FF: Partial Amnesia Complete! - Page 26

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Part 40

2nd May 2012, 11:40 PM

Natasha snuggled closer to Mitul under the sheet just as Mitul raised his arm to engulf her shoulder and caress her bony arm. He looked at her lovingly as Natasha closed her eyes attempting to sleep while trying to act all cool about the fact that her husband had just made love to her. But her heart was still beating madly and no matter how much she tried to hide it, she knew in her heart of hearts that Mitul would not be fooled. "Pata hain Mitul---I don't feel like I'm pregnant! I mean no morning sickness, no chakkar, no mood swings----" she started casually. "---and even now----I didn't feel any change when you were----" she stopped abruptly as she felt the heat rise in her face again. Too much information! Her mind scolded her.

Mitul laughed. "I felt a change----" he whispered lovingly in her ear. "You've become more beautiful---" he said simply and smiled cupping Natasha's facein his hands.

Natasha blushed but tried not to make it too obvious. "Okay so Mummy jee is due to come here next month and I need your help to set up the room . It's your holiday tomorrow and I could use some help while the nausea is not attacking me and -----" She stopped as she saw Mitul sigh pointedly.

"A guy is trying to be romantic here!!" he said with mild indignation.

"Don't be. It doesn't suit you." Natasha said bluntly.

Mitul looked slightly crestfallen and made a noise that sounded something like 'hurmphhh-w--men'. Natasha continued as though nothing had interrupted her. " ---and we need to tell her about---about the baby----though she'll probably make me out to be six MONTHS pregnant rather than six weeks---" Natasha said rolling her eyes as Mitul laughed. Natasha pushed herself closer to Mitul's body as he squeezed her, and caressed her stomach under the sheet. "I was thinking about Khanak----" she said suddenly after a pause making Mitul temporary stop playing with Natasha's navel button.

"What about her----" Mitul sighed and asked.

"You know---about how she must be feeling----I mean she looks all happy on the surface----but you know----she'll be feeling so left out-----I mean SUB pregnant hain!"

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2nd May 2012, 11:50 PM

"Sub pregnant hain----" Khanak said, putting her head on Shaan's bare chest .They had been lying in bed breathless after making love and Khanak had sprung this statement at Shaan just two minutes after they were done. Shaan lowered his chin a bit to look at her and decipher her expression. He secretly wished she would repeat what she had said even though he had heard her perfectly. "Kya kahaan tumnay?" he asked, realizing his wish was not secret anymore. He really DID want Khanak to repeat what she had said. He had to confirm whether the tone of her voice was the same as he had imagined.

"Mainay kaha kay---kay sub pregnant hain----" Khanak repeated.

Yes. He was right. There was, undoubtedly, disappointement in Khanak's tone. Shaan played with Khanak's hair strands and brought them behind her ears while Khanak played inci spincy spider on Shaan's chest, deep in thought. Shaan grinned. "Main nahi hoon!"

Khanak punched him in the chest. "Shaantanuuu!" she cried stretching the 'u' in the tone that was more known as whining.

"I'm serious. You said 'sub' pregnant hain I said main nahi hoon! Why do I deserve a punch for that?" Shaan sniggered.

"Rehnay dain! Aap nahi samjhay gay---" Khanak said resignedly, trying to let go of the topic though her disappointment stayed. Shaan smiled and kissed Khanak on the nose, pulling her closer. Khanak slightly giggled at the tickling on her nose. "Waisay Shaantanu----mujhay yaad hain----jub ap nay pregnant honay ka naatak kiya tha---taakay MAIN convince ho sakoo kay Maa banna kitna mushkil hota hain!"

Shaan laughed at Khanak's recollections. "Haan that was so stupid. Tumhay pata hain Khanak---" Shaan said excitedly lifting himself to lean on the bed's head and look straight at Khanak. "jub tum ASLEE main pregnant thee na----tub mujhay pata chala kay---kay tumharay liyay yay sub kitna asaan hain----" he paused, recollecting and at the same time realizing that the mention of his son did not hurt anymore.

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3rd May 2012, 12:00 AM

"Ub shayad bhabhi kay liyay asaan na ho Tasha----" Mitul said to Natashas seriously, thinking deeply.

Natasha lifted her head from the warmth of Mitul's chest and looked at him. "Why would you say that? She's gone though this before. She's a strong Dhuwadi girl!" she said laughing.

