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Ramani

@RB81

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Posted: 13 years ago

#961

Originally posted by: xoxRBOxox
hey ramzz...I have done the jig for that...naya rup naya ehsaas...
But was just wondering...kitna kaam badha liya Khanak ne...now to fold and keep all those clothes back...mujhe dukh ho raha hai!!!

Hey was just curious, when she left mumbai did she bring all her stuff to delhi or left some in mumbai too😕???

i doubt whether she left things in mumbai..i hope not..everything wud be with her..
waise abhi khanak is feeling too lonely na..so needs something r the other to do..so now she'll rearrange all the things again..😃

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Ramani

@RB81

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#962

Originally posted by: Souma.N
hello guys!!

wow!!! souma here after a very long time..
adi was asking for u..
now everyone including u took off..

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The_Star_Girls

@The_Star_Girls

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#963

Hey Aditee

Loved the Updates ...Specially 197A 👏👏👏

Brilliantly Written. & Special Wow for the lines used by you. Kudos!!! 👏👏👏

YOu are Magical...Sacchi A Big Hug to you from All 23 of us. 🤗🤗🤗

Wow Now Khanak has realised ...Ab aayega mazaa. Fantastic creation. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Waise Khanak ki situation pe Ek superb Gana Yaad aa raha hain, 😳😳😳😳😳

Piya na rahe mann basiya, piya na rahe mann basiya
Piya na rahe mann basiya sakhi re
Piya na rahe mann basiya, piya na rahe mann basiya
Piya na rahe mann basiya sakhi re
Megh nahin biujri bann barse, mohe ek chama naahin arj ae
Megh nahin biujri bann barse, mohe ek chama naahin arj ae
Baathal sang kar ke jiya ra, bole jaa mann basiya
Piya na rahe mann basiya, piya na rahe mann basiya
Piya na rahe mann basiya sakhi re

Aswan sang mora beh gaya kajra
Utri mehndi, sookha gajra
Aswan sang mora beh gaya kajra
Utri mehndi, sookha gajra
Mann basant ko patt jhadh kar woh
Le gayo, le gayo, le gayo, le gayo rang, rang rasiya
Piya na rahe mann basiya, piya na rahe mann basiya
Piya na rahe mann basiya sakhi re

Pal na kate ab sakhi re piya bin
Neem sa kadwa laagey din
Haye neem sa kadwa laagey ab din
Uss pe yeh chanda haye chanda bhi bana sakhi sautan ki
Chanda bhi bana haye sakhi sautan ki
Teeso(30) raat mori amawasiya
Mann basant ko patt jhadh kar woh
Le gayo, le gayo, le gayo, le gayo rang, rang rasiya
Piya na rahe mann basiya, piya na rahe mann basiya
Piya na rahe mann basiya sakhi re

Piya na rahe mann basiya, piya na rahe mann basiya
Piya na rahe mann basiya sakhi re
Megh nahin biujri bann barse, mohe ek chama naahin arj ae
Megh nahin biujri bann barse, mohe ek chama naahin arj ae
Baathal sang kar ke jiya ra, bole jaa bann basiya

Thanks a ton for this wonderful creation.,,,,,,,,,, We really respect you fro this,

& Mainly Thank u for jailing us.

Love

The Star Girls.

P.s:::::: Please Dont Shift this story from here ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, Please Please Please please.😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳

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purvimeh

@purvimeh

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#964

Mrs Shaantanu Gujral is coming back 🥳🥳🥳

Before I begin.. thanks for that note and clarifications coupls of pages behind.. With that raises 10 more questions😆 but will let it go...

Sigh ! Sense and Sensibilities prevails... Khanak had once told Shaan that "I hated ur attention but his indifference would have killed her..". Shaan gambled .. & thanks to Ritu.. 👍🏼 She is finally seeing what she is loosing..

👏 That was flawless Ad..what u wrote... am already lack on words... but that was BRILLIANT writing...

Cannot wait to to have the Ring, the Mangalsutra and the sindoor back with... Thanking you ... Ms Mistry... opps... delete delete... Mrs Gujral..😃

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shalini_s

@shalini_s

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#965

Originally posted by: aditee
I dont want to reveal what he is thinking until he sees Khanak's new avatar

Lets wait for her to floor him

She is a firebrand now

waiting for the fireband now.. bring it on Khanak.. show Shaan his place..

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shalini_s

@shalini_s

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#966

Originally posted by: aditee
Now that I am awake and am looking at it

300 people

THREE HUNDRED have read it since I posted it😲😲😲

But 6 have hit like😲

I am seriously rethinking my decision to stay here

I write for the acknowledgements and comments and the feedback

I think I might just write for the 30 odd that have stuck by me

I see no point in staying here tortoruing Vandoo and Deeps

They hate coming in here

Theyve stuck by me thru everything

I owe it to them

I dont owe to the people who dont even care to acknowledge my work

Aditee.. I read the pages from office but i dont comment until i'm home.. so bear with me 😭

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Aditi S

@aditee

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#967

Shalini_s

Tujhse koi shikayat nahi mujhe

You are here every day

I really am thinking twice about the 100s that read but wont say a word

HAPPY BDAY Shals

Hope you live to be 100

Hope you are active, healthy, and well dressed and independent😃

Hope every day is worth living for

Hope you are sorrounded by people you love at all times

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shalini_s

@shalini_s

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#968

2 beautiful updates.. she so badly misses Hill but she says Chembur to Ritu.. and now even Ritu asks her to think abt another guy.. and the way she goes over every moment she spent with Shaan.. her emotional turmoil.. the way u've written it.. awesome update... and the final punch in pink... i'm really hoping its Ritu she called.. and not the man himself...

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shalini_s

@shalini_s

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#969

Originally posted by: aditee
Shalini_s
Tujhse koi shikayat nahi mujhe

You are here every day

I really am thinking twice about the 100s that read but wont say a word

HAPPY BDAY Shals

Hope you live to be 100

Hope you are active, healthy, and well dressed and independent😃

Hope every day is worth living for

Hope you are sorrounded by people you love at all times

happy Birthday Shals... and Hope v get our daily dose of Casa from Aditee 😃😃😃

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The_Star_Girls

@The_Star_Girls

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#970

Originally posted by: aditee
Shalini_s
Tujhse koi shikayat nahi mujhe

You are here every day

I really am thinking twice about the 100s that read but wont say a word

HAPPY BDAY Shals

Hope you live to be 100

Hope you are active, healthy, and well dressed and independent😃

Hope every day is worth living for

Hope you are sorrounded by people you love at all times

Aditee

We Are really Sorry for not being here regularly.

But Sacchi we read each & every word written by you & we respect it specially.

Sorry but we dont have internet facility. kabhi kabhi we log in from collage...ya phir Jab Cell mahashay hum par meharbaan ho jaye. So please Understand our issue.😳

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