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Posted: 13 years ago
Part 211 B
Vasant Vihar
27th October 2012
Noonish
S: What about when you ache (for me)?😳
K: Oh! I just go to a spa when my body aches😉
She smiles slowly...
He laughs, "Great! Good to know"
Just steps back... not before noticing the disappointment on her face.
A kiss that could have been, is no longer...
He walks to the balcony, signally 5 with his hand, she collects her things, and walks back to the living room and counts her money
He watches it leaning on the rail, facing the inside
He can sense its not a thick wad of bills
She bunches up some receipts, goes back to her room and puts it away
Wears her thong sandals and opens the front door, he smiles and follows her.
The driver nods and smiles seeing the couple together, which is so rare.
S:I need a favor from you
K: Mujhse?
S:Haan tumse
K:Kya?
S:I need to buy something for Mom's Bday, so lets go get that first if you dont mind?
K: Oh right! November 1st
K:Nope! I LOVE to shop, jab koi aur paise kharche to kya baat hai.
He looks at her deeply
K:Haan ab gift bhi kisi aur ke liye hai (cheerful)
He smiles, asks the driver to go to DLF Emporio
S:I was thinking of a saree
K:Really? (smiles)
S:Mom's into sarees these days...
K: Thats nice
S:She says "Grandma clothing"
K laughs
S: I know the feeling
They exchange a look
S:You dont wear sarees any more?
K:I did on Ashtami
S:Otherwise?
K: Umm..mmm, bus mein its a pain
He is expressionless
They get to Emporio and he walks into Satya Paul
She is enchanted by whatever is on display, she has two of those as part of her trousseau
Yet she wants more
She knows she cant afford even one
The personal shopper checks out the couple, she can sense their clothing is expensive so she is willing to part with a smile and offer assistance
S:I want her to pick a saree for my Mom
SP Employee: Sure maam what kind?
She looks at him
S:What ever is trendy?
Kwalks with the shopper, he is leaning on a couch hand in pocket other on the phone, feet criss cross
He tries to listen in, his wife pauses at many many, one she particularly loves it lookslike to him...
Assistant: Do you want to try this maam? Pink is your color
K:Oh! No! The price tag is not (laughs)
The price tag of her love is Rs41,400
A: You really like it?
K: I do
A:Where does ur MIL live?
K: Mumbai
Her MIL's fave color is sea green she picks a gorgeous one with metallic embellishments on the border, the tag reads Rs.39,800
She brings it to the front, "Yeh le leejiye, she will love it" (smiling)
S:Will you wear it if she hates it?
Assistant: Sir you can take it to our store in Mumbai and exchange it.
S:Thanks (smiles)
Hands his card, K is browsing accessories and blouses... she seems happy and pleasant
They leave the store in aout an hour
S:where to next?
K: some place you want to go?
S: Your college?
K:Oh!
S:Yep! Oh!
He leads the way opens the car door, instructs the driver.
She talks a lil about the Planning building and Architecture building
The hostels she says are in New Friends Colony
S: You must buy me chai at the canteen
K: I can afford a lunch now (smiles)
S: Did you work? (softly)
K:Umm... only in summer
S:where?
K:At a friend's Dad's friends in Ahmedabad
S: Doing what?
K: General admin stuff, he was a construction contractor
S:Hmm
K: I could save a lot of money for when school started in Fall
S:You also got a scholarship did you not?
K startled "Aapko kaise maloom?"
S: I approved the grant (smiles)
K: You are not old, balding and pot bellied, so you couldnt have been part of the endowment committee
He laughs
S: How am I?
K:Umm...
S:What is that?(innocent)
K: young, with too much hair...
S:And?
K: i dont know about the rest (crimson)
They ride quietly for the next 20 or so minutes...
S:Where do you want to eat?
K:My canteen?
S:real food Khanak
K:ITO mein thali khaayen?
He laughs, "I dont think so"
K:Theek hai aap mujhe ITO utaar deejiye, main shaam ko ghar aa jaaoongi
S looks at her and says "ghar"
K: Mera matlab "aapke apartment" (embarrassed that she assumed it was her house)
s: Haan mera...
S:Well eat where ever you want and then go t Maidens, for a real meal
K:Maine waha kabhi nahi khaya
S: Today is a good day to try
They get to SPA.
She jumps out of the car and runs inside, he saunters drinking in the sights
The building or the inside is not very much to talk about. Could pass off for a government office just as the hundreds in the vicinity
Its musty and unkempt inside... she talks cheerfully and asks questions and exchanges pleasantaries with the Class 4 staff
Persons that look like faculty pause and give her curious looks
She intros herself, and intros him as "shan Gujral"
They walk the corridors, she pauses at the end and turns around
He leans on the balcony, and pauses, as she tells him about the vaious subjects and classes
The library was next...
K:Chalen?
S:Sure!
She waits for him to start walking
S:Where did you first meet Sooraj?😭
She cant tell his eyes, they are concealed behind his expensive sunglasses
Her eyes shift to his throat, and she loses her voice
Edited by aditee - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow..
so did/will shaan get that pink saree for khanak??
they r in SPA..
there there there..
he asked where did she met sooraj 1st..
wat did she observe seeing his throat to lose her voice..
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Posted: 13 years ago
Tera saaya saath hoga ... tera saaya ...Uff !!!

