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Pooja

@candy84

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: purvi08

yes

I hope simi bhi agree kare...and Shanak too...fir toh Kissy Vissy kya aur bhi baut kuch confirmed that too soon...😉😃😆

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purvi08

@purvi08

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#102

@toffi di--😳😳😳😳😛

Edited by purvi08 - 13 years ago

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Ramani

@RB81

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: candy84
@bold: What dhoka yaar.. I am still with you. Bus i am just saying ke...i think they are somewhere behaving like kids...i mean, the way he behaved was so unlike him...usually he is very calm, understanding and above all very matured (he is never impatient) ...the way he handled all the situations and Khanak's tantarums all this while are proofs...but suddenly he is so despo...behaving like a love sick teenager...why, what for????????? And i would like to call this act as a Case of Attraction but not Love (exactly). According to me, he needs to sit down and question himself... what he is doing??? Why is she not reacting the way he wants her to...??? Usko samjhna chahiye ke this is not attraction, he is actually in Love with her...but she is still not feeling the same for him coz what he did and said is Not a small thing and by doing these childish stuff/ games won't help...Its high time now...ABHI KUCH BADA KARNA PADEGA to convince her and get her trust back.😉

And as far as Khanak is concerned toh sometimes i feel that she is over- reacting...she herself is so Confused and confusing others too😒 It's not Shaan's fault always..she herself is encouraging him by playing games and asking him questions...expecting him to react and When he reacts...tab yeh Back off kar jaati hai. If she anyways wants to leave and go back then why all this Nautanki??????? Why is she making her and his life more difficult...why is she not saying anything...as they say Baat karne se hi toh Baat banti hai naa 😉

@bold: thats true..but she asked if today is the last day of living wat is the last thing thing he wud do..he implied he wants to be with her..thats y the hug happened..but later hormonal over reaction ho gaya yaar..upar se he is an experienced one in this so attraction took over..
i accept ur points however..he needs to sit back n question himself to be sure for himself that he is in love with his wifey..even though he expresses it in bits here and there..but he needs self realisation of his feelings..hope he does that soon..

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Pooja

@candy84

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#104

@bold: thats true..but she asked if today is the last day of living wat is the last thing thing he wud do..he implied he wants to be with her..thats y the hug happened..but later hormonal over reaction ho gaya yaar..upar se he is an experienced one in this so attraction took over..
i accept ur points however..he needs to sit back n question himself to be sure for himself that he is in love with his wifey..even though he expresses it in bits here and there..but he needs self realisation of his feelings..hope he does that soon..

Ramzz this is what i am saying naa...SHE forced him to react this way...and koi Burthal hi hoga jo react nahi karega.Which means both are Wrong yet both are Right...

*bas we are the only Ullus jo apna dimag kharab kar rahe hain *😆

Not only Shaan...she also need to sit back and think what she wants from him.

I think they both badly need some Counselling sessions...chal Ramzz chalte hai...thoda Brain wash karke aate hain 😆

@bold: 🤣

HAA ke Shaan ka aasar ho gaya tum par 😆

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Krithika

@k.krithika

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#105

Hi Simi 😊

I am back again for my detailed post for the Sounds part read it again loved the posts and discussions from our dear friends 😃

Firstly Pooja 's Siggie what can i say more its simply beautiful its always perfect for every II update 👏
This Siggie is simply superb Shanak holding hands,beach background and lovely lines beautiful 👏 ⭐️
Thanks a lot Pooja I have been drooling over it 🤗

Simi last night I got completely carried away reading this update and was lost in our Shanak's paradise didn't want to come out of the heaven so could not post yesterday I was thinking and dreaming of II and this update while sleeping the title Incurable Insanity is just perfect I loved it when I first read about this FF its not just a story always real for me

Once while chatting with mom i told her I am reading a story titled Incurable Insanity which says Love: A temporary insanity curable by marriage and I said I completely agree with the author my dear friend though I don't know anything about marriage life or love since I am single but honestly I always believed or i still believe I guess that true love never exists until I saw RBO Yashran Shanak's love I always feel everything is real in RBO

RBO changed my life, my thoughts or perception of love, marriage, people has changed maybe it's the magic of Yashran and RBO team which touched our hearts 😊

I was never been so attached or addicted to any show or people like this before i love everything about RBO its perfect ,unique and always the best show ever ⭐️

RBO gave me everything I got wonderful friends like U and everyone here I want to live in our RBO world always with u all

