RAABTA-Part 96 on page 148 on 9/3 - Page 21

Originally posted by: ktym

awesome update...but i wonder will shaan really picks up aayush or else he forgets and goes to clinic...waiting for the shocking update...

Thanks mounika😊 you'll get to know😊

Originally posted by: snigdhanagar

wht shocking...shaan will forget picking ayush????????? 😲no he cnt be soo irresponsible...😕

OMG m sooo eager too knw...khank will be soo angry wid him dn...😲 update soon..😉

Thanks Sneha😊 yes your right, Shaan is not irresponsible😊

Originally posted by: jaisyjazz

everyday u say one last time but it happens everytime hahahaha its ok atleast u updated thanks for the surprise aise surprises dete rehna 😊

WOW the hug from behind was so so hmmm not getting words man but i loved it to the core oh ho this time kiss hote hote reh gaya yeh dhruv aur raj kobhi abhi aana tha :/ and the peck on the cheek OMG was cho sweeet had a big smile on my face like this😃

OMG wat shock man i think i know wat u r giving next i dont know how to tell it but r u thinking of shan's accident when he is going to pick up aayush oh no if this is true plz dont do this man so soon are abhi toh unka pyar shuru hua hai

cant wait for the shocking update plz plz plzzz update tomorrow also and this time long update ok:)))

Thanks jaisy😊 i hope its a long one...
no no accident and all in my story😊

Originally posted by: aasma1

loved oht so cute especially the hug from the back, plz don't make it such a big shocker that someone haopens between our shanak xxx

Thanks aasma😊 no its not that big shocker😊

Originally posted by: heer_85

Cutieee update

shaan came to meet khanak n hug her hw romantic 😆

They r going for lunch date n Aayush with Akki n Boo

shaan will pick Aayush ?

wil he able to do so or forget OMG!! wats gonna happened in shocking update

if he won't pick him

then Khanak wil be so angry

curiously waiting for the next part

Thanks heer😊 yes he'll pick Aayush, Khanak can't be angry with Shaan😊

Originally posted by: IF_rida

fantastic update
i was missing ayush so juz a line but that was cute
hmm ayush is very sensible ... itni si age main
the shanak moments were beautiful
haye mor inti gud ho to kya baat hai... but is update ne meri raat bauhat good kardi
wow so now raj knows... chalo good hai
hmmm lunch with family ??/
but em glad there will be a dinner date
even i was thinking abt ayush... but he is loved by all and for sure will have a good time with akii and khushboo
hmm so shaan is goin to pick him up... ayush ko to best company mill gai
hope prst goes well
i loved the part... a peck before leaving
update soon

Thanks a lot rida😊 sorry i think date can wait😊

Originally posted by: janavi07

Hi Chandu...

How r u?

I m so Sorry...

Last week i was so busy in my work ... that's why not possible to read any part and not replay u...

Now i m Free, i will read all part and replay u...

Once again so Sorry...

Hello janavi😊
im fine hope you are doing good😊 its ok, i can understand😊
waiting for your comments😊

Hello😊
Thanks to neethurose, diyak and sweetsute for liking it😊
Thanks to all of you guys for commenting😊

Part 20

Shaan is on time at school, he's waiting outside the school, a bunch of students come out, Shaan starts to search for Aayush, there he comes with his friends, Shaan is smiling at him, Aayush is surprised to see him, he bids his friends bye and moves towards him, broadly smiling…

Aayush: Shaan uncle!!! (Shaan picks him up)

Shaan: Hello champ!! How was your day??

Aayush: it was good, mom nahi aayi???

Shaan: kyun main nahi aa saktha…(moving towards car)

Aayush smiles sweetly at him. Both of them get into car, Shaan makes him safety by buckling his belt and puts his favourite music list, as it was Khanak's order…

Aayush: yeh toh meri favourite songs hai, aapko mom ne diya….

Shaan:yes!! Aur yeh bhi poochne ko kaha hai, ki aapne lunch kaya???

Aayush: nahi!!(sad) pata hai mom ne kitna pyaar se sandwiches banayatha, lekin voh sankalp (his friend) hai na sab kha liya …(sweetly pouts)

Shaan (smiles): koi baat nahi, kya kahoge bolo main khiladoonga…

Aayush: sach mein!! (excited) toh phir kya hum Mc D chal sakthe hai??? (asks sweetly)

Shaan: as you wish!!! Gears up the engine, both of them gets into Mc D, gets Aayush's favourite happy meal, in which he gets that toy, he's happy, both of them enjoys each other company….