"Hmmm---I don't know Tasha---sometimes I worry for her----you know---emotionally---she still doesn't remember what it was like to bear a child----I'm just afraid that---that if they plan a family and bhabhi still doesn't remember---it will just lead to frustrations----impatience----I'm just-----I just don't want anything to affect her---she can't stress herself about stuff at this point in time----"

"She'll do fine Mitul----" Natasha said holding his face. Mitul still did not seem convinced. "Oh cmon---you're the one who kept stressing about the heart being more important than the mind---aur ub dekho---Brain Surgeon Mitul speaking again!" Mitul smiled and kissed her on the cheek. " Don't worry Mitul----Shaan will be much more careful this time round----he's gone through enough----he won't take risks---they won't plan a baby so soon"

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3rd May 2012, 12:05 AM

"Ek baat kahoon Shaantanu---" Khanak whispered.

There it was, Shaan thought. Khanak would state a wish of having a baby and he would be stuck. He wondered how many more moments he'd have in life when he would NOT be stuck in the middle of a dodgy situation. Signing he said. "Kya?"

"Main soch rahee thee----kah---kah---zaroori toh nahi hain na----kah humara ITNEE jadi phir say bacha ho----" she said making Shaan's mouth drop open in shock. Fortunately Khanak did not notice as she had become increasingly busy in playing inci spincy spider on Shaan's chest again. Shaan allowed her to continue without interrupting "I mean---main soch rahee thee----kah doh maheenay baad college kay exams day doon-----tohh agar aap ko sahee lagta hain toh main---tuitions----" she said cautiously wondering what Shaan's reaction would be. Had she said such a thing in Dhulwadi she'd have been considered an outcast immediately, but living in the city had taught her to expect anything, moreso from the man who lay beside her.

Shaan held Khanak's face and swooped down to kiss her on her forehead. "Ofcourse!!" he said breathlessly relieved. "Khanak yay bhee koi poochnay ki baat hain!?" he said happily. "Ofcourse you can take your exams, ofcourse you can study!!Ermmm buss ermm tumhara tutor AADMI nahi hona chahiyay----or the deal is off!"he added sternly.

"Sach!!" Khanak's excitement had no bounds. She jumped in bed letting go of the sheets that she had covered herself with, then immediately realizing and grabbing them again to cover herself.

Shaan grinned naughtily and pulled her closer to himself. "Why are you bothering-----I've already seen every inch of your body----" he said huskily and kissed her luscious lips before Khanak could answer.

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The next two weeks passed by in a blur of happiness mingled with worry; happiness at Shaan and Khanak finally living their life to the fullest and worry with Khushboo's complications in her pregnancy suddenly mounting. Everything had been going on perfectly till Khushboo began to complain of increasing back aches right after her Godh bharai a week ago. She was in her eight month. Geeta examined her and told her, looking at her ultrasound that the position of the baby had shifted and she would need to be operated. Akshay took the week off work and stayed by Khushboo's side day and night.

In the mean time Shaan did all he could to cover up for Akshay in his absence. He begun to enjoy the project that Akshay had left incomplete and showed extraordinary excitement in visiting the clients, sponsors and even team leads working on the product to ensure that it was a success. Sunil got a major surprise when Shaan came up to him one day and said "Dad—you know I kind of don't have any singing contracts at the moment---and I errr kind of like what I'm doing here---so---err----just for ---err to keep me busy----errr" Shaan had not even completed the sentence when Sunil had taken him into a big hug and said "That's my boy!"

20^th May 2012, 11:30 AM

Khushboo's scream echoed in the entire house that morning.She had been rushed to the hospital where Geeta had urgently told Akshay that she would be operating right then.

"WHAT?!" Akshay had panicked. "But she's in her eight month!"

"We need to Akshay. Trust me." She said as she went into the operation theatre leaving a harassed Akshay staring behind.

Dadi, Madhvi, Sunil, Natasha,Khanak, Shaan were all there. Shaan felt a painful sense of dj vu as he looked at the maternity ward, his family and the familiar setting of them being assembled right here many months ago. He diverted his mind by walking upto Akshay and clapping him on the back. "It's going to be okay bro---" he said smiling slightly. Akshay nodded dazedly. Khanak came over and leaned against Shaan. He turned to look at her and then looked at Natasha who looked equally worried. "Sit down you two----Natasha sit!" he said as he held Khanak's hand and made her sit on the sofa.

