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Posted: 12 years ago

Arrival, Contemplations, and Insistence


Malik's Penthouse

7:45 PM

Khanak got back to the penthouse around five and fixes dinner just as she had told Armaan she would. She had found everything in the kitchen to cook up a non-veg main course for him. Her mind compares her present lifestyle with her past one. How things were back when she was in Mumbai…the apartment where her mother had taught her all that she knows about cooking now. It wasn't anything like this luxury kitchen she is standing in now…but her senses can revisit it anytime she wants, she just has to close her eyes and imagine the noise, the dirt, the grey beach…it's all there in her memory.

She has even dressed up for the evening in a very simple gold chiffon saree. It's very plain with just a few intricate sequencing on the blouse and hemline. Her light make up and simply styled hair would only be obvious to an expert, but to any other eye it's all very subtle and natural.

Clock reads 8:15… her wait continues around the dining table.

"Hey…" Armaan's soft acknowledgment reaches her as she slowly moves her resting head off from the surface of the dining table. Her exhaustion had led her drowsiness to hover over her senses while she waited.

"App…"

"Took forever, I know… I'm sorry…" He says kneeling down on the expensive rug underneath the contemporary dinning setting.

"Umm..voh.."

"From the looks of it, I don't think you have helped yourself to any of this deliciousness I see…" He gestures visually towards the edible arrangements in front of them.

"Nahi…"

"Then lets…I'll warm this up…it looks lovely!" He says getting himself up and about instantly with one of the crystal bowls. It's all a bit too fast for Khanak's senses to grasp but a faint smile appears on her lips as she watches Armaan Malik walk away towards the kitchen, complimenting her preparations.

………….


Battery Park City, Big Apple

Sachdev Residence

12:15 AM

He turns off his Mac book and finds that the stack of mail he had brought with him to his study hours ago is still untouched…he had intentions of sorting it out, but instead he got himself caught up in responding to almost 2 dozen emails he had received within the past three days…conferences…rounds…fellowships…life of a Psychiatrist… nothing new about his work load.

Bills…invites (mostly Raina's)…more bills…catalogues… Fairgrounds Festival of Lights (a Christmas event in Hamburg, NY)

Darya would enjoy it… He knows for certain as he remembers seeing her excited last year around this time when she saw the city light up like magic for the first time…

"Staying up…?" Raina appears through the wooden doorframe of the study.

"Yeah…I…just sorting the mail…"

"I see…you can put mine aside…"

He nods in response and looks back down at the picture promoting Festival of Lights.

"Shaan…" Raina walks up with her arms hugging her robe wrapped slim figure.

He looks up at her…she pauses, thinks…walks herself even closer up towards him…he puts the mail aside…her kneeling down by him provokes his curiosity further…

"I…I am sorry…"

"For..?"

"Yelling…Dari didn't deserve that…"

"No, no she doesn't…"

"Please…I just…I wasn't myself…"

"When are you…yourself…??"

Raina sighs…her hand reaches out to his… her touch has no effect on him and so his indifference is intact…

"Do you forgive me…? I'll make up to Dari…"

"You do that…"

"I will…"

He nods, his hand pulls away from hers…she doesn't let go.

"It's getting late for you…go to bed…" He says

"I could say the same for you…"

"I can't… I have a few things left to do…"

She gets up nodding, leans over, and kisses his cheek.

"Good Night…" She lets go of his hand.

……………………


100 Maspeth Avenue @ Olive St, Brooklyn

Pre-School

Miss. K keeps her adorable class busy with arts and crafts since it's an official snow day for the city outside and weather related delays are expected from parents this afternoon…(with exceptions of a few, of course)

"Woww! What a beautiful snowflake Katie…would you like me to string it up…?"

"Yes! Can I help tooo…?"

"Of course, sweetie, in fact let's get that stepping ladder and you can hang it up on the wall yourself…" She offers politely before going back towards her desk to grab the string.

"Missh K…" a distinct sweet call halts Khanak's advancing steps and she turns around.