I know we all feel the same I just pray everyday our RBO Yashran Shanak should comeback soon for us I am sure our prayers will be answered 😊

I think I am blabbering too much I just wanted to share my feelings
Sorry Simi i got carried away with my thoughts and feelings hope u didn't mind anyways back to the update comments

Shantanu hates it when Khanak calls him Grey sometimes it's fun but I want Khanak to call him as Shantanu like in the show because everyone calls him Shaan but for her it will be her own Shantanu 😳
I think he would be very happy to hear his full name from his beloved wife this could happen later when they become one just my thought 😃

I am enjoying this virtual tour of LA and all places through ur writing I feel like I have seen all the places through ur awesome description I really want to visit all these places once in my lifetime
Thanks a lot for telling about these awesome places both in II and HAA

Could feel the kid Khanak seeing the Foucault's Pendulum even I would have done the same 😉

Poor Shantanu is tolerating all her tantrums he is willing to do that because its his Khanak na 😉

Next Hollywood a dream place to visit seen it movies now feeling it with our Shanak thanks Simi 😃

Love Shanak thoughts and actions beautifully written 👏

Yes that is the famous 'Hollywood' sign up close and personal..the iconic symbol of wealth, success and entertainment! He grinned watching her as she stared open mouthed.

Oh thank you!!

Now what was that for?

He asked stunned momentarily after she treated him to a quick hug and a miniscule peck on the cheek.

For rough handling me so you could show me this! You are simply too cute sometimes...! (Gosh did I really say that?!) She colored putting a hand on her mouth.

(God do I love you my poisonous insect!)

Shall we make a move? He asked softly an enigmatic smile on his face causing her heart to go flip flop inside her rib cage.

(It'll be a pity to waste such gorgeousness but it has to be done.) She thought smiling as she strapped herself in.

Blue lines superb i too like Leo and Titanic is my all time fav movie i was crying when jack froze to death to save his love very emotional scene every time i watch i have tears in my eyes

[They had just walked by the Hollywood Walk of Fame and he had gotten thoroughly irritated when she had spent a good half an hour searching for Leonardo Di Caprio's nonexistent star;

Why are you not interested in Charlie Chaplin, Albert Einstein, or even Neil Armstrong who happens to be my favorite?!

Yes I am! But Leo.. when he froze to death in those icy waters just to save the love of his life...she sighed.

Gosh! You sound like an out of work mortician! He smirked.

Yes..that's what you'd think since for you love is a joke, and someone who gives up his life for it, a moron! Her eyes bore into him like two very cold steely knives before she turned and marched away.

I didn't mean that! (God how do you make this woman tick!) He blurted before hurrying behind her.]

Smart Shantanu he wants to carry her but still wants to see Khanak cry Enjoying Shanak's game

Now, now don't say that you are offering to carry me! ..She said stepping back hastily.

He laughed; Carry you and break my back? (Gosh I'd love to do that, but I really do want to see you cry!) What I meant is that you could choose to suffer by keeping them on!

Love possessive Shanatanu 😃

Venice Beach...

Wow beach part it simply mindblowing love every bit of it ❤️

Shantanu read her mind and understood what Khanak was thinking of him

Gawd! Is that what Khanak takes me to be too? A philanderer who would dump her after he has had his fill?****!! I bet that's it! Oh no! I need to set her mind right..but how?

Very romantic 😍

They walked side by side, hand in hand on the sand, stealing furtive glances of each other, wondering..., hoping... wishing

Last portion simply mindblowing ⭐️ ⭐️

Shaan? She stopped in her tracks and turned towards him, stepping closer, their bodies barely touching.

Yes Khanak? He asked agitated.. (If I have to say anything I have to say it now!

Lets perchance think for just one endless moment...; say that we knew the world was coming to an end tomorrow; ( I don't know why I'm saying this but I don't care..perhaps it's the sound of the sea..)

What are you trying to say..? Nothing like that is going to happen!

What is the last thing that you'd want to do before you die? She persisted looking up into his eyes, her face gleaming ethereal in the moonlight.

(I'd want to make mad furious love to you, if that's the last thing I do!) He pulled her in to his arms challenging her to read his mind, fighting his desires..

(Yes, that's what I'd want to do too!)

Her hands reached up to clutch at his shirt, feeling the heat radiating from his skin, she closed her eyes..wanting the moment to never end.

(But that's the only thing he wants from you Khanak!..)

A sob escaped her mouth as she pushed him away.

