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RB81 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
adi alone is not here..baaki sab looking out for updates..
adi jaldhi aao na??
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: RB81

adi alone is not here..baaki sab looking out for updates..
adi jaldhi aao na??



Ab kahan aayegi yaar ... its like 2:45 am there ... ab jo hoga kal subah ... later morning US time I guess.

~Cheers,
Dish
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Posted: 14 years ago
Priyaa ...

Give the Link for KS !!!!!
And I am SuperUpset for you not responding to my SMS and CALLS !
Hmmmppphhh !
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Posted: 14 years ago
Is it...Then use the word option of replacing the names Jai and Bani with SHANAK...Replace words me jaake replace kardo...And bang on...U have a SHANAK FF...Free time me main jaake dusre forum se ff copy karke...aise karti hoon and then delete kar deti hoon...ROFL !!
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Posted: 14 years ago
finally Aditee is online 👍🏼
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Posted: 14 years ago
Ohk..it so happened dat Priya informed us abt the FF u wrote in KS Forum and since there had been no updates one entire day and was missing ur writing..i happen to go to the place but thru it..a definite NO-NO!!didnt hv the NERVE...but Ads re hats off to you..gt to knw ur ideas were actually incorporated in the show!!!!!Ads,You And Saaaz STUN me,Alwayz!!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: aditee

Sorry

Will post one shortly

yipee... update 😃😃😃
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: fanfictionlover

(Grinning)😃😃😃. Shortly but not short one I guess😳

yup.. Aditee peromised a lambaa update..
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Posted: 14 years ago
Part 188 E
Saturday
Around 2 PM
Her husband opens the door and walks in, shuts it''.

He is sulking

She gets up to go leave, he pulls her hand'.. slamming her against his body

Some of her turqoise and purple bangles break,, and shatter on the floor

Khanak: Yeh kya kar rahe hain aap? (whispers in horror) Dad's in the loving room.

He doesn't say a word, leans her against the wall''.. and pulls on the cord on her back''..

They tussle by the door

In the living room divan''

Sunil's phone signals a text message, he reads'''. Hears muffled sounds from the bedroom

Smiles and closes his eyes

In the room...

Shaan: Are you excited about the new husband? (looks into her eyes)

Khanak: No about your girlfriend...

Shaan: What the hell is that supposed to mean?

Khanak: (squirming to get out of his grip): Erin... I dont even like that name

Shaan:Shes a FREIND

Khanak: The fact that she must be 20 something, hot and great in bed is just incidental? (hurt)

Shaan: How do you know all that?

She is so upset she shuts her eyes...

Shaan: Dad is trying to play games Khanak...

Khanak: He doesnt have to, I know when I am losing...

The hand that had been roving her bare back stops

Shaan: Khanak, lets work on our problems (pleads)

Khanak: Dad is right... maybe we are not compatible

He shows her thats not true...

He is slowly inching towards the bed...

Shaan: Dad is a trouble maker! (disgusted)

Khanak: Because he defends me?

Shaan is playing with her bangles... "They all adore you! Dadi has just about disowned me"

Khanak: You never told me about Erin

They stay ina clinch wordlessly for a few minutes...

Shaan: We are separated remember? (softly)

She tries to get out of his hold...

Khanak: So the same logic applies if I ask you "Did u make love to her?"

He picks her up and lays her on the bed... hovers over her...

"The only logic that applies there would be, I am obsessed with you"

Khanak: Ofcourse! ... when I am around😭

Shaan: Khanak, Dad is trying to mess with us...

Khanak: He doesnt have to...😭

He slowly lowers himself on her, nuzzles her neck

She takes no initiative... just lays there...

Khanak: I did the right thing last week... (sad) I shud just let you go!

He is still, but still on her

Shaan: Oh so all this aloofness is all part of that grand scheme?

Khanak: What ever Dad said is true... you have to agree

He goes back on his side, turns her... to face him

Shaan: Is he telling you what you want to hear?

Khanak:Ive heard it from the day I saw you at the elevator. ... my mind's voice...😭😭

Reaches out and touches his jaw and quickly withdraws

His hand is on her shoulder, gently sliding her blouse off her shoulder.

Shaan: did it also tell you what I had in mind?😳

Khanak: It charges a fee for reading other people's minds

He laughs out loud

Shaan: Fight with me Khanak

Khanak: No...

Shaan: Show me how much you hate me then?

Khanak: 6 months... weve been married for a year and 3 months and lived 8 months away from each other

Shaan: Khanak this is the worst punsihemnt Ive had...

Khanak: dont worry, it will be over soon, when Dad hooks me up with the Surat guy and you can go back to Erin... (sad)

They tussle fiercely again for a few minutes...

Shaan: Before you make wedding plans shouldnt you ask your husband?

Khanak: Hes busy...

Shaan Thats true! (husky)

They kiss... and do some things that married people do...

Shaan: Dad is evil

Khanak: I love him

Shaan: I am sure you do...

His toes and sliding her anklets up and down her leg

Shaan: You know why I came to Delhi😳

Khanak: For "Trish"?😃

Shaan: for someone that really doesnt care about me anymore, you are awfully nosy about who I see.

His hands start on their project

Khanak: Dad has promised to return next month... .😭 Erin is going to come back again he said😭 (holding his wrists)

Shaan: Time to brush up on your Gujarati and my English😃😉

Smothers her...

Edited by aditee - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
They fight nd make love with same passion nd intensity. Love this couple.

Thanks for the update adi 😊

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