"Yes Darya…?"

"Dari needs strinngg twoo...!"

A small laugh escapes Khanak's mouth as she lowers herself down to Darya's desk; it earns her a cute little nose crinkling facial expression that they usually do on "their" moments.

"I'll get right on it…!" Khanak complies getting back up.

The snowflake hanging activity goes well for everyone in the classroom and soon the huge arts and craft wall is filled with symbols of winter…snowman, snowflakes, skiing rods…whatever the genius three and four year olds can come up with is there…

"Wooow! You guys have done an awesome job! Let me see if I can get Ms. Roberts next door to come and take a class picture of us…"

"I don't mind taking it…" it's not Ms. Roberts leaning against the classroom door, dressed crisply in navy Dockers and jet black outerwear.

"Daadddyyy!"

Dari makes a reflexive run towards him... Khanak is not surprised at his timely arrival regardless of weather delays that everyone else is experiencing.

"Hey Munchkin!" He greets his daughter lifting her up in his arms, hugging her to him.

Meanwhile kids arrange themselves for the picture and when Khanak turns to call out to Darya she is already slipping down her father's hold to get to her…

"Ready everyone…?" He says pulling out his iPhone 5.

A synchronous "CHEESE" sounds off after the kids pull Khanak in and center her amongst themselves. He clicks a couple of times…multiple snaps are always good…the fifth one, has Darya hugging Khanak's denim covered legs she has paired with her teal turtle neck sweater and leather boots. He snaps a few more before kids decide to disperse around…

"I'll forward you these…" He says holding up his gadget.

"Thank You…"

"Daddy! Daddy..! liya app ne..?" Darya came up to him in a rush as if she had remembered something very important.

"Kya…? What my munchkin…?" He brings himself down to her level and questions back.

"Tchits…lights ke liyaay…"

"Ooh! That…haan…kal ajaaye gay…" He smiles, glad to see Darya comfortable with Hindi in a setting that wasn't their home or Mahavi's.

"Can Mish.K come too…? pleazzzee…"

Shaantanu looks up at Khanak who is observing the father-daughter interaction infront of her. She isn't sure of what Darya is going off about.

"I…I'm not sure.."

"Daddy pleaseee…pleazzee…! preetty please..."

"Okay…you ask her and see what she says…" Shaantanu turns his little one by her shoulders so that she is facing her teacher's curious eyes that are looking down at her.

"App aaogay…Dari ki saath..?" She makes the cutest plea, without messing up any of her Hindi. It make Khanak proud and Shaantanu surprised.

Khanak remains in her place, smiling genuinely at the little girl who she has grownfond of. Not because of her heart condition and definitely not out of pity…perhaps, the reason is just too difficult to pinpoint…to put in words for now…

"Hum ja kahaa rahay hain…?" She lowers herself down to her level and reaches for Darya's tiny hands so she can hold them in her own.

"Chistmas lights dekhnay…pleaazeee come!"

"Hmmm…Phir toh mujhe aana he paray ga…" Khanak agrees giving in to Darya's wish with only a slight pretense of thinking and earns Darya's overwhelmed hug in return before she runs back off to join her classmates.

"You didn't have to…"

"No, I did…" She counters his statement looking out to a very excited and happy Darya who couldn't contain the huge grin on her adorable face. "Mujhe bata saktay hain tickets kahaan se…"

"Don't worry...main arrange kar loonga…"

"Per pay main khud karoongi…"

"I am insisting..." There is some sort of a hidden command in the way he said it.

Khanak nods in response and is quiet as he fills her in on the details about the event. Their conversation is very usual, very real…she couldn't get herself to think twice about the long drive to the Festival, the fact that she'd be with him and Darya, just the three of them…nothing is "unusual"…not to her..not to him...to them.

For as long as Khanak Goyal could remember, this is the real her…known for giving in to genuine gestures wholeheartedly…it's who she is as a person…but she isn't Khanak Goyal anymore…She is Khanak Malik, married to Armaan Malik.