An hour and half later the door of the operation theatre opened and Geeta came out smiling broadly. "It's a girl! It's a beautiful girl!"

Akshay was besides himself with joy. He ran to hug Geeta tightly, then his mother, then his father and everyone else. "Khushboo----how's she?" Akshay said wiping his eyes as he withdrew from Shaan and looked at Geeta.

"Unconscious----she'll be fine----the baby is in the incubator----premature-----you can't hold her yet Akshay----" Geeta said.

Akshay nodded vigourously, the lump in his throat still visible. "Khushboo will be fine right---"he asked again. Geeta nodded smiling. "I'm a father! I have a daughter-----I'm a father to a daughter-----" he kept repeating as he hugged everyone again one by one. Natasha was beaming and doing a little dance "I'm a maasi---I'm a maasi----" she chanted. "Sit down Natasha!" Khanak pulled at her arm grinning.

"Where is my grand child?!" came a booming voice that made Khanak's insides churn with discomfort as she turned in fear.

Natasha squealed. "Daddd!!" she went forward and hugged her father.

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20^th May 2012, 01:30 PM

After having a good look at Khushboo and Akshay's daughter and making sure that everything was under control (Khusboo though still had to gain consciousness) the entire Khandelwal family minus Madhvi and Akshay went back to their daily routines. Mitul had come over and pulled Natasha's hand and taken her to the car inspite of her protests. 'You need to rest!' he had exclaimed. ' Oh shut up and go back to your surgery---' Natasha had said grumblingly but in a low voice so that Mitul could not hear as she sat in the car and drove away with Shaan and Khanak.

They had decided to take shifts to visit the hospital. Khanak had volunteered to come to the hospital later in the evening and stay with Khushboo. For some reason when she told Shaan her wishes, he had grinned broadly and she could have sworn it was not the random oh-you-care-for-my-family-so-much smile. Shaan was up to something, she knew it as she looked at him sideways. During the ride Mr.Agarwal called to tell Natasha that he was going to a meeting and would return to the hospital in the evening. When Natasha announced this in the car cheerfully, Khanak did not smile. Neither did Shaan notice, nor Natasha.

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20^th May 2012, 11:15 PM

Khanak checked her watch for what Natasha thought was the hundredth time in the last 1 hour.

"Checking your watch won't make Shaan just pop out of thin air" Natasha said yawning but not removing her eyes from her little niece in the incubator who she saw from the glass barrier separating them. She pouted "She's such an angel. Why can't I hold her?" she said.

"Whining won't make her jump out of that cot and come into your arms" Khanak said, feeling satisfied at her intelligent retort. Natasha turned to look at her accepting defeat and smiling. They had come to the hospital to see that Khushboo had gained consciousness and had been taken to see her baby and even hold her tiny form on her insistence. Even though it had made Khanak and Natasha happy they could not help but show a little disappointment at not being able to hold her as well. Khanak had good control over her emotions but Natasha had been complaining ever since. Khanak, taking it to mean that Natasha was having her own mood swings due to her pregnancy,ignored her random outbursts.

"Natasha! Khanak! Chalo the nurse is taking my princess to feed, you guys can hold her!!" Akshay said stiding in the corridor happily, with Mr. Agarwal by his side who was equally grinning. Natasha squealed in delight and Khanak took her arm feeling butterflies in her own stomach and wondering why she felt them. Was it nervousness? Was it excitement? Khanak could not explain the feeling of being so close to holding a tiny living human form in her hands.

"Here you go!" Akshay gave the baby carefully into Natasha's arms. "There's your maasi, princess---she's the one who's going to spoil you---" he said as Natasha held her as though she was holding a delicate ornament made of glass. Mr Agarwal smiled heartily at his daughter and grand daughter. The nurse stood at a distance letting the family enjoy the special moment.

"I'm going to check on Khushboo---" Akshay said moving forward. "Send her in after 5 minutes. She needs to feed" he added sternly. Natasha gave him an eye rolling smile as he left.

"Yay lo Khanak----pakro isay----" Natasha said kindly to Khanak as she gestured to take the baby from her. Khanak's hands trembled slightly and as her heart leapt and so did her hands to hold the new born.