They will always have Sooraj's shadow over their relationship ... but I think that keeps the balance, if he had her for himself, he would care for her less than he does now ... shayad ... hain na ... pata nahi main kya soch rahi hoon ... sometimes the insecurity makes u care and love a person more than possible.

Love can make u do things ... Shaan has been to a huge campus abroad and Khanak is taken him to her college which looks like government office, but I think most older colleges are a bit sluggish ... ofcourse no including the hep-happening old colleges of Mumbai ... which are heritage buildings on their own ...

Reminds me of my college ya ... wow! Those were the days ...

Coming back to Shanak ... his question is valid ... he is come here to discover her past, understand her better with knowledge of her earlier life before meeting him in Mumbai ... I love these guy ... but why is he hiding behind the shades ... what does she see that makes her loose her voice ...

Will he play with her in her college like they did in his college, play around and have fun ... maybe a kiss along the corridors? too cliche?

Want them to have a fun time over the weekend bas ... kaise bhi ... another small one Adi? Plsss

~Cheers,
Dish
Edited by dishbhan - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
I kneww This was Coming !!!!!!!
It was about time that he asked about Sooraj !!!!!!
Sigh ... Hope he buys the sareee for her and gifts her on KC !
Knowing her, she will never even drop a hint about loving it !
Please Please ...Please Please .. ek aur updateee ...
Sigh ... What a beautiful date this is gonna be ... IF they dont end up talking about Soooraj though !!!!!
Dont make it sad sad .. :(
Let the mood be :
Ye Shaam Mastaanii, Mada_Hosh Kiye Jaaye
Mujhe Dor Koii Khii.Nche, Terii Or Liye Jaaye

Duur Rahatii Hai Tuu, Mere Paas Aatii Nahii.N
Hotho.N Pe Tere, Kabhii Pyaas Aatii Nahii.N
Aisaa Lage, Jaise Ki Tuu, Ha.Nsake Zahar Koii Piye Jaaye
Shaam Mastaanii ...

Baat Jab Mai.N Karuu.N, Mujhe Rok Detii Hai Kyo.N
Terii Miithii Nazar, Mujhe Tok Detii Hai Kyo.N
Terii Hayaa, Terii Sharam, Terii Qasam Mere Ho.Nth Siye Jaaye
Shaam Mastaanii ...

Ek Ruthii Huii, Taqadiir Jaise Koii
Khaamosh Aise Hai Tuu, Tasviir Jaise Koii
Terii Nazar, Banake Zubaa.N, Lekin Tere Paigaam Diye Jaaye

Ye Shaam Mastaanii, Mada_Hosh Kiye Jaaye
Mujhe Dor Koii Khii.Nche, Terii Or Liye Jaaye
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Posted: 13 years ago
Laaammmbaaa wala finally...it looked like an update and I started gobbling it up all greedily...maaza aa raha tha and then of course Suraj had to rise again from west how could it all go so smoothly...
I really like it...getting to see her place, where she went...and what's with the scholarship thing thing, how did he know...did I miss something or more likely forget something?
I hope we will get an update tomorrow morning...waiting till evening is going to be like trying my patience too much...not that I have much choice, Adi sab teri kripa pe hai...for the first time I will admit, I will not mind a chotta wala too...and then will kick myself for saying so, it is never enough...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Deeej !!!!
Howw areee youu ????
Well .. How are others ... Nehaa .. Dish .. Ann.. Soum .. Vandoo .. Rupps !
Kidhaaar gayaaab hogayee sabkesab !
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Posted: 13 years ago
these two just keep going two steps forward three steps back...i dont expect them to have a long chat or heart to heart...but its also sad to see them being stuck behind their own personal egos...then again...shaan did put in the effort of stating they needed to talk and work on it and so on...so hopefully soon...seeing as how they're living tog and all..she'll meet him at the same page...

lovely updates as always!...as someone mentioned..the bigger q now is..did he notice the love for the pink saree...or no?:)

and what a part to stop on...tho its opening up old wounds...i am thinking/hoping that this will do both of them good? noticed or not..liked or not..sooraj was always the big elephant in their relat...can only hope for bettter!...

thanks for the constant regular updates:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing...Brilliant...Superb...fantabulous updates Adi...

I for one won't complain abt chhotu or long update...they all are power punchers...sooo impactful... always leaves me(us) hankering for more...its unquenchable thirst!!!!!...very grateful to you that you post regularly... inspite of your busy schedule...I (we) don't get time to comment at times...but you never fail to deliver..👏👏👏

She was so excited to be with Shaan...then why Suraj, Shaan has lost the plot????
...So Suraj is back again...Adi, Khanak can see how it hurts Shaan, just to mention Suraj's name...Plz let her put all his demons to rest for a while( they can never be erased)...just let her make him feel that Suraj was her past and Shaan is her today and future...she must do something today...words never work for these two...so it has to be action...gesture...please Adi!!!!!

This date has to be a memorable one...first step towards their bright future...so it has be good memory...you are the master, so you know how to work around it...waiting for another stumper...😍
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: togepe30

Wrong post...Was posting on BB5 forum...! Sorry !


yeah dedaar request ka Phal tha kya Vandoo...Mr. India ban kar ghoom rahi ho forum par...Chal is jhalak se bhi dil khush hogaya...good to know you are alive and kicking on BB5 forum...12 ladkiyon ke saath...🤣🤣

Take care and do drop in to say hello to us guys once in a while...we all miss you...MISS NAUTANKI!!!!!!


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Posted: 13 years ago
superb update Aditee... loved it...
its amazing...

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