if Wishes were horses Part 30,Page 79,3rd November

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

hey sangita... 🤗
i really lked dis story line...
khanak as tomboy wow...unique concept...😃
waiting for nxt part...

Thanks Snigdha!!we've seen several portrayals of Khanak.So thought let me make her a tomboy and see the response!!!

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goood start!! :) im sure it is shaan to who gunjan ran to! haha right? :P haha

and omgg! khanak is like a BOY! hahaha hope she becomes a girl soon! :) haha good stuff you got here! :) looking forward to the next one!

Thanks Sravya!!Let her remain a tomboy for sometime!!!

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Great Start, love how you described Gunjan's bedroom, really pretty!
Lol loved this

"Kyun sabko daraana chaahati hai Gunju?Mujhe un kapdon mien dekhke sab behosh ho jaayenege.Moreover who cares!!!As long as my friends,family and teachers don't disown me,i am good'. "

🤣 That was awesome, Love Khanak's dialogues. And I'm gonna guess Shaan's on the laptop? :) Can't wait to read more

Thanks Afiya!!coming from a talented writer like you is a great morale booster.hope i can live up to all these expectations!!

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Originally posted by: xoxRBOxox
Hey Sangita,
Very Impressive start...I'm knocked...acha hai bite your nails in tensions...very soon its going to be role reversal...we'll be biting our nails in anticipation of update😃

Your command on language is very good...and narration was perfect, hard to believe its your first attempt...the detailed description of Gunjan was very impressive..and Khanak total opposite...sorry if I missed it...just curious abt lenght of Khanak hairs, going by tomboy description is it very short...trying to imagine Khanak...is it somewhat like how yashu looked during her photo shootout in her hot pants with short hair or something like Kajol in kuch Kuch Hota Hai...hope I'm not being a pest!!!

Hayye thoda toh ettiquette dalo Khanak mein...i simply can't stand people burping loudly on table...and youngsters toh its totally noo noo...bade buzarg are excused...thoda elegant dikhao...my only shikaayat/request...I love Khanak tooo much so she has to be perfect😉...almost😆...

now I am already biting nails...how this union of ShaNak is going to happen without anyone being hurt...

Thanks Sangita...all the best...welcome to the world of naggers🤣
Next update kab ab????????

Thans Ann!!!A role reversal!!!awww!!!that was so sweet!!!

Khanak's hair length is a mystery!!!And i hope you keep nagging always.can't really pen down how i feel right now!!all this adulation is yet to sink in!!!

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Posted: 13 years ago

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hey sangita... great start👏👏👏great storyline..i love the way u describe kolkata city and khanak..looking forward to your next update..😍

Thanks Leena for your lovely comments!!!

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wow!!! what a great start👏...loved it

they way u describe Kolkata with historical details ... was superb👍🏼

loved Gunjan's room description 😍

& Khanak... My God!!! she likes football😆 ... but, i have started loving this new tomboy Khanak!!! ...😆

waiting 4 the next update😍

Thanks Shonai!!!you know the city,so am sure you'll be able to visualise better!!! hope to include a lot of kolkata and of course sweets!!!

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Sangita????????where r u????

at home.beti sar pe disco kar rahi hai.😭

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: sangitasengupta

Aww thanks, not sure about the talented part ! 😆 But I really am loving your writing so far, so update soon!

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Hey Sangita

Awesome start dear :)

Loved it campletely. it has a fresh touch Specially i am excited abt the Bangla flavour :) & First update was super cool :)

hey firstly Very Sorry for the late reply. U are an amazing writer cant belive its your First FF. Loved the intro:) Gunjan is very sweet. Lolz & khanak is pakki badmash ;)

I would love to read badmash khanak. but please dont make her irritating ...Sorry if i hurt you i just love khanak isliye bola :) I simply love your start :)

U have seriously raised my expactation ...Wonderful discribtion abt Kolkata ...Loved it campletely.

Yiipppeee Gunjan run inside to check her mail matlan Shaan ki entry ...but this is gonna be super intresting ...Gunjan is sweet & innocent & shaan's Finacee So Khanak ko kaise pasand karega & their love stroy will be super exciting ...Looking forward to it

Continue Soon Pleaseee

Best Luck

Love

Prajnal.

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Hey Sangita

Awesome start dear :)

Loved it campletely. it has a fresh touch Specially i am excited abt the Bangla flavour :) & First update was super cool :)

hey firstly Very Sorry for the late reply. U are an amazing writer cant belive its your First FF. Loved the intro:) Gunjan is very sweet. Lolz & khanak is pakki badmash ;)

I would love to read badmash khanak. but please dont make her irritating ...Sorry if i hurt you i just love khanak isliye bola :) I simply love your start :)

U have seriously raised my expactation ...Wonderful discribtion abt Kolkata ...Loved it campletely.

Yiipppeee Gunjan run inside to check her mail matlan Shaan ki entry ...but this is gonna be super intresting ...Gunjan is sweet & innocent & shaan's Finacee So Khanak ko kaise pasand karega & their love stroy will be super exciting ...Looking forward to it

Continue Soon Pleaseee

Best Luck

Love

Prajnal.

Thanks Pranjal for the lovely comments!!!and i'm not at all upset,even i get irritated with nagging characters.Khanak is a tomboy but very sensitive!!!I'll try and keep her under check and balance😆

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