FF: Sahara nahi...Sathi( Part6 -pg7)11.feb. - Page 3

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Posted: 13 years ago
#21
i love this part...😛
karan not introduce khanak as his girlfriend he only said she is friend...
khanak in white saari...i love this dialogue when shaan describe her step by step and at last he said u r very beautiful...
hey shaan going to kiss her...very fast guy...
why she move back...and what happen why she crying ????
i think karan and khanak engage... that's why she fill guilty and she move back...
waiting for next update...


PS:change the title of Post then we can recognized u update next part please do that...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#22
Hey Amrita😃 update the main heading, otherwise no one will see the update...
Hey that was beautiful, Shaan and Khanak dancing and they get so involved unknowingly, well that is bound to happen cause destiny want's them together😃 hope they realize that soon😊
Im so glad they patched up ,but hope they fight in future also otherwise il miss their cute encounters😆
Waiting for ur next😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#23
ok guys tomorrow i will give the next part..i just hope that u enjoy my FF...n not getting bored while reading it...plz give suggetions or critisims is most welcome...

thanx n luv u all..for ur comments...who hit the like button also
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Posted: 13 years ago
#24
Lovely updates

their nok jhok is super fun

interesting story line

em luvin it

update soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#25
nice story do continue it update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#26
hi guys sorry for the late ...
.thanx so much for u r lovely comments...n thanx to all of them who hit like button for me...here is next part.
PART - 4

khanak run from the party...karan follow her...he come to her...( near their car)

karan: kya hua khanak tum wha se aise chali kyun ayi...aur tum ro kyun rahi ho...tumhari tabiyat to theek hain .
khanak: karan muze yaha achha nahi lag raha main ghar jana chahati hun
karan: par hua kya...
khanak; kuch nahi bas main ghar jana chahati hu
karan: theek hain...( both seata in his car)
khanak keep quite in whole journy...karan get worried for her...she just look out of the window n recalls the moments of dance...shans touch...his look...his warmth...she started to hate herself...(they reach khanak's home)
karan: khanak tumhara ghar aa gaya...tum jakar aaram karo...main kal tumase milane aunga...she just nodded her head...n get out of car enter to her house.

after party get finished shan also come in his room whiout changing his cloths led down on bed...n close his eyes but he can't sleep coz whenever he close eyes khanaks face comes infront of him...her eyes, her smile...her inoonnce...her touch...khanak impact on his mind...
shan: such main khanak tum bahut khubsurat ho...kash tum aise waha se na jati ..main hamesha isi tarah tumhare sath rehana chahata hun...
shan: dude...yeh kya ho raha hain tuze pehale to kabhi bhi kisi ladaki ke bare main tune aisa nahi socha to aj khanak ko dekhane ke bad kya ho raha hain...then slowly get asleep.

next day...at 9.00 a.m in khanak's home...khanak phone bill rings...she pick up it.
khanak: hello..
karan: kaisi ho ...actually main ne tumhe ye kahene ke liye phane kiya tha ke aj hum shopping pe chalate hain...waise bhi bahut jald hamari shadi honewali hai...to shadi ki shopping bhi ho jayegi aur...tumhara dil bhi behal jayega...waise bhi kal tum bahut upset thi...to tumhara mood change ho jayega...

khanak: par...main kahi nahi jana chahati...
karan; par var kuch nahi...tum 4 baje taiyyar rehana ..main lene aa raha hun
khanak: theek hain...
karan: ok...aur han...i luv u...
khanak: i luv u too...

she hang the phone...but her mind is still desturb...
khanak: tumhein ye kya ho gaya tha khanak...karan tumase itana pyar karate hain aur tum...
khanak: muze ...karan se bat karani hogi...
at afternoon...today shan take off from his office... in shan home jeevika comes...