****! Don't you dare turn away! He yelled pulling her back.

Stop playing these ridiculous mind games with me! Say right now what you wish to say and get it over with! Scream, shout, or even hit me! Just let it all out Khanak, just do it!

(Damn those lips are begging to be saved!) He thought, his face drifting closer, their breaths mingling..., raspberries and cream..

Her mouth parted as she felt drawn to him like a magnet.. She paused.. Almost there; now give it to him Khanak, this is prime time!

She laughed moving away trying hard to break the spell..her chest aching..

I was just jesting Shaan, who really cares what does happen tomorrow! Shall we go home?

He looked after her stunned;

(I will have you then I'll kill you, if that's the last thing I do!)

This below line said it all Shanak's true thoughts both want the same its just not the physical intimacy behind their thought its the way they want to express their true love for each other which they both feel in their hearts and want to become one and stay together always
Brilliant writing Simi i take a bow to u

(I'd want to make mad furious love to you, if that's the last thing I do!)

I am very impressed by Khanak's pink line perfect reply left him stunned
Hats off Khanak great going she wont accept him so easily obviously she has so many doubts about Des he has not yet cleared anything and expressed his feelings directly Shantanu has to try hard its not an easy task he knows that very well but he will surely win her heart

Eagerly waiting to know what Shantanu will do next...

OMG i have become an Incurable Insane but its ok because i am truly, madly, deeply in love with RBO Yashran Shanak and u all my dear friends
Love u all always 🤗

Thumba Thumba Dhanyavadagalu Simi (Thank u very much)
Love u ❤️

PS: Sorry the post became very long

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@-Unknown-22

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#106

Awesome awesome update...and woww! it was extra long! Shaan's feelings have become quite intense haven't they, there's a lot of fire between them, i really want to know how Khanak feels i know you add her feelings too but in depth if that was okay...please continue soon can't wait to read!!

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Simi

@simikr

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#107

Huggs everybody...😃 Your comments are mindblowing..I may need to go see a Nut Doc soon!!😆

First of all do you love them or do you hate them??

@Deepali: Wow..Don't hate Khanak dear..please don't..!!!

@Nisha: You know with the way things are right now..I really do not know where a kiss might lead to. And Shaan better listen to Nisha's advice.

@Lollipop: Thanks dear!! It's so nice to see you back!! And Shaan has to fall for her..he has no other option. She is so cute! They love carrying on this mind talk...that way they can spill their guts.

@Ayshu: Thanks dear!! They are slowly opening up their true selves to each other. They are suffering, both wanting to come nearer.., but she still has a few reservations. He has to make his intentions clear soon and he will.

@Shals: Don't we all love the possessive Shaan? I think she knows it too and secretly likes it but doesn't want to show it. Yes..love will bring them together. Thanks darling for loving II.

@Mishti: Thanks sweetheart!! I know that you are besharam first class..and we have all gone through the same school..i.e. RBO!!LOL. Control..yes..but lose it too!!

@Krithika: Thank you so much for yr long comments!! Dil khush kar diya. I really enjoyed reading each and every bit of it.

And I too would like to thank RBO and this forum for bringing us all together...so we can interact and drool. We are not a bad bunch at all!!

Marriage is definitely not a bed of roses but some couples do try their best to make it smooth sailing..because they love and support each other.

As for calling Shan Shantanu...in this FF Shan is Shan Ahuja..he is not Shantanu..so thats why Khanak calls him Shan and not Shantanu.

Thank you for quoting ..you do it each and every time.

And these places are indeed worth visiting at least once if not more times.

@Heena: Thanks dear. Maybe I should cut down on the length..but as I mentioned I got carried away..

His feelings have got intense. More with her POV in next update. Thanks for reading.

@Poo, Ramzz, Purvi, Mishti and Rosh...

Great discussion and doubts guys..

First of all as Poo said Hormones are a prerogative of HAA Shaan..so II Shaan can't touch it..beware or get a right hook!! LOL

Why does Shan seem to be behaving this way..first of all love makes you do strange things and 2nd he has gotten comfy being around her..so he is more open now. Perhaps he really isn't an introvert as previously depicted and his pagalpan is being helped along by Khanak too.

As for Khanak..bechaari.I think she's doing a lot of this unconsciously and getting encouraged by his reactions. She too is getting comfortable in his company. But the most important part is that she is a bold woman who is not willing to sit down and simply cry.

Phew..!! Aaj ke liye itna bas!!!😃

PS: got to take a nap, just returned frm work. Cyou soon.🤗

Edited by simiv - 13 years ago