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Posted: 13 years ago
Part 219
Vasant Vihar
Nov 4th 2012
8: 00 PM
Sabina: Here to steal you wife ?
Shaan: Yep!
Firmly looking at his wife
K: Kaun hai?
S: Sabina! (smiling)
She clamps her hand on her mouth
K: Oh! No!
S: Khanak is terrified Sabina
Sabina: Kyon? You are husband. Right?
Shaan laughs loud
S: I thought so
K: Please aap zyaada baat mat kariye
S: How can I help you
Sabina: I am going to be honest Shantanu, I wish you had told me. I wish SHE had told me!
S is serious
Shaan: I understand fully... I apologize... I dont think she could have. She had no idea I came to Delhi for her
Sabina: You have been at DLF for over two months now? I mean a simple 1:1 would have sufficed
Shaan: I understand...
Sabina: Anyway, its not important now, when do you guys want to return?
Shaan: If you will let us, then by Diwali
Sabina: Are you serious?
Shaan: When it comes to my wife, I never kid...
Sabina: I am sorry, I cant allow that
Shaan: Fine, we can work something out
Sabina: I need to speak with her tomm, well see how it goes
Shaan: That sounds great
Sabina: I cant see her leaving before January
Shaan is pensive, K can see a muscle clench in his jaw, she paces the balcony, arranging flower pots in a pattern, some reveal worms underneath, worms and slugs... she jumps right into her husband, he holds her...
Shaan hisses, "Quit being so jumpy"
K:Aap phone rakhiye phir"
He sets it on mute and laughs at her " she is talking, your boss's talks like its nobodys biz"
does a hand gesture to mock
"She is nice"
"Oh! I bet! Any body that is on ur side ought to be an angel" (mocks)
She is not on my side! (defensive)
"Really?"
She pulls away from his grip, he unmutes his phone, sets it on speaker
Sabina is chattering like its a political speech...
Shaan: Ya, OK on the first three, not sure on the 4th, No on the last
Shaan, helping her turn on the hose, "Ya the first ceremonial hand over is on Diwali
Sabina: You are very involved arent you?
Shaan: My first big project in india😳
Sabina: Do you plan to live in india or return to the states with her?
K sprays water on him in shock
Shaan: Havent thought abt it that far ahead Sabina, for now I want her back home in Mumbai with me ASAP!
He firmly takes her dupatta and wipes his face off... rubs it on his neck. crushing the end...
K's heart hammers at the thought of going away for good, living with him all alone in the US, just HIM... "would he still ignore me if he got busy?"
"Will he change his mind about kids?"
"Will I have a baby in the US"
He turns off the speaker and talks animatedly and goes inside, she stands there soaking her feet... a rivulet of water flows off a pot, meeting another rivulet half way across the balcony... the worm gets drenched in the sudden unexpected downpour... she watches the worm crawl back under the nearest pot... bends down to peer at it, her mangal sootra sways back and forth... the sparkling light from the diamond pendant forming a guiding light for the worm...
Her husband watches it from the study window.. still on the phone


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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it...finally!!! feel soo casa deprived...lolll i dont know what will happen when it will end...pls update sooon!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks for the update Adi...so refreshing to hear Shaan say...fine,we can work something out....inspite of not liking it, nice change...till JAN...hmmm..that will be def NO...Let's see what you come up with!!!!

And Khanak too mellowing down at the idea of moving to states...living all alone in US with just HIM...

the sparkling light from the diamond pendant forming a guiding light for the worm...👏👏👏

so their marriage...their togetherness...their commitment to each other...finally, will be their guiding light for their bright future😃...


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Posted: 13 years ago
finally an update

in fact a lovely update

he's handling the matter perry well and i loved it when he said

Shaan: When it comes to my wife, I never kid...

not bef jan oops !! he'll never agree on to that

their teasing never stop... no matter how serious the matter is ... dats cute

i hope khanak's all doubts get clear soon ... positively

the blue line is lovely

SOL is interesting adi... the bro sis due was super cute

continue asap.

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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the update gonna check out your new tale's updates now😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Hey Aditee,

Thanks for the lovely update. the convo between shaan and sabina was good.I read all the 3 parts of SOL, its beautiful. I can request u to not end CASA continue with this aswell with less frequency. CASA shanak are relly good. I will definitely miss them One request aditee, pls post the missing part of casa that u posted on the bog. or anyone who has access to aditees blog plz plz post it

Thank u

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Posted: 13 years ago
khanak is really, really sweet. and the way you describe both of them...uff!
will miss shantanu and khanak gujral very badly!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow .. Finally...
Sabina wud have had the shock of her life 😃
I want to see Trish's reaction 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
Aditee ... !!!!Dont Ignore CASA re... Ek toh we all are SuperSad that its Ending ... !!!!
OH BTW ... I have Loads of time todaaay and GUESSS what .. Me gonna finallly read SOL :D :D :D :D :D !!!!
Yaaay !!!!!!
Catch u Sooon on your blog :) :) :) :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
Shaan in his demanding avatar...determined and out to get what he wants! Totally desirable! 😳
Hmmm...it'll be interesting to see what Sabaina does. Oh and january tak tou Sunil uncle ki di gai deadline bhi cross ho jae gi 😕

Adi update soon na...daily doses of CASA chahiyein esp when we'll be deprived of it after a while😭
Oh and I wanted to ask you about your inspiration for SOL after reading your note. Is there a couple which inspired you to write on them?

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