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Posted: 13 years ago
Ola Simi!🤗
At last am here to comment!! Teehee...😆
Chapter 25 is one of the Best I've ever read!
'Lady' by Kenny Rogers is one of my Favourites and I agree with you that it is one of the World's most Beautiful songs ever! 😳
I thoroughly enjoyed that Jealousy erupting in Shaan! But I can't understand that why did Shaan say such things to Khanak? Is it because he is drunk and letting out his dread and feelings that had been so long kept in check so to not reveal much?
All Khanak did was dance with that 'Brian Adams', in fact that was not even a dance! *Duh* He was already on the floor when he was about to take the first step😆, right?
My god! Simi, pal, am afraid that this will be an ugly turn in their lives or just something that will trigger their marriage to the next level! Is it?
And Khanak, poor girl! She's suffering again!! All thanks to Shaan for ruining the perfect moment!🤢😡
You know, there are times when people (in fact, including you and me) seriously break those perfect moments at times because of our own foolishness! 😡 And as you said this story is close to what reality has in store for us, now I am understanding how humans tend to ruin their own lives due to their own stupidity!😆
Way to go, pal!!
Loved it! Hope to see them together soon!!😳

*Edited: Oooh! I just noticed that you've put up Chapter 26 too!!! My, my!! That was really, really cute of Shaan to pull her back again and again, when she tried to make an escape from him!! haha... Now this Shaan is very, very Alert! Faking sleep just like our dear Khanak!
Aww... the last two lines really gave it a wonderful touch! So now awaiting a new day, a new beginning in their lives! Yippee!!!Lovely Pal!!

Regards
Annie
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Edited by AnnieKittWatt - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow more responses and comments..Thanks guys!! And Annie first time..am thrilled.
@LOVE YM: Sorry dear, I can try to post the whole updt here, it just that it is so much more time consuming :( You should be able to access it frm your lap top/pc.
Here's the link for Frustrations for those who haven't been able to read it yet.
Chap 26: Frustrations
Thanks,
Love,
Simi
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wowww, so romantic. Sim you are great at at bringing out and showing people's feeling through ur writing. I loved the last part. So true, pure and innocent. Sorry but I am getting selfish and hence please update soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks all you wonderful ppl..for reading..Loveya!!
@aditi: Ohhh..lovely compliment..will store it away...safe and sound.
Here are the links"
27 A: Denials
27B: Advances
LoveU,,
Simi
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Posted: 13 years ago
luved u r FF...must u r brilliant writer


waiting for when they actually accept thier luv.

plz. update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
@Love YM: TY Darling...precious...😳
Thanks for reading everybody..
The following is my return B'day gift to all..
Chap 28: Deceptions
Love,
Simi
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Posted: 13 years ago
I hate that Des, please come back with the next update. I hope it has some outburst that ends with a kiss. When Khanak and Des will be in front of eachother, it had to be like this and you as usual wrote beautifully of Khanak's pain, love for Shaan, little insercurity but still believing in him and still trying to be calm. Des on the other hand, arrogant, snob, dumb, selfish. Sim you are wonderful.
Edited by aditi305 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
it's superb waiting for next up date
plz do soon...
even i can't wait for what we kahank say to shan
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Posted: 13 years ago
@Aditi: Wow..thanks!! You've summarised it beautifully..thank U..your words will be treasured for ever.:)
@Love ym: Thanks dear..Updt is almost done..will post later today..:D
Keep reading..
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