"NAHI!" Mr. Agarwal's booming voice said loudly. "Yay meri naati ko nahi uthayay gee!!" he said.

Khanak jumped as though hit by an electric shock. Natasha looked at her father in disbelief. "Dad---"

"Mainay kaha yay meri beti ko nahi uthayay gee----iss larki ka manhoos saaya meri naati par nahi parna chahiyay Natasha---" Mr Agarwal said derangedly raising his finger towards Khanak. Yay widhwa-----yay upshagun larki MERI naati ko godh main laigee?! MERI NAATI ko?! Aisa main kabhi nahi honay doon ga!"

"DAD!!" Natasha said trembling with anger as she handed the baby girl to the harassed nurse who looked at Khanak top to bottom and left, holding the baby so close to her chest as though trying ot protect her. Khanak's confused and heartbroken gaze followed her till she was out of sight. Natasha, who still could not believe what her father had said looked towards a shaking Khanak, then turned towards her father. "Khanak widhwa NAHI hain!!" she said through gritted teeth.

"Hain!! Yay larki ek wodwa hain ji kay pati ko uss loseless good for nothing aadmi nay maar diya tha! Meri naati iss say jitna door rahay uss kay liyay itna acha hain! Yay upshagun larki-----" Mr.Agarwal said looking towards Khanak who now had silent tears flowing from her eyes at jet speed. What had she done to deserve such hate? She wondered agonized to the core.

"How can you say such a thing?! How can you DO such a thing?!" Natasha said to her dad trying to sound calm but rather sounding insane herself.

"I can do ANYTHING for my daughters' happiness! ANYTHING! I did not let that good for nothing Shaan marry you and I'll not let this happen too." Mr.Agarwal said.

Khanak looked up so sharply that she almost cricked her neck. No! Mr. Agarwal was not going to do that. He wouldn't! she thought desperately. Natasha looked stunned at her father had said. "What.do.you.mean.---" she breathed slowly looking straight into her father's eyes.

"That's right." Mr Agarwal said smiling in a satisfied way. "I made this girl stop in the Khanadelwal house the night that useless man brought her here----I bribed her----ask her if you don't believe me----" Natasha turned to look at Khanak, shocked. More tears flowed from Khanaks eyes as she shut them tightly. "It was my plan----and look at you now----so much more better off----and this girl----she is where she was before---a childless upshagun----jis nay apnay pehlay pati ko bhee------"

"That's enough dad!" Natasha interrupted him, her voice shaking. "That's enough. " she gulped. Mr Agarwal stopped talking but the menace on his face did not disappear.

"Natasha----" Khanak breathed and Natasha looked at her and nodded slightly, acknowledging her. It was enough to tell Khanak that everything was okay between them. Natasha's eyes told her that she didn't blame her for hiding the truth about her father for so long. That is what mattered.

"You know dad---you've said what you wanted to say------" Natasha's voice would not stop shaking "but I---I just---just wanted to say that---before you call someone else's daughter a widhwa----remember that ---you have two daughters too-----lets go Khanak----" and saying this she turned to leave with Khanak. Only Khanak wasn't there.

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21^st May 2012, 12:02 AM

Khanak's eyes were still puffy as she attempted to push open the door to her rom. Shaan had not come to pick her up and had instead sent the driver. It had made her heart go even further down in the dumps when she had seen him for she wanted nothing more that to find Shaan and hug him tight. Her mind kept on replaying what had just happened a while back. She was an 'upshagun', Natasha's father had said. She was a widhwa and hence an upshagun. Her hands groped in the darkness for her mangal sutr and her throat formed a lump. 'I am not a widhwa' she said to herself still not pushing the door. She rubbed her eyes messily and hoped that Shaan would be asleep.

Btu when she finally did push open the door a beautiful sight met her eyes. The room was lit with candles and bouquets. She entered in amazement wondering what on earth this was about. The fragrance of the flowers filled her sensesand she smiled inspite of herself. Just thena warm hand engulfed her waist from the back and whispered in her ear "Happy Anniversary Mrs. Burthal" it said. Khanak opened her mouth in shock as she turned to see Shaan in a white kurta shalwar grinning at her. It was her anniversary! She had completely forgotten!

