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shalini_s

@shalini_s

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Posted: 13 years ago

#371

Originally posted by: JyotiS

Haila!!!!! nooo Prad as after seeing him around Shan is going to eat him kachcha. Date ka satyanash ho jayega😆😆😆

hmmm.. its true..

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priya

@priya_cool_123

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Posted: 13 years ago

#372

@ shalini

Did u see Force... any idea how is compared to the original

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shalini_s

@shalini_s

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Posted: 13 years ago

#373

Originally posted by: priya_cool_123
@ shalini

Did u see Force... any idea how is compared to the original

not yet.. may be this weekend Priya😃

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Sonali

@adventure_gurl

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Posted: 13 years ago

#374

Originally posted by: shalini_s

not yet.. may be this weekend Priya😃

it was action packed, have not seen orginal but yaar this new guy is ruthless

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neethurose

@neethurose

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#375

Happy to see them going for their first date at Delhi.

Waiting Eagerly for update😊

Edited by neethurose - 13 years ago

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Krithika

@k.krithika

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Posted: 13 years ago

#376

Hi Aditee 😊
Awesome part 211 A loved it very much 👏
Every line is superb beautifully written 👏

Loved Shantanu and Akshay convo 😊

These lines are mindblowing 👏

His hands play with the spiral note pad laying on the table by the couch. He picks it up when he notices her writing

There are three pages of notes, some amounts struck off some in bold, over written

Looked like his wife was in the "red"

It made his blood boil, he read and re-read the notes, trying to follow the chronology of dates, but it wasnt easy

He didnt know if he should admire her resolve to be this"savior" for her family or be mad at her for trying to hide it all from him.

She had paid him rent, with a smile, the devil in him egged him on to increase the amount next month

He didnt want to see her lose

He wanted to be everything for her

He wanted her to depend on him as much as she depended on herself

she wasnt embarrassed by the state of economic affairs in her own family.

Not at all!

She loved them as passionately as she made love to him...

He gently placed the spiral note back back he took it from

He knew she would come back and tear off those pages at some point

Last portion is also too good with lovely blue and pink lines 😳

S: What about when you ache (for me)?😳

K: Oh! I just go to a spa when my body aches😉

She smiles slowly...

Thanks a lot for the wonderful part 😃
Shanak are going on a special date in the next part very excited to read the next part...
Thanks Aditee Love u take care 🤗

Good Neend / Good Morning dear friends 😊

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Nisha

@ABlank90

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#377

Adi! Eagerly waiting for the Delhi date 😉

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ppriya_11

@ppriya_11

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#378

Hi Aditee,

Like Shaan I'll also have to say ' Bus itna hi' . After reading ur updates. i always crave for more. I knw Im being a li'l selfish but I'm not the one to blame here.. Am I ?.. After all the writer should be blamed.. isnt it.

Jokes apart.. I liked a little self realization of Shaan ( as I tght it was) in todays part & moreso I gotta know the other perspective of Shaan. Till now I thght him to be egoistic but ther's sumthin more to it tht I realized today.

Gotta tell u .. in one of the updates .. I got very angry wit Shaan whn he started asking abt Prad's & Khanak's meet. IDK why but I was expecting Khanak to ask for good/reasonable explanation frm Shaan for asking such a weird qs.

But as far I've perceived Shaan's character ,he's one of the perfectly imperfect types.. 😉 . I meant one of those perfect guys for whom u'll fall for at first sight itself & start getting irritated after u start living wit thm. I think thts wht happend with Khanak.

Am happy tht I wrote a lamba waala comment 2day 😛

Thanks Aditee for lovely updates..👏

P.S. I knw am not able to comment on a regular basis but will try now onwards.

Thanks,

Priya P

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kiranc

@kiranc

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Posted: 13 years ago

#379

Waiting for dinner date. Hoping to see fireworks 😳.

Edited by kiranc - 13 years ago

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dishbhan

@dishbhan

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#380

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~Cheers,
Dish

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