The realization hits her only after she steps out through the snow covered pavement and finds Armaan leaning against his silver Corvette, waiting for her with a smile and a dozen pink roses in his gloved hands.

...



P.S: ...And again...The parallels in their lives strike again...let me know your brainy thoughts on it...take care!


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Posted: 12 years ago
oh wooow finally u updated loool
love shaan and armaan in this...
cant wait for the next update. x

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Posted: 12 years ago

Loved it!!!😃 So Armaan did come for dinner..I like him a lot!!!😳 Raina asked sorry but as usual Shaan has no feelings for her!!! Wow!!! ShaNak going out with Darya..🥳She accepted Darya's request without contemplating anything!!! I dont know why but I like Armaan more than Shaan here!!!😆 He is doing everything for this arranged marriage to workout..And who couldn't fall for Khanak's charm!!!😉 So Armaan too started falling for her..😳 ShaNak feelings for each other is complicated!!!

Looking forward and thanks for writing a fantastic update..😃


P.S: Update soon!!!😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
yayyy i told u that armaan will make it and he did little late but he did and so sweet of him he reheat the food for khanak :)
shan and raina's relationship is more complicated than armaan and khanak's
there r no feelings only c even if raina touch shan or talk sweetly shan doesnt feel anything its like only dari and he they both only r family to each other
yayyy shanak and dari r going to festival i m excited for that
hmm so sweet of armaan to wait for khanak outside her school he has come to pick her up with flowers thats very very sweet they both r trying very hard
lets c how it goes
update soon :)

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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update!
just tell me one thing, aap baar baar kaha gayab jo ho jathe ho??😆
anyways! loved the whole thing, but i loved the most where you described the difference between Khanak goyal and Khanak Malik!
And soon, we will be getting difference between, Khanak Malik and Khanak khandelwal! LOL!!
wow!! they'll be going away, that too good! And im very much excited just like Dari is😉
will Armaan let her go?? or will he join them also??
Eagerly waiting for next one..!
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Posted: 12 years ago
fantastic update jenny
it was superb
khanak's shaan and his munchkin moments are always te lime light
em still confused abt armaan's character at time he seems to be a true gentleman who is making every possible effort to make his marriage work at times it seems he is a grey shade character
i like the conv between raina and shaan
hmm khanak is going to the light festival with shaan and darya its pretty good
but em confused that raina is not goin ans now wht will happens as now the reality dawns on her that she is mrs khanak malik
the pic clicking part was very cute
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago



Siggy Credit:Afiya


Letdowns, Reminders, and Texts

Malik's Penthouse
5:40 PM

She is busy marinating tonight's dinner in the kitchen. Humming a tune that Armaan Malik has no idea existed, probably something from the Classic 80's era of Hindi Cinema.She walks over to the trashcan with lemon peels. Armaan steps out in to the living room, freshly showered and changed.

"Hey…!" He greets with a smile.

"Bas fifteen minutes mein dinner ready hoga…"

"Oh! I…"
"Main sooch rahi thi Uncle ko bhi invite kar le…bahut din hogaye voh weekends per bhi nahi…" She is working around with pots, pans, and thoughts aloud at the same time.

"Khanak…"

"Jee…" She looks up, holding on to the cover of one of the dishes in her hand.
"
I didn't know you had started cooking…Dad ka pata nahi…but I'll be heading out soon, it's an evening out with the new clients…" Armaan informs her as he walks in through the open arched entrance of the kitchen. Her hand slowly puts down the lid on the pan and her eyes stare down on the simmering contents inside…he is next to her now. "I did take the early evening off just for you…"
He reminds her, as if compensating for the let down.

"Hmm…Thanks for that…" She says in strange formality, the kind that shouldn't exist between man and wife.
"You know I'd tell you to come along, but the company will be babbling about stocks and numerical figures…you'll be bored…"

She nods, agreeing with him. The lemon-ginger sauce smells just delectable as the vapor puffs out from the pot.