"Happy---Happy Anniversary---" she said stumbling on her words, trying to smile and not looking directly into Shaan's eyes. "Main toh----main toh bhool hee gaee thee----"

"I can see that!" Shaan said engulfing her waist and pulling her close again. His smile disappeared from his face as he looked at Khanak's. "Kya hua?" Khanak shook her head as she felt another lump form in her throat. " KYA hua?!" Shaan asked again extremely worried now.

"Shaantanu? Kya main apsay ek baat poochoo?" Khanak finally looked up. Shaan noticed her eyes were red. Dammit what happenened! "Aap nay mujh say----mujh say----ek widhwa say---say shaadi kyun ki?"

Shaan felt as though the floor beneath his feet had slipped away. WHAT sort of a question was that?! Why was Khanak suddenly asking him that? "Khanak----" he said forebodingly. "KYA hua? Tum mujh say yay sub----"

"Main upshagun hoon----is liyay----is liyay----" Khanak started and told Shaan everything. How Mr.Agarwal had not let Khanak hold the baby, how he had called her a widow and a bad omen, how he had confessed to playing a huge part in separating Shaan and Natasha.

Shaan listened with an expression on his face which suggested that he was chewing his tounge. When Khanak had finished she hugged Shaan tightly and continued to cry. Shaan returned the hug for a while, then held her face and wiped away her tears with his huge hands. " Tum upshagun nahi ho Khanak----tum toh shagun ho ----don't you see Khanak? Don't you see what you've done?! You've given my life meaning---you've made me a better person----you've transformed my family---this house---our love has spread everywhere---you're the best omen this family ever had----you're the reason we all are what we are today Khanak----"

Khanaknodded as fresh tears flowed down her cheeks. "Pata nahi mujhay kya hogaya----" she said shakily.

Shaan held her face even more tightly. His face screwed up in pain he said "Aur Khanak DOBARA apnay aap ko wodhwa KABHEE nahi kahna!! Kabhee nahi samjhee?! Meray marnay kay baad bhee-----"

"Nahi Shaantanu aisa nahi kahay----please aisa nahi kahay-----" Khanak sobbed as shehugged Shaan tightly. "Main apkay bina nahi jee nahi sakti----" she continued to cry.

Shaan hugged her back and rubbed her arm vigourously. "Burthal---" he said wiping her eyes again. He lifted her and took her to the bed makig her lie down. "Happy second anniversary---" he said adding the word 'second' this time. Khanak smiled between her tears. "Happy second anniversary." Shaan got up to blow the candles so that the room was full of darkness. He joined Khanak on the bed to fulfil the tradition of a meaningful suhaag raat as meant on the night of a wedding.

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21^st May 2012, 09:00 AM

Khanak woke up in Shaan's arms the next morning and smiled. His fingers were interwined with hers as they were placed on Khanak's bare stomach. Khanak tried to disentangle herself from his arms but realized her heart was not in it and gave up. Just then Shaan's hands started playing with her stomach moving her hand with his to tickle her. Khanak laughed and moved Shaan's hand away as Shaan lay flat on the bed and Khanak, smiling made her head comfortable on his chest as usual.

"Last night was awesome----" Shaan whispered to Khanak. "Minus the part where my wife threw an emotional fit on me----" Khanak buried her face in Shaan's chest. Shaan checked the watch. It was 9:00 AM. "Hudhh hain yaar! NOONE remembers our anniversary! Khushboo bhabhi was supposed to plan our party----Chalo acha hee hain----no party—just the two of us----"

Khanak nodded. "Aap ko office nahi jaana?" she asked.

"You should know your marriage has no spark left when your wife tries to send you to work on a Sunday---" Shaan said slyly. Khanak laughed embarrassed. "Aray aisa mainay nahee---kisi quote nay kaha hain---sachee" he laughed and hugged Khanak.

"Acha acha---zyada nahi----" Khanak retorted.

"Hum abhee hospital jayay gay----phir lunch---phir dinner---just the two of us----" Shaan said.

"Sounds great---"Khanak smiled warmly. "Ub uthay! Aur naha lay!" she said.

Shaan grinned slyly.

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21^st May 2012, 09:20 AM

Fifteen minutes later Khanak and Shaan were both out of the shower together, Khanak blushing profusely as she came out in her offwhite petticoat and blouse and Shaan grinning as though he had accomplished some major feat.

