FF: Sahara nahi...Sathi( Part6 -pg7)11.feb.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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hi guys ,
here i come with my 1st FF...i don't know how much parts i can write but i will try my best.

if u like it then comment...n ignore my mistakes coz it's my 1st attempt.

FF: Janata hun Apko Sahare ki Jaroorat nahi ...
main sirf sath dene aya hun
Introduction:

1. karan wahi as karan khanna: he is very sweat n loving guy. he is madly in love with khank.n soon he will get married with her.he live alone n he is sucesseful in his profession

2. yashu as khanak: she is also luv karan very much n happy with him.she is leaving with her mother.

3. karan tacker as shan khandelwal: he is sunil khandelwal's son who is well known bussinessman in mumbai. he n karan r best buddies from college days. shan is also soon getting married with jeevika but this is arrange marriage coz he is family oriented guy so he say yes to jeevika coz his family wanted this.

4. krystal as jeevika: she luvs shan... n she also know that he not luv her but only for his family he said yes to her n she is happy in it.

guys tell me intro kaisa laga...i like karan wahi , i really wanna see yashu with her so i get him in it...but don't worry at the end our shanak/yasharan is always together no one can come between thembus wait n watch.

do the reply soon...then i update my 1st part
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Maneesha_Shanak thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice start...seems interesting plz continue...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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interesting...
kya baat hai...yesterday OS and now FF...wow!
go ahead...KW so nice yaar ...
update 1st part i am waiting...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Good start 👍🏼

Continue soon. waiting to read first part 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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sry dint get ur name...😕
fm os to ff grt yaar...👏
n khanak n karan khanna love each other???????
really wanna knw hw shanak will come together...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thanx guys for u r response ...here is 1st part

Part 1: Two strangers meet

shan like to listen good music so whenever he get chance he always visit music shop n buy music cds for him.

one day afternoon ...shan feels bored so he get off from office by taking sunil's permission , so to cheer up his mood he decide to visit city's best music shop it is his favourate music shop . he enter in the shop n try to find some good music cds then he choose some of them...n there is facility in this shop that u can listen cds by using head phones n then if u like it u can buy it. so shan decide to listen some cds n then decide which ones he wanna buy.

he fixex headphone on his ears but befor he play music he listen a girl humming some song ...1st he ignore it but then the noise comes loudly so he get irritate.then he call that girl

shan: hellow.( no response...he agian try) hellow...( n shake his hand infront of that girls face)

girl: ( affraid) what r u doing

shan: ji muze apaka nam janana tha

girl: (confuse) kya...mera naam...par main apako kyun batao

shan: ji maine socha ...ke ap itana achha ga rahi hain to apaka naam bhi accha hi hoga.

girl: really...apako such mein mera gana achha laga... chal khanak kisiko to tera gana achha laga...aaj ek ko laga kal sabko accha lagega

shan; oh to apaka naam khanak hain

khanak: ji...
shan: apako sirf gana gane ka shauk hain ya fir sunane ka bhi hain

khanak: dono

shan: to ap mera dard samaj sakati hain

khanak: kaunasa dard.

shan: yahi ke agar koi achhe gane ko buri tarike se gaye to kitana dard hota hain...jo muze apakkaghatiya gana sunane ke bad ho raha hain

khanak:(agrily) to apko mera gana ghatiya laga...ap apne ap ko samajhate kya hain...apki himmat kaise hui muzase aise bat karane ki...aj tak kisine muzase aise bat nahi ki ...aur ap...( she left from there)

after sometime both come to counter to paid bill. khanak see shan is also there...she is still hurted...but shan after seeing her face feel bad for her

shan: i'm sorry ...mera wo matlab nahi tha main to bus mazak kar raha tha.

khanak: muze apaki koi bat nahi sunani...bhaiyya jaldi se bill de do...muze yahan se jaldi bahar jana hain..pata nahi kaise kaise lig ate hainyahan

shan: i'm really sorry ...( khanak give him stern look)...accha thik hain maf nahi karana to mat karo kum se kum ye to batao tumhein ye cds kaha mili main inhein hi dhoondh raha tha( he try to take it from har)

khanak: (slap on hi s hand) ye meri hain...( she left that shop)

shan: ouch...badi tej lagati hain...bhaiyya kya bill hua

keeper: sir ...ye ligiye apaka bill aur madam ye ap...arye ye madam chali gayi...bill bhi nahi diya...kya sir aap dono ki ladai ki wajase wo madam bina bill diye chali gayi ...pata nahi kaise kaise log ate hain yaha...

shan: aap ek kam kijiye ..wo bill bhi main de deta hun ligiye paise.( also left the shop).

khanak:(come to shop) are bhaiyya i'm sorry ye lijiye apke paise...us idiot ki wajah se...

keeper: apake paise to unhine de diye
khanak: kisane

keeper: jo aap se lad rahe the

khanak: kya...par apane unase paise kyuin liye

keeper: are madam humein humare paise mile ...wo phir kisi se bhi mile ho...ap aisa kijiye unhein hi ye paise dijiye

khanak left the shop with anger...thinking herself( usane mere paise kyuin diye...ub use wapas dene ke liye milana padega...no way... main uasaki shakl bhi dekhana nahi chahati)



tell me guys how it is hope u all like it 😊...plz ignore the mistakes


Edited by loveYM - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Its is so interesting afterall we are miss our shanak badly.

so thank you for this lovely intro & also sure your story
Love you😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey could u plz reveal ur name😊

Oh wow another FF and its pretty interesting.I liked the first part that was so sweet😊 first meeting itself fight😊Awww im missing Shanak badly...Plzzz chuck the unwanted's soon and get these together😆
Great start👍🏼Plz continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow!😛
nice start... 👍🏼really i miss shanak nok-zhok...and your start ff with this i love this ...
khanak hate shaan in first meeting wow that's one very cute ...looking forward what happen in second meeting...hamari "zhasi ki rani "always ready for that...
waiting for next update...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: sharon18

Hey could u plz reveal ur name😊


Oh wow another FF and its pretty interesting.I liked the first part that was so sweet😊 first meeting itself fight😊Awww im missing Shanak badly...Plzzz chuck the unwanted's soon and get these together😆
Great start👍🏼Plz continue soon



@bold: i second sharon in this..
r if u dont mind change the character n name of shaan's supposed to be fiance..u can even have it is natasha if u dont mind..nahi toh no pbm..i can always imagine tat way..

waise nice start..

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