On the other side, Khanak is tensed, she's outside the hall were conference had to take place, she's wondering whether Shaan reached or not, whether he picked Aayush or not, she wants to call, but its coming not reachable….. Raj and Dhruv enters…

Raj: kya hua?? Tum bahar kyun kadi ho??

Khanak: voh Aayush!! Shaan has not yet returned…

Dhruv: aa jayenge chill!! (cools her)

Raj: u had your lunch na??? so that you get strength…

Dhruv: tumhe lagtha hai, she would have eaten…(shakes his head, as he knows her well)

Raj: kya?? Pagal ho gayi hai, kuch khaa lena, agar ghir gayi toh mein tujhe sambhalunga ya phir presentation ko, pehle si hi itni patli hai… (tensed)

Khanak is not bothered, she's looking outside, she knows where her strength lies…

Dhruv senses the tension, tries to ease her and also Raj!!!

Dhruv: Raj tu kaisa dost hai yaar, usne khaana nahi kaya, phir bhi tumhe presentation ki padi hai!! Che che kaisa dost hai, tumhari dost ki koi chintha nahi hai….(makes a face)

Raj is frustrated, he keeps quiet, Khanak once again tries to call him…

Dhruv: dekho aa gaye!! Khanak tuns to the way, she's relieved, even Raj relaxes, Dhruv disappears suddenly...

Khanak: itni dher!! Did you have lunch (to Aayush)

Aayush: yes!! (smiles, Shaan is holding him)

Khanak: aur Shaan tum??

Shaan: yes maam!!! (smiles)

Khanak: chalo chalet hai!! Dhruv returns, he's got a biscuit packet for her…

Dhruv: abb toh khaale, dono aagaye hai…(stressing on dono)

Aayush gets down, Shaan is shocked that she didn't have her lunch, Aayush pulls her to the side, takes biscuit from Dhruv. He makes her sit in one of the chairs placed outside…

Aayush: mujhe din mein chaar baar khiladiti ho, khud teek se nahi khaa thi ho (feeding her not allowing to talk, All 3 of them smiles at the relation they share)

Dhruv: (to Shaan) I heard that people from London have been invited…

Shaan: oh yaa?? I didn't know this (there's a tap on his shoulder from back, its some of his colleagues from London, Shaan's happy to see them, and some other people whom Shaan knew well, howabouts and hugs are exchanged, all are having a good talk going on…

They are informed to get inside, in the meanwhile, Aayush had fed her…Raj moves near her…

Raj: tumhara maa beta ka khatam ho gaya ho, toh andar chalein…

Khanak: nahi nahi!! Mein aur Aayush toh film dekhne jaa rahe hain, hai na Aayush??

Aayush nods in affirmation, Khanak giggles…

Dhruv: achcha kaunsa movie, main bhi saath chaltha hun (playing along)

Raj: guys this isn't funny!!

Khanak: Raj!! Chill everything will be alright (assures him, all of them smiles)

Shaan excuses himself from the group, joins them…

Shaan: is Aayush allowed inside?? (concerned)

Khanak: ya he's allowed, I spoke with the senior doctors, but he has to be silent…

Shaan: toh teek hai, he's going with him… (as a matter of fact)

Khanak: its ok Shaan, I think your busy (points to his friend circle, Raj and Dhruv move out to give them time)

Shaan: no Khanak!! Its ok Aayush won't be a problem!! Unless Aayush won't enjoy my company

Aayush: mom its alright!! I'll go with Shaan uncle!! (Khanak smiles and agrees)

All of them enters the hall, conference goes smooth with lot of arguments and Raj and Khanak's presentation was well done, both of them had spoke confidently, and answered the questions asked by the senior doctors , some of them were not answered, as it's the same everytime, everytime we create a question and we don't have answers for ourselves, its ususal, but the people were impressed with their work.

Shaan was surprised at this talent of Khanak, a few hours before, she was having fun reading the lines, but now she had done a very good job, she could change her colours very well. On one side she was a caring and a loving mother of Aayush, on the other hand, she was a normal girl with all the excitement but yet keeping them in her limits, she was talkative; yes she would go to eternal bounds to make Aayush happy. She seems to be happy with her life, now that im(Shaan) included, we'll see how she's going to manage….

After the conference she had informed Dhruv that she's going to Shaan's house, Dhruv had teased her she had blowed it off, she had also requested him to take her car, he had agreed and left. Khanak and Aayush went to Khandelwal's house with Shaan, has dadi had called her in the morning…

In the car, trio had a good conversation, in no time they had reached his house. Harilal had opened the door. Akshay and Khushboo were waiting for Aayush, they informed Khanak that Dadi, Madhvi and Sunil had to go to poona, as some of their relative were not feeling good, and they would return back at the late night…

Aayush had forgotten about the fare thing, which Akshay had proised him, that he'll take Aayush. Khanak had no problem with that, but still she was tensed to send him alone, but she had to do that, as Shaan had asked her time for him, she was not feeling good to send him alone….

Khanak: Aayush, uncle auty ka haath math chodna, akele akele kai math jaana, agar uncle kisi cheez ke liye mana kar the ho tho, unki baat manna, and (she takes out an extra phone from her bag) yeh phone, im keeping this in your pocket, agar tum miss hogaye na, toh mujhe call karna ya phir uncle ko, teek hain… (worried)

Aayush hugs her, Khanak is not convinced with herself…

Aayush: mom don't worry I'll be fine…. Khanak's eyes filled with tears, she controls it, as it won't be good, she pecks him on his cheek and allows him to go with them, she requests them to take care about him… They left, Aayush had left smiling, that he's gonna have fun…

Shaan being concerned, Khanak if you want hum bhi unke saath jaa sakthe hai?? Khanak turns to him, she was not confident in sending Aayush, her mind screamed to her that, say yes!! But if she fail this, she would become more protective of Aayush, which could suffocate Aayush, she didn't wanted that, yes she was caring, but she wanted to give him his space, he had enjoyed being with them, if he was ok with that, may be she should learn that… She had grown into a mother,will not a mother think in the same way before living their child on their own…

Shaan: Khanak kya hua?? Kya soch rahi ho?? She clears her mind and gets back to herself or she tries to..

Khanak: kuch nahi!! Tum mujhe bhagane main kyu lage huye ho?? Do you have anyother date?? (tries to be mischief)

Shaan smiles at her, she will be the strongest, she won't be showing him her fear…

He had given off to the staff, now they are alone…

Shaan: toh start kare??? (getting naughty himself)

Khanak starts running, until you catch me, Shaan starts running behind her, noth of them are laughing and running, unless Shaan catches her, both of them land on the sofa, Shaan has held her hands at her back, both of them are sitting, Shaan is facing her back…

Shaan: mujhse hoshyaari ha??? (further twists, she yelps)

Khanak: sorry sorry!! Haa Shaan its hurting!!!

Shaan: oh really!! (makes her turn to face him, they are too close, her hands are still held by him, but their bodies are not touching, he slowly releases her hand, both of them are lost in each other eyes, Shaan brings one of his hand, touches her cheek, Khanak closes her eyes, relaxes herself in the touch as her heart was beating very fast, it might have skipped a beat or two…..

Shaan pecks her softly on her forehead, his face too close, she opened her eyes, both of them are looking at each other….. They are disturbed by her phone…

Shaan is frustrated, Khanak tucks her hair, takes the phone and looks at the caller…

Khanak: its Khushboo bhabhi…. (both of the shrug as they have no idea, they had just left now, what had made them call back…) Khanak receives it…

Khanak: haan bhabhi… (Shaan can hear only Khanak, he can see that her face had taken a worried look, she stood from the place, he can see that she was controlling herself from breaking down, she closes her eyes, with a confident look, she speaks into the phone)

Khanak: can you take him to the hospital, I'll be there (cuts the call, hearing the word hospital Shaan was terrified)

Khanak furiously takes her bag, her phone…

Shaan: Khanak!! Kya hua?? Hospital?? Kya hua??

Khanak: (takes a long breath, she's not meeting his eyes, she's looking in the front) Aayush has started shivering, his body temperature is raising, he's not responding (closes her eyes in horror) (looks at Shaan) I've to go to the hospital… Shaan nods and both of them leaves…

Please comment😊
Sorry if i've disappointed you😊

OMG wat happened to aayush???

Lovely Chandu
finally reliefed lolzzz
shaan picked Aayush n he took him for lunch
loved Auyush n Shaan bonding
Khanak is tensed n waiting for Auyush, she is vry possesive n caring i love her motherly part
loved Raj n Dhruv friendship with Khanak they cherish her n feel her relax dost ho to aseh
hw sweet of khanak gving extra phone to Aayush she let Aayush go with boo n Akki bt not having a good feeling
Akhir maa jo hai n i totally agree with her when she decided to give Aayush some space
Wow Khanak catch me if u can kya baat hai heheheheheh
shaan running after her n catch her
shanak were close bt disturbed by a call
Omg!! Aayush felt sick
hope it's not coz of dat lunch coz khanak wil be vry upset n angry on shaan
Waiting eagerly for the next part :)))