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Nisha

@ABlank90

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Posted: 13 years ago

#91

Although I love what Khanak is doing to him...one moment of intimacy wouldn't have hurt man! But I'm guessing its around the corner? 😉

Loved the update as usual. The way Khanak is dealing with the whole situation is impressive and Shaan beta pull up your socks ab. Do something!! 😳

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IF_rida

@IF_rida

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Posted: 13 years ago

#92

Congratz on the new thread and best of luck for the many more to come👍🏼

Wonderful👏 update

loved each and every bit of it

he's falling head over heels... and its super fun to read😉

she's handling him the right way

the conv that goes in their mind is stole the lime light

waiting eagerly to see who melts first

update soon.

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-mesmerised-

@-mesmerised-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#93

Sigh... what a day! 😍

Brilliant update Sim Sim! ❤️

All of it was great, but my favourite bit has to be the last part at the beach... it was beautiful, intense, passionate, painful and heartbreaking all at the same time! *sigh*

You know what i loved the most during that part? It was the fact they were Shaan and Khanak... no Bee... no Grey... just them and the reality that is their relationship, which one so desperately wants to fight and the other so desperately wants to put right! 😳

So Khanak thinks he's only after one thing... and Shaan is having difficulty getting through to her... feeling bad for both of them.

Awaiting the next update...

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-YasharanArshi-

@-YasharanArshi-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#94

ThankYou Simi Deee for giving an update that was Purely Shaan and Khanak !!!!!!!

Sigh .. Its HIGH Time that the REAL them face each other and resolve the mess and FALL in loveee... Sigh !!!

I loveee the Possesive Shaan when he pulls her to himself for the dance ... I wonder HOW come KhanaK dint realise the possesiveness in HIM !!!!

The last part .. I was sooo happpy imagining the MOMENT .. But KhanaK burst my balllooon :( ... GOD ... They were almost thereee ... Sigh .. Sooon ... Sooon they will realise.. or Rather Once she is assured that HE is Genuine and not the way he thinks , Love will bring them together !

Agreeed that he marrrying her Inspite of Des being in his life is UTTER Nonsense ... But I dont think he will two time anyonee ..
He had always respected her and NEVER EVER took any advantage of their marriagee ... Sigh !!!

Sigh .. Breathe In Breathe Out... THEY are bound to be in loveee ...

Loving this Journey Deee .. Its Soo beautifully Narrated and Well Thought !!!!!

Muaaah .. Take careee... Updateee Sooon

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Priyasree

@shonai

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Posted: 13 years ago

#95

Originally posted by: simiv

Hi Mishti!!
These places are one of a kind;)
BTW what do you want him to do?? Any thoughts???
And Leo is something else...;)

me??? ideas!!!! nooo...

actually Dibhai u know na that m just too besharam😳 &, seeing this possessive, jealous Shaan,, my ideas r getting wilder 😳😉

its very hard for me to put that kinds of thoughts aside😳...after recalling what he did to her, i keep saying to myself..."controlll ...controlll...controlll"😡

so, u have to think what he should do...cause u r the bestest👍🏼...& u always manage to surprise us with each & every updates😊

love u very much

🤗

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Ramani

@RB81

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Posted: 13 years ago

#96

Originally posted by: rbo_d_best
ThankYou Simi Deee for giving an update that was Purely Shaan and Khanak !!!!!!!

Sigh .. Its HIGH Time that the REAL them face each other and resolve the mess and FALL in loveee... Sigh !!!

I loveee the Possesive Shaan when he pulls her to himself for the dance ... I wonder HOW come KhanaK dint realise the possesiveness in HIM !!!!

The last part .. I was sooo happpy imagining the MOMENT .. But KhanaK burst my balllooon :( ... GOD ... They were almost thereee ... Sigh .. Sooon ... Sooon they will realise.. or Rather Once she is assured that HE is Genuine and not the way he thinks , Love will bring them together !

Agreeed that he marrrying her Inspite of Des being in his life is UTTER Nonsense ... But I dont think he will two time anyonee ..
He had always respected her and NEVER EVER took any advantage of their marriagee ... Sigh !!!

Sigh .. Breathe In Breathe Out... THEY are bound to be in loveee ...

Loving this Journey Deee .. Its Soo beautifully Narrated and Well Thought !!!!!

Muaaah .. Take careee... Updateee Sooon

hi5 shals..exactly my points too..ufff..atleast one is with me abt their kiss..poo ne mujhe dhoka dhe diya iss mein..

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Pooja

@candy84

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Posted: 13 years ago

#97

Originally posted by: RB81

hi5 shals..exactly my points too..ufff..atleast one is with me abt their kiss..poo ne mujhe dhoka dhe diya iss mein..

@bold: What dhoka yaar.. I am still with you. Bus i am just saying ke...i think they are somewhere behaving like kids...i mean, the way he behaved was so unlike him...usually he is very calm, understanding and above all very matured (he is never impatient) ...the way he handled all the situations and Khanak's tantarums all this while are proofs...but suddenly he is so despo...behaving like a love sick teenager...why, what for????????? And i would like to call this act as a Case of Attraction but not Love (exactly). According to me, he needs to sit down and question himself... what he is doing??? Why is she not reacting the way he wants her to...??? Usko samjhna chahiye ke this is not attraction, he is actually in Love with her...but she is still not feeling the same for him coz what he did and said is Not a small thing and by doing these childish stuff/ games won't help...Its high time now...ABHI KUCH BADA KARNA PADEGA to convince her and get her trust back.😉

And as far as Khanak is concerned toh sometimes i feel that she is over- reacting...she herself is so Confused and confusing others too😒 It's not Shaan's fault always..she herself is encouraging him by playing games and asking him questions...expecting him to react and When he reacts...tab yeh Back off kar jaati hai. If she anyways wants to leave and go back then why all this Nautanki??????? Why is she making her and his life more difficult...why is she not saying anything...as they say Baat karne se hi toh Baat banti hai naa 😉

Edited by candy84 - 13 years ago