Khanak went to the cupboard and chose a blue sari to wear. Shaan took the sari from her and threw it across the bed. "Shaantanu!" Khanak exclaimed surprised. Shaan opened his cupboard and digged in it without giving a further explanation. Finally he found what he was looking for. A deep rep sari which he handed over to Khanak. Khanak looked at it in shock. It was the same sari she had worn on her marriage to Shaan in Dhulwadi.

"Main chahta hoon kay tum aj yay pahno---" he said seriously. The intensity in Shaan's voice moved Khanak. Shaan came forward and opened to sari and slowly draped it around Khanak soundlessly and slowly. Khanak stood as though in a trance, not saying a word, not trusting her voice to speak. Finally Shaan adjusted the plaits so hat the pallu was in his hand waiting to be draped over Khanak's chest. His hands moved slowly to finish off with placing the pallu there, touching Khanak's mangal sutr as he did and adjusting it in the process. Khanak finally smiled as she looked down and saw droplets of water from her hair fall on Shaan's hands as he busied himself in the last step of dressing up his bride.

The pallu fixed over her shoulder, the mangal sutr in place Shaan groped in his cupboard again for the sindoor and found the silver container. Taking a pinch of that red powder that defined their relationship he run his fingers through the entire parting of Khanak's wet hair, making it longer that it normally was, thicker than it normally was and deeper than it normally was. Khanak closed her eyes to savour the memory. Finally Shaan put his hand in his cupboard again and took out a flowy red odhani. Khanak's eyes flashed with recognition as she saw that too.

"Shaantanu yay toh----wohee odhani hain----jub humari shaadi hui thee----" she said.

"Shsshhh" Shaan said and slowly lifted the red odhani, letting it fly in the warm wind that entered from the window, and placing it serenely on Khanak's head.

"Shaantanu---" Khanak whispered.

"Lo--- ub tayyar hogaee----Shaantanu ki suhaagan----" he said with an authority and possessiveness in his voice Khanak had never heard before.

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THE END

Hope you guys liked the end :) I will be writing an epilogue so all's not ended :) Guys I want to thank you all properly for reading and liking this FF but I just don't know how to! I guess I'm finally out of words lol. I want to make a request too. I know loads of people read Partial Amnesia and I can never thank you enough for loving it. I just want to ask all the silent readers to say something about the story, how it was even if it is just two lines it would be GREAT to hear from you all! Please consider this as my request as it will make me very happy! Also I am getting very emotional right now so ermm I'll talk to you all later maybe write a farewell PA speeech :(

kya this is the last one..
i misinterpreted ur post n thought one more to come after this..
ok off to read..

am also out of words beeni..
awesome is the only word coming to my mind..
the baby girl..agarwal's entry again n that too nasty..
his truth abt bribing khanak..bad mouthing her..
shaan being there in home to celebrate their anniversary..
consoling n assuring khanak..them making love..the morning after..
shaan dressing up his bride..shaantanu ki suhaagan..
just perfect..👏👏👏👏
do write the epilogue..

i love uuu🤗🤗🤗 n its nt d ending just a new beginning to d shanak story n yr future ffs wich im sure will cme😳

Awesome blossom beeni👏👏
👏
u've penned it beautifully each emotions⭐️

i laughed 😆i cried😭 i was blushing ☺️glowing wid glee😃 i was shocked😲 and pleasantly surprised

i experienced almost all emotions in this update😊

mittul and tasha conv was romantic and very cute and when they were worried abt khanak that was really shweet😊

shanak conv as always was super cute and i was glad that she wanted to study further and shaan was saved 😉

luvly part abt akshay's happiness😃

mr agrwals confession was a shock but em glad u mentioned it ... seriously that was sumthing i always wanted to happen👍🏼

the room decor... imagining it mad me glow wid glee 😆

i loved the way shaan consoled her and make her understand that she is the best omen and the reason for their happiness😍

hmm 2nd anniversary... shoo cute☺️

he got his best gift in the mor😉

the morning part was the best ... i loved it

he dressed her up like a bride with that same saree odhani😍

SHAATANU KI SUHAGAN... superb👏🤗

do write an epilogue

waiting for it

I just wanted to.say I am a siilent reader so wen u asked to commment I couldnt refuse


This was the most amazing thing I have read and I hope that u continue riting

Plz write the epilogue quick

Love you sooo much xxx

Cant believe dat PA has ended...it z an amazing FF...u have written it brilliantly...but wat about shan and khanak's baby...u might hav shown something about dat part also...