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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 2


Shaan was sitting on the sea beach thinking about his life.


Yesterday was the best day of his life. Khanak and Shaan enjoyed very much forgetting about everything else in their life. Scooter ride was fun, they visited a nearby village, had lunch in a small dhaba (first time in Shaan's life), played with sea water. All the time teasing each other and laughing like kids.😳


They came back around 9 PM. They entered dadi's room talking about what fun they had.


Dadi: It seems you two enjoyed very much.😊


Shaan Khanak together: It was the best day of our life Dadi.😃


Dadi: I have a good news for you two. Sunil called, Police found out what Khanak's real identity is. Tomorrow we need to go back to Mumbai.😊


Both Shaan and Khanak were shocked hearing this. Dadi was waiting for their reply, After few seconds both started smiling, faint smile. But none of them asked dadi what Khanak's actual identity is, what's her real name, whose wife she is.


Dadi said : Its quite late, I already had dinner, you two go and have dinner. Tomorrow we need to leave early.


Silently Shaan and Khanak were moving out of the room, dadi stopped them. "Shaan, Sunil told you to call him". Shaan: OK dadi.


They went to the dining area. Khanak said "I am not hungry". Shaan said "Me too, but its not good for you to stay empty stomach, let's have dal roti". Khanak agreed. They ate silently, and then went to their respective rooms (Khanak staying with dadi).


Shaan was not able to sleep. He didn't know what has happened to him. He was waiting for this day. He did a "galati" when his car hit Khanak, for his fault she lost her memory, forgot her identity. He wanted to rectify his mistake. Now his duty is over, he has to send her back from where she belongs. He tossed in bed for sometimes then he got up and headed for the sea beach (it was a seaside hotel).


He saw Khanak sitting there; he came to her and sat beside her. Khanak looked at him. For 30 seconds they were looking at each other. Shaan saw Khanak's eyes are filling up with tears. His heart wanted to cry out loud. He is still trying to find out what is happening to him.😭


Suddenly Khanak rested her head on his chest and started crying. Shaan wanted to comfort her. He hugged her tightly. Khanak was clutching Shaan's shirt, his shirt got drenched by her tears. They didn't know for how long they were like this, as if the time stopped for them.


chup tum raho chup ham rahen
khamoshi ko khamoshi se zindagi ko zindagi se baat karne do

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oO5LzQpMSns[/YOUTUBE]


After some time they broke off from the hug. Shaan: "Let's go, it's quite late now." They started walking towards the hotel, Khanak resting her head on his shoulder and Shaan hugging her. They came near the door of Khanak's room. Shaan: "Go and sleep, you need rest." Shaan came back to his room. He was feeling so empty. His heart knew what was happening to him but his mind was able to control his heart. After sometime he fell asleep.


Khanak was also not able to sleep. She was thinking about last four months. The time she spent with Shaan.

It was dawn and Khanak was still up. She got up and stood in front of the mirror. She could see love in her eyes, love for Shantanu. Last night she saw the same thing on his eyes. She realized they love each other.😊


Shaan woke up when somebody was knocking the door. He opened and saw dadi.


Dadi: Shaan, Khanak is gone. When I woke up she was not on her bed. I found this letter on her bed.


Dadi gives the letter to Shaan.

"Dadi, mujhe sab kuchh yaad a gaya hai. Main wapas ja rahi hun, apne pati ke paas. . Aapki bohut yaad ayegi, mujhe aapse maa se bhi zada pyar mila hai. Aapse bichharneka gham main sahan nahi kar paungi, isliye bina bole ja rahi hun. Shantanu se kahiyega unka ehsan main hamesha yaad rakhungi. Aapki Khanak."

The letter fell off to the ground, Shaan was dumbfounded. Tears came to his eyes. His mind couldn't control his heart this time. Shaan: "dadi, I love her dadi, I love her".😭

Galati mujhse usidin huyi thi jisdin tumse mila tha

Sudharne gaya tha main par gunah kar baitha

The accident which made him meet her was his "galati" and falling in love for a already married girl was his "gunah".

Precap: Shaan comes to know Khanak reached her home safely.

Edited by payalmehra - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#12
beautiful update but very touching

awww she left widout saying anything though she knows that he luvs her

i juz wish that even her heart win over her mind

poor guy... i feel so sad

payal plz make them meat at least... they can go thru difficulties but without shaan and khanak together it cant be shanak

and she rem everything all of a sudden... how she has reached her home

update very soon

the song selection was fab... one of my fav
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Posted: 13 years ago
#13
Very different love story, Wonderful and so beautiful. I hope Khanak's husband is not there or she got married to a wrong and while she was running for him, she met with the accident.
Edited by aditi305 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#14
abb kya hoga??
both shaan n khanak realised their love for each other..
n know that the other loved too but didnt have a proper confession..
really did khanak got back her memory r is she running away from her past??
do continue soon..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#15
amazing story...now i'm getting egar to read whole story...plz do update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#16
nice part...👍🏼
really khanak back her memory?i don't think so
i think she run away from the shaan... because both realize they love each other...and daadi news hurt them so much...their speechless emotional so nice...
i like this story so much
waiting for the next part ...about the khanak husband and her family...
update soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#17
Nice update 😊

Continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#18
Wow the update was lovely😊
its such a dilemma they both love each other and are happy with each other ...if not for her nagging past things wud have been really simple😔
I wonder if she actually remembered her past...even if she did something tells me its something she wud have been glad to forget...
waiting for ur next update😊 really liked this one😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#19
hey payal wonderful update yaar...it was so emotional...
dey both knw dat dey r in love bt cnt confess...😭😭
omg she got her memory baq??😲😲 aweee poor shaan...
update soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#20
really lovely emotional update 😊

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