission!

Samar: toh u people are coming??

Khanak: sure!! Samar do you mind if i bring my friends???

Samar: no problem!!

Raj comes into the cabin running, he's breathing heavily,

Raj: Khanak!! please kuch kar na!!

Khanak: what she's still behind you???

Raj: aur nahi toh kya!! aaj ke baad mein tum dono ke beech mein nahi aaonga!! (still breathing heavily)

Khanak: now that's like a good boy!! (Shaan chuckles, 2 of them in the room are clueless)

Khanak: chalo abb (pushes him towards the door, she bids bye to Samar and Kiya and promises that she'll be there for the party in the evening)

She's about to go out with Raj, stopped by Shaan.

Shaan: Aayush???

Khanak: DD has gone to pick him up!! Saying that both of them smiles and Khanak moves out with Raj!!

Evening she's back at home, she has convinced DD for the party, he had agreed, now she's in her room with Aayush!! He's telling her about his day!! Both of them are ont he bed, he's lying on her lap!!

Aayush: mom!! aap papa se mili thi??

Khanak: yes!! i think he should be coming by 7!!

Aayush: sachi mein!!! (excited suddenly upset) lekin mom mein toh aaj birthday party ke liye jaa raha ho!!

Khanak: kohi problem nahi!! aap unse baat karne ke baad chale jaaan!! (pecks him on his forehead)

Aayush: mom aaj aap bahar jaa rahe ho???

Khanak: yes!! aap bhi aaoge??

Aayush: nahi!! aap apne dost ke saath party manaaiye, main apne doston ke saath!!

Khanak: achcha toh phir main aapki dost nahi hun (pouts)

Aayush gets up, he convinces her like

Aayush: mom app mere best friend ho!! (hugs her)
Khanak hugs him back!! Dhruv is back from his work, all joins in the living hall, to have their, coffee, tea and Aayush's milk. Khanak narrates about Raj's condition in the hospital, all of them have a good laugh, Raj is irritated!!!
Coming up: Shanak's dance
Please comment😊
hope its long one...
Edited by chandu8881 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shonai

heyy Chandu

read both the parts...& loved them.
engagement part was full of fun, I loved the relationship between Khanak & DD...that's sweet. I started laughing when Dhruv said that he & Khanak will continue their affair after ShaNak marriage🤣 . & when he said that Khanak ghar me hai, Shaan's expression was worth watching.😆
loved their attires & rings. the way he said he make her understand that they'll take care of everything together, was so sweet.
hayeee ... the tight hug & kiss.☺️

part 28 was short but very cute. loved the Gulabpak scene. so, they aren't allow to meet each other before marriage...hmmm...it's going to be really fun then.😉

awesome writing Chandu👏
take care



Thanks a lot Shree😃 you want anything added do tell😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: aasma1

loved this update, and yes tgey story os entertaining xxx



Thanks a lot aasma😊 you want anything added do tell
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Posted: 13 years ago
noo bbz I love the way ur going with the story I just cabt wait to read how they lead there married life... I love whatever up write wheather up add songs, take them beautiful places..
up shud do everything and write everythung how up want to and if I want something added I will telll u's.
p.s. lovely updated loved shanak obviously I love raji veyting annoyed and ayush obviously funny. xxx

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