jeevika: hi shan...
shan: hi...
jeevika:kya kara rahe ho...
shan: kuch khas nahi...bas
jeevika: achha hain...
shan: to tum kehana kya chahati ho agar main kuch na karu to main ahha hun...
jeevika: main to bas...waise agar tum kuch nahi kar rahe ho to plz mere sath shopping ke liye chalo na...waise bhi main agale hafte usa ja rahi hun to muze kuch kapade kharidane hain...plz
shan: ok...main abhi taiyyar haokar atta hun
jeevika: ok
in city shopping moll 1st karan n khanak reach there...then after some time shan n jeevika laso come there...
karan n khanak try to select...bridal dress for her...he ask her about her choice... but she wanna give him a shervani as gift...so she goes quite far from him..she also try to search a dress for him...but she come to a area..there is beautiful red colour sari which khanak's like it's most...she stare at that sari...n thinks kitani khubsurat hain...
jeevika totalylost in her shopping so shan is now getting bored there so he just walk here n there n look at shops in the moll...but then he comes to a sari shop...n he saw that karan is stering at a sari...she looks so beautiful...he get mesmarised by her beauti...khanak feels that someone stare looking at her so look up...but shan hide hinself behind a piller...she find no one is there so she hit her head...shan smiles on her this action... but when karan call her she leave her thought n goes to him n then both get out of the mall...then shan come in that shop bought that sari...at that time jeevika come there...she saw sari in his hand...
jeevika: kitani khubsurat hain...tumane mere liye kharidi
shan: nahi...
jeevika: phir kisake liye...
shan: (he ignore her question)...tumhari shopping ho gayi...to chale...n he also get her out of the moll...





whole room is lighten by candels...there r baloons in the room...shan enter the room..he saw the decoration...n smile shimself...

khanak: shantanu...( he turns ...there is khanak ...she wear red colour sari n looks as newly married girl...she looks so beautiful)

shan come close to her...she is blushing...he hold her waist get her close to him...then put her hairstrand behind her ear...his touch makes her shiver...she tries to move away but he hold her more tightly close to him... both looks at each others eyes...he holds cheek n caressing it...then get his lips close to her's..there lips r just half inch away from each others ...but khanak
push him back forcfully...n run away...

shan: khanak...n he get awake from his dream...

PRECAP: shan n khanak getting married

hope u guys like it...plz do the comment or hit the like button...i'm waiting for u r response.








P.S - who read my FF to them only one request not to forget comment on yashu's profile...it will help to increase her rank...i know it's unrelated but i have to mention...coz ppl comments on ffs but forget to comment on yashu's profile...it takes just two minutes...so plz do comments..it's humble request.

Edited by loveYM - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#27
lovely update

wow he full fida on her ... but i feel sorry for karan yaar

poor guys he luvs her so much...

i hope khanak realize wht she feels and they can sort out everything

at least jeevika is leaving for U.S so more shanak moments

the dream was superb i was imagining the SR 2

haye the precap is juz awesome... i hope dats not a dream

but em luvin it

update soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#28
amrita...nice yaar...😛
khanak and karan ki shadi?...thats why she fill guilty and ran away...
ok i got answer why she ran away from the shaan in party... ...
in shoping mall scene also nice... Red sari...wow!and he was staring the khanak...
shaan dream so cute yaar...😍
and what is this?Preacap
shan n khanak getting married?
waiting for next part update soon..

yes amrita after this i comment the yashu rank...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#29
nice dream amrita..
now i wonder is this precap for real r it wud also be a dream..
dont know y but i loved when shaan said tat saree is not for her to jeevika..
(may be i know y..n u too might..😊 cant see anyone between our shanak)
both occupying the dreams of the other..
do continue soon..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#30
hey amrita really liked dis part...
wowww shan puurchasing saree 4 khanak n i loved dat shaan said dis is nt 4 u jeevika😆
i feel khanak doesnt love karan...
n omg wht a precap...shanak getting married...hw is dat poss ...does anything will happ to karan😲😕
update soon...😉

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