if Wishes were horses Part 30,Page 79,3rd November

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Posted: 13 years ago

#271

Nice going Brishti!

For a moment I didn't realize that it was Khanak's monologue..LOL then it struck me..

Hmmm..Shan baba is HOH..Khanak darling is in the danger zone..cool!

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Posted: 13 years ago

#272

Wooow what a goood update continue

Thanks Aasma!!!

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Posted: 13 years ago

#273

lovely update

the dialogue or the monologue was penned amazingly

i loved it

my bride... hayeela

update soon

Thanks Rida!! Hayeela!!! glad that I could make you happy!!!

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Posted: 13 years ago

#274

Lovely update
Khanak want to remain a tomboy n shaan calling her bride wow!
When she will fall in love with shaan n how will wait eagerly for that update :))

Thanks Heer! when and how are the two most vital questions in my mind as well!!

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Posted: 13 years ago

#275

Hai Sangi,
Super loved.. ❤️ ❤️ ❤️
Khanak's outburst (i cant say it as a talk..LOL!!!) was awesome.. But i loved more the way Shaan responded to her.. Haaye... Kya dialogues maara.. It is belonging n not possessing.. Awesome..
LOL!!! n he is going to call her his bride till she gives up.. Looks like i'll be enjoying this love from one side n hate from other side realtionship.. Dying to see the moment Khanak gives up..
So now we r going back to the present..ie, Singapore..
Awaiting to know more about their life n how they r to accomodate the other..

PS: For me update was chotu..I think that it was chotu n just not my mind playing games..

Super love you Ramzz!!! the story is moving to Singapore from the next update onwards and I want to exploit the country fully!!

I know the update was chotu... but what to do,i can't write pages!!! am still trying...hope to get there soon!!!

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Posted: 13 years ago

#276

Nice update Sangita

Khanak wants to remain tomboy and waiting to see how she will resist Shaan.

Thanks Sudha!! let's see how she resists him!!

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Posted: 13 years ago

#277

Khanak's monologue was awesome!! and Shaan calling her my Bride!! hope his bride doesnt kill him :D

Love your comments Shalini!! thank you!!

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Posted: 13 years ago

#278

hi sangita...update is really nice...waiting for shaan to change this tomboy...😊

thanks Niki!!! me too waiting😳

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Posted: 13 years ago

#279

loved dis update...khanak said she wnt change fr anyone...
n shaan calling her bride dis is irritating her...😆😆😆
it wnt be easy fr shaan to manao khanak...😆😆 cant wait fr deir love track...
waiting fr nxt part..😃

Thanks Snigdha!! Shaan's doing everything out of love,even irritating her!!