sangi title bhi edit karo na..
*off to read*
*edited*
sangi loved the description u gave abt kolkata n then the way u portrayed gunju's room..u have some atistic skill in that which will help have a picture of our own with ur descriptions..
khanak a tomboy..i am so loving it..
LOL!!!! torn tee n shorts,uncombed hair,unwashed clothes..i just imagine n i'm laughing like anything..
haan haan agar khanak girly clothes pehnegi toh sab ka hosh udd jaayega..
i'm waiting for shaan's hosh to go seeing her..
but u have made him gunju's fiance..
i still think how will shanak unite..so waiting impatiently for ur further updates..
shaan is calling gunju..by d way have shaan n his parents were informed abt gunju's health condition??
i dont know but i hav some gut feel that this might be a reason in bringing khanak to shaan..by some means..
do continue soon..u have good diction over language..so no biting nails sangi..
👏 for ur 1st update..
🤗 jhadhu ki jappi for ur coming updates to lessen ur stress of thinking will it be good r not..
Didn't I say you are a veteran when it comes to guessing plots!!Thank you for such a wonderful comment and of course the jaadu ki jhappi!!
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