"You want me to call Dad…?" He offers picking up a slice of cucumber she had intended for the salad portion of dinner and munches on it.

"Nahi…" She says noticing how his eyes are everywhere but on her, so very oblivious to her.

She needed to convince herself of the fact that he is the same person he was just a few hours ago when he handed her the pink bunch of roses and held the passenger side door to his Corvette open for her in front of the pre-school. They had driven down to Central Park from there as it had stopped snowing. He had taken her towards the scenic snow covered Balcony and bought her hot chocolate… laughed openly at her excitement over snow for which he had displayed indifference for as he had been around it all his life…talked about his day as she remained fascinated by the beauty of the place while listening to him. Her desire to taken in the chill of the atmosphere with her arms wide open while leaving implied her fondness for winter, clearly in contrast of his… but they had enjoyed themselves there, at least that's what she had been led on to believe.
……...

Sachdev's Residence
8:30 PM

He took quiet steps out of Darya's room after reading her to sleep and made his way down to his study where he is reminded of his commitment regarding the pictures and wonders how he should forward them as he didn't have her email…he has her number…taps down to "K" in his phone book…contemplates for a moment, or two…utilizes the picture messaging feature instead.

His phone pings after 15 or so minutes…

"These are great! I'll frame these…"

An expected smile emerges on to his composed face and his fingers reflexively touch the screen to reply back, "You should, the fifth one is adorable…"

"Beti ki adorable smile hain uss mein issi liye…?" Msg pings a few moments later, he puts aside the case study in his hand and brings himself and his phone out of the study in to the kitchen. His hunger is urging him to fix dinner himself.

"Exactly…" He types back honestly before scanning the fridge for something inviting. Maria's labeled plastic boxes lead him to "Mushroom Stroganoff" and he takes it out to microwave. He settles with his warm dinner plate, a glass of wine, and phone after a few minutes on the dining table. The bites satisfy his appetite, the taste is just as it should be…nothing new.

"We'll get you around Five tomorrow…" He types, unmindful.

"I'll be at the pre-school…have a few submissions to do with the supervisor." She msgs back when he is halfway done with his meal.

"That will work…" He types back and it marks the end of the textual conversation. There is an odd kind of satisfaction he feels while he rinses his plate and wine glass before loading it into the dishwasher. Him stepping out the kitchen while turning the lights off is contrasted with Raina stepping in to through the front door and turning the living room lights on.

"Shaan…" She walks up to him smiling, greets him with a fleeting peck on his cheek. Her stilettos work to her advantage has they make it easier for her to reach up to him.

"A good day..?" He questions without any real interest in her response

"Yeah…! a great one actually…"

"Dinner is in the fri.."

"Oh, no worries…I had it already."

"Okay…" He nods passing her by to head back to his study.

She fishes her cell phone out of her Prada handbag and dials a number from her favorites; she'll multitask her way through the corridor by conversing and dressing out from her formal clothing…the bedroom at the end is just hers now.



P.S: *fingers cross* i'll try and type up the next within this week! lets juts hope it happens...PLEASE share your thoughts, they MOTIVATE me sooo much and are my only reward! I love all the participation you gals have given me...it means so much! 😊

By the way, chandu881, she'll be Khanak Sachdev, if she is ever that, not Khandelwal...This Shaantanu is different than the one in RBO, so much so that I have given him a different last name.

Edited by jenny159 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely!!! Is Armaan really putting up an act???😕 Shaan is lonely.. He just got Darya..😊 Loved his text conversation with Khanak..😊
Looking forward and thanks for writing an amazing update..😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved it :)
i think arman is just doing a duty of a husband not that its bad infact its sweet of him atleast he is trying and khanak also but still they r so difference between them
loved the text msgs between shanak :)))
shan has no feelings for raina his life revolves around dari :)
update soon :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
oops! sorry that was my mistake..im so stuck with Khandelwal..😳
im really sorry for that😆
@ update- Lovely update!
Loved the messaging part a lot😃
Raina is staying in another room now?😕
Waiting for their outing..update soon😊

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