Shanak SS Gunah 6th Feb Part3 page4 replies pg4

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Dear friends,

I started a Shanak FF few days back but my computer suddenly stopped working and after so many days I am coming here. Sorry, I have completely lost interest to continue my FF. So I have decided to write a short story on Shanak. I hope you guys will like it. I am posting part one today. Do read and comment, I will be very happy😃

Love

Payal

"Gunah"

Part 1



Galati mujhse usidin huyi thi jisdin tumse mila tha

Sudharne gaya tha main lekin gunah kar baitha


Shantanu/Shaan was sitting on the sea beach looking at the setting sun. The place is getting dark but not as dark as his life. He is thinking about what happened in last four months of his life. It has completely changed within these four months.

Flashback

Four months ago he met with an accident, his car bumped into a girl. He had few minor bruises but she was highly injured and she completely lost her memory. Shaan's father Sunil Khandelwal wanted to send her to a NGO, in the mean time police will try to find her identity. But Shaan brought her home, he wanted to rectify his mistake; yes, he was drunk while driving. He was coming back from a party. Sunil, a well known rich businessman had a good dealing with the police so Shaan was out of Police's clutch but his conscience was killing him.


Sunil warned him "Shaan she is a young married girl, and everybody knows that in our house there is a young bachelor boy, I mean you; keeping her in our house can bring bad name to our family". Shaan was angry "Dad, I don't care about your so called society and I very well know my boundaries".


Present:

He kept his promise; he never crossed his boundaries until today, one incident which changed everything.


Flashback:

She couldn't remember her name but she knew she was married as she got mangal sutra on her neck and sindoor on her forehead. She used to stay in the guest room. Shantanu's dadi named her Khanak, though dadi belongs to the older generation but she has modern values, she has full trust in her grandson and she started loving Khanak very much.

Shaan wanted to cure Khanak completely, he took her to the best psychiatrist of the town. Shaan tried to make friendship with her.

Shaan found out Khanak doesn't know English properly so he started teaching her. Their friendship really was becoming stronger with each passing day. Shaan, who loved partying used to come back home directly from office to teach Khanak English.

As it's a SS I am not writing Shanak scenes but I want you to imagine RBO Shanak scenes, similar situation, not exactly same 😆I am posting the links.

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=P82y_lOAIW8[/YOUTUBE]

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fei0IPf-y90[/YOUTUBE]

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SzOi2nc6PUM[/YOUTUBE]

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NBvtOg4fAX0[/YOUTUBE]

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GADf_EQXjUk[/YOUTUBE]


Shaan wanted to bring back her memories she too tried verymuch but too much thinking sometimes made her weak, she used to faint and Shaan had to call the doctor.


Things were changing in their life, at one hand they started enjoying their friendship, loved spending time with each other ' they were happy.😃


On the other hand Khanak was becoming weaker everyday, she couldn't remember a single thing and the mangal sutra on her neck was killing her. Shaan couldn't watch her suffering, he blamed himself for her condition ' they were sad.😭


Doctor suggested Shaan: Mr. Khandelwal, I know you want to bring back Khanak's memory but she is stressing herself verymuch. This thing needs time. She needs a break.


Shaan decided to take Khanak for a holiday; him, Khanak and dadi. They planned to go to Bordi beach, 145 km away from Mumbai, a very quiet place ideal for a holiday. Three of them enjoyed a lot. Shaan made Khanak promise him that these three days she will not try to remember her past.😃


Dadi said, I am an old lady tum dono ghum ke aao, no car was available so the hotel manager borrowed them his scooter. Imagine the scooter drive Shanak had in their honeymoon (Khanak not hugging Shaan). Imagine the "hum jo chalne lage song playing at the back ground".


Khanak wanted to learn scooter and Shaan helped her. No, not like what happened in RBO, it was like the Yasharan interview the way Karan was teaching Yashashri.

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BZLlVyQtEi0&feature=results_video&playnext=1&list=PL941C3CA38CFDE0BB[/YOUTUBE]


END OF PART 1

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snigdhanagar thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#2
hey payal gr8 work...👍🏼
dis is something unique...she knws dat shez married bt doesnt knw whid whom??
shaan is doing every poss thing so as khanak cn grt her memory...
its interesting n wht will happ when she will get her memory baq...waiting
continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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lovely update

nice concept in fact a very interesting one

haye the old RBO days ... but penned nicely

she is married and he's trying hard so she can get back her memory

wht change this holiday will bring and wht will happen when she'll get back her memory

lukin fwd to the next update

continue soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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it seems interesting...😊
plz do the update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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@ payalmehra
nice yaar...looking interesting...👍🏼
khanak accident ...she loss memory ...and basically khanak r married?
nice start...shaan and khanak... friendship ... ...nice yaar u upload all pathshala scene ...i am imagine...their friendship,love and nok-jhok
waiting for how they r fallen love with each other...?
waiting for next update ...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow!!! Payel... very interesting start👏
Khanak met with an accident & lost her memory😭...she knows that she is married but don't abt her husband😕
Shaan wants her to get back her memory...their friendship ... very nice😉
waiting 2 c what ll happen on holiday😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
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good one..hope u wont dump this one..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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im in shanak/yasharan land !
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey Nice start😊
Hope they find out about her life soon and waiting to kno wat he did😊
plz continue soon😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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pooja.88, angelic_leena_3, loveYM, sharon18, snigdhanagar, shonai,


Thank you all for loving my SS 🤗 I promise this time I will not dump it😳

Posting the next part soon 😊

Love
Payal

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