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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: rbo_d_best

Is Aditee going to post sooon ????



Candybaar - The daay was greaat .. Bunked Office .. lol !
ANd THANKYOUU darrling :)

bunking office is always great especially on ur birthday 😛😛😛😛😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
can't wait to see the fire brand khanak persue shaan in her own way.

this shaan and khanak are totally captivating my mind.

update kab milega...????? dying know what's coming next...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Adi dearest,
Update karegi weekend pe?
Think over it, do what you want to, I tell this to everyone,
I will not mind if you move it...I will follow you.
I do think CASA needs a bigger platform...your writing is just brilliant and this story is one amazing journey.
There is FF section in IF too...
Chal, have a rocking weekend... 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
Haaaiiiaaa ppl :)😃

I woke up early to read CASA, brush bhi nahi kiya, pahle login kiya...LOL .

Adi ek mast update de do, I wll freshen up nd b back in 10 mins. this weekend there wll b shower of updates 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

ye..i'm happy..
have work today..
but will try to sneak in to catch up on the updates..
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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 197 C

October 7th 2012 Monday

DLF Towers

6:04 PM

After exactly 5 minutes of lull she typed "May I get a ride home?"

Now it was his turn to have a heart condition, he stared at the question for more than a minute... highlighted it... and stared

"Why? Did you miss your bus?" he typed and waited... holding his breath

After a world record breaking pause in conversation

"No! I did not miss my bus" she declared blushing intensely

It was her turn to wait...

She looked as if she had just asked a random stranger if he would go to bed with her.

She stared at her screen without batting her eyelids

"Sure" he said

A small sliver of joy started snaking up her toes, over her belly and finally got to her face and pulled her lips apart in a smile''.

"Thx" she types with butter fingers

"I have a call at 6:15" he says

"Oh!" she says

She leaves it at that not knowing how to end the conversation. This man was causing feelings and emotions never before experienced by her, not as a teen, not while pursuing Sooraj

And to think he was her husband of a year and a half'''..

She waited for the IM to say "Shantanu Gujral is typing" but it did not happen

She knew just how focussed he was about his work

She opened her CAD SW and looked at the most recent designs for Block B

It all looked like a bunch of lines and rectangles''..

Minutes slipped by'''.

7:08 PM

"Hey" he said characteristically

"Hmm" she said bringing a smile to his face, well almost

"In 5?" "At the lobby?" "I have to go catch Saurabh for a second

"Jee!" she said

She was wearing a mustard kurta and a marron salwar, her hair braided like she was a school teacher. There was a tiny speck of gold/mustard on her forehead

She packed her things, picked up her phone, wanted to walk by his cube but did not'. Walked over to the elevator and went down

He arrived in 15 minutes'' she can tell from the Josef Seibel shoes, the trousers are coffee brown today, the shirt a tan and moