DIL THOH PAGAL HAI ch 27 end pg 85 july 24 - Page 65

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: niki_rbo



thanks a lot man..ya ending it in next part...😊



niki can u try and incorporate this in ur story I wanna see khanak pregnant and hormonal and cravings etc loool x
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome Nikki but r ending it 😭
shaan said i love u n want khanak to say it n
she is teasing him superb😆
coffee wala part was very nice their parents knew wat happen in the office
n shanak accept each other
sizzling hot n burning wala part in the room 😉
they unite again thank God dis time in their room 😆
please Nikki bring khanak pregnancy wala part n her craving
u r ending dis ff in the next part 😭
i will wait for ur new ff
please write dusra ff
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Posted: 13 years ago
BED.:...😉LOVELY nikki... par plz yar dont end it...let them have some more romance, romantic dinners, ofc nok jhok, abt u know sOME intense n intimate things...uPdatE Soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
what yaaar u gave us the hottest update 😳
and telling the bitter truth...😭
u are ending it very soon yaar
y dont u think of other FF i love to read ur short and sweet FF'S yaar

Lovely love making seen... i was wondering that when are u going to do it but u always surprise us...😳

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Posted: 13 years ago
wow that was smoking hot
love u to kehti yaar
chalo action speak louder than words
loved it
em waiting for the next part... it will be the last one but em more excited to read a new ff from you

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Posted: 13 years ago
again wat a hot update yaar this time they did in bed oh i m blushing
u r ending it so soon oh no
waiting for last part and will wait for ur next ff also😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Again Hot update Nikki
u remind me RBO scene shaan said i love u and he want khanak to say it ...and uff khanak ke Nakhare she is teasing him 😆
sizzling hot scene in Bedroom 😉 i m blushing all times... superb Niki...

next update will be the Last One?😔...we want next update with Lots of Romance with Cute fight because without nok-jhok our shanak incomplete

i will wait for ur new ff ...and i know very well u defiantly come with Another new interesting story i m eagerly waiting for that...
Love u Niki

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Posted: 13 years ago
hi friends...

ONAego, arunsunita_gm, heer_85, jaisyjazz, diyak, minnu345,
aasma1, janavi07, ktym, angelic_leena_3, IF_rida, RB81,

thanks for hitting like button...

mounika,ramani,aasma,heer,saroj,minnu,rida,jaisy,janavi sneha...

thanks for commenting...thank u so much guys...


ch : 27

shaan came out of the washing room he saw khanak was wearing her halfsaree..

shaan smiled at her..he went near her...she saw him through the mirror..

he was standing just behind her with a smile...her cheeks turned red..

he was about to hold her his phone rang...he talked in the phone..she opened the door to go out..

he walked behind her talking in phone...they came to dinning table...

all elders were washing hands and going to hall while talking..

in the dinning table...sanjana sanjay and mitra and khusbhoo were there..

shaan and khanak sat opposite to kids...they were sitting little close..

sanjana:chachi u were in chudithar now in halfsaree..y u changed..

khanaks cheeks turned red..

shaan:ha khanak..y u changed (innocently)

khanak glared at him...khusbhoo and mitra smiled at eachother..

khanak stamped his feet..

shaan:ahhh...

sanjay:wat happened chachu..

shaan:she stamped my foot...how dare u..

khanak:oh hello i did not see ur feet..first sit properly..

mitra:stop...first eat..

khusbhoo:chachi we have to send them for honeymoon..

khanaks cheeks turned red...she looked her plate..

sanjana:wat is honey moon...

sanjay:ha..wat is it..

khanak and shaan dropped there spoon while eating...

khusbhoo:shh..first eat...

they started to eat..inbetween shaan placed his hand on her thighs..

khanak felt very embarrased...she glared at him...he did not mind..

he continued his act without others seeing..

they came to the hall..elders were planning for the recepition..

they entered there room..shaan hugged her from back ...

khanak:sh..shantanu ...

shaan:wat baby..kisssing her neck...

khanak:ladies problem...

shaan:wat...when

khanak:now only...

shaan:ufff...he bitted her earlobe..

khanak:ouch...

a day before the recepition after three days...

shaan came from office late...he saw khanak was sitting and swetha

was putting mehandi in khanaks hand...he looked at khanak..

she smiled at him..he to smiled and went to freshen up...

khanak entered the room...shaan was coming out of the washroom..

khanak:is it nice shantanu..showed her hand..

shaan:its nice..and holded her waist..

khanak:shantanu not now...not today..it will smudge..

shaan:wat..no way baby...he hugged her tight..

khanak:shantanu come on leave me...

shaan:no baby...please ..please...

khanak:no shantanu...

shaan:come here..

shaan made her sit in the bed...he went to dressing table..

khanak:wat r u searching..

shaan:wait..ha..got it...

khanak:wat hair dryer...

shaan:s baby...(naughty smile)

khanak got up from bed and she moved away..

shaan:come on baby...please please..

khanak:no shantanu...ahhh...

shaan got her and he started to dry her mehandi quickly...

shaan:see now its dry...(winning smile)

khanaks cheeks turned red...

khanak:did u eat come lets go down..

khanak was about to get up from bed...shaan holded her..

shaan:i ate ..we had a meeting in the hotel..

whispered near her lips...

shaan:baby u look beautifull in this half saree..

kissed her lips...she kissed him back with equal passion...

he pushed her down on bed and he came on top of her...

they kissed eachother very forcely...her dried mehandi

was on the bed on his body everywhere...

she moaned loud in pain and in pleasure...

they went to their beautifull world...

next day recepition went verywell..recepition was arranged in ptr marriage hall..

it is the big marriage hall in madurai...many people came..

they all wished them...inbetween shaan did his work

without others knowing khanak felt embarrased..she cannot do anything..

after fining the dinner in the recpition they all came out..

there was standing nissan micra standing with happy married life in it..

sharma:beta this is for u...

sharma gave the carf key and a cover...

shaan:dad..y these..

sharma:no beta we want to show our love to u so..please beta..

shaan got it..shaan opened the cover and he smiled...

khanak:wat it is...

shaan:nothing baby..(smile)

sunil:okay both of u get in the car..

madhavi:shaan its late night drive carefully r a driver needed

shaan:no mom i will takecare..

shaan started to drive the car..

khanak:why shantanu mom asking for driver...we r going home only na..

shaan gave the cover to her..khanak got it and read it..

khanak:three days in kodikanal in sterling resort...

khanaks cheeks turned red...

shaan:wat baby u know the information..(smiling naughtly)

she turned her head and saw outside...shaan smiled at her...

khanak:drive slowly..its late night also..

shaan:we have to reach that place very quick we have work la..

khanak:wat...

shaan:work..work baby..(in his naughty smiling tone)

khanak turned her headand watched out...but due to tired

she slept...but shaan drove the car carefully..

they reached the place early morning...shaan saw her she was sleeping...

he went and checked in...then he came and carried her in his arms

and walked towards there room...he layed her down in the bed...

and he went and took a gift pack from his bag and placed

in the table and he went and changed to vest and sorts...

he looked at her..she was sleeping very tired and

sleeping like a angel...her recpition saree is crushed here and there..

he layed besides her and kissed her forehead and he slept near her..

it was 9 in the morning...they were sleeping nicely..

shaans phone rang and both woke up...

shaan:ha mom..reached safe...ummm..talk to u later...

shaan turned and saw khanak who was sitting in bed and looking at him..

shaan:good morning dear...

khanak:when we came..u did not wake me up..

shaan:we came early morning u was sleeping nicely so i did not disturb u..

khanak:oh..how sweet of u..(smiled at him and was about to get up

shaan holded her hand and she looked at him questioningly)

shaan:thats it..nothing..

khanak:wat else to say..

shaan:not to say..do..some...(smiling at her naughtly)

khanak:now...no way shantanu..first freshen up

then want to go for site seeing and then cycling around the lake...

shaan:wat site seeing..no way baby...these three days only in room...

food comes here when we order here...this is to compensate those three days..

he said it winking his eyes and with a naughty tone...

khanak pushed him with a force and got from bed...

shaan was still laying in bed...

khanak went and looked around the room..

khanak:where is my bag...

shaan just pointed to the gift box...

khanak saw it and went and opened it...it was a half saree ...

khanak:wow its nice shantanu...

khanak took the box to the washroom...

she took bath and she was about to wear..

khanak:wat there is no braisre and there is only half saree..

half saree skirt and a blouse that too..no...

khanak:shantanu...(shouted from bathroom)

shaan:wear it and come out...

khanak saw the blouse it has no hooks just to tie it in front...

its low neck at back and front just to tie a bow that to low neck

and blouse transparent..half saree to transparent...

when she opened the box outside she just saw ..she did not open it fully..

she weard the dress and she looked at the mirror...

her cheeks turned red...she opened the door and came out..

shaan was standing near the window...he turned around and saw her..

no he was starring at her..she looked down..she saw he was looking at her..

she turned around quickly...he could not control himself...

he walked towards her...his hands reached her back...

she felt shiver...he hugged her from back...

his chin resting on her shoulder...

shaan:u r looking sexy baby..

khanaks cheeks turned red..she took a step..shaan holded her and brought

her to him with a force and her chest crushed to his torso...

shaan cupped her face and kissed her forehead...

her hands weent around his neck...there lips inch away...

shaan:baby..i love u...khanak smiled her cheeks turned red..

she closed her eyes..she did not feel his lips...

she opened her eyes...she saw he was just looking at her...

shaan:come on baby tell please...

khanak just shook her haed in no..and within a sec her lips met his...

she kissed him first..and iniated the kiss...shaan then cannot control..

he kissed her back with force..her hands on neck

grabbed his hair and making him more closer..his hand pulled her halfsaree with a pulll..

her hands went to her chest to cover her bossom..and stopped the kiss...

shaan saw her...he carried her in his arms and gently placed

her in bed...her hands still covering her blouse...

shaan layed besides her..he put his leg on her legs...and

gently moved her half saree upwards...his one hand gently traced her

forehead and then moved to eyes...then it raeched her lips..her

lips parted his finger gently traced her lips..a soft moan escaped

from her mouth...his finger moved downwards her neck...

she trembled...onside his legs moving her skirt..and other side

his hand moving from upwards..khanaks hand went

and grabbed the bedsheet sideways and closed her eyes..

she was breathing heavily...she felt his lips near her ears..

shaan:i love u..i love u so much baby...

he untied the blouse knot..her hands on bed sheet tightened..

on the next moment shaan was top of her and he kissed her lips hardly..

she responded to him in equal passion..there was no barriers between

them..his hands started to move down to her bossom making her grab

him more tightly and making him even more passionate to her...

his hands and lips touched her..everywhere..

she moaned a loud in pain and in pleasure..he made love to her..

later sometime she was hugging him and laying besides him...

there eyes were closed..his hands gently carrseing and holding her arms..

her head resting on his chest hearing his heartbeat..they were covered only by bedsheet...

khanak:sh..shantanu...

shaan:ummm...still eyes closed...

khanak:i love u...

shaan:ummm...

khanak raised her head and looked at him..

shaan opened his eyes...

shaan:wat baby...

khanak:u did not listen wat i said...

shaan:wat did u said...

khanak:wat did u thought...tell me first...

shaan:u should not scold me...

khanak:ummm..ok tell..

shaan:i thought of making love in bathtub..(smiling naughtly...)

khanak:wat...u...u stupid...started to beat his chest.,.

shaan:ouch..ouch...its paining...tell and beat then..

khanak:u ...i love u idiotic sc...

shaan:wat..holded her hands...his eyes wide opened...

shaan:i love u too osc...

khanak:ok leave me now...ahh..hey..

now khanak was lying down on bed and shaan top of her..

khanak :leave me...ahh..(shaan kissed her lips..)

khanak:lets go outing..

shaan was kissing her face...

khanak:lets go out..

shaan:after the third round only...

khanak:wat..thir...

his lips met hers and he took her to a beautifull place

it was there only one there own beautifull place...



hey friends..thanks a lot for liking my simple story..

please leave ur opinions...is this story different

from other stories of mine...do u like it guys...

any suggestions also welcomed...r even story line pm me guys..

if i get any idea r u guys suggest i will try to update next one..

thanks to all whoever hitted like button and commented

for the updates...thanks ..thanks a lot guys...



regards
nikita...

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Posted: 13 years ago
alll ur stories are different niki, love em sooo much and love u tooo r u going to upload another part???
when I think.of ideaz I will let u know and u can decide on that
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Posted: 13 years ago
ah sizzling hot
atlast she said ILU
the saree which shan gifted to her was sexy man
i love iu every story niki
will wait for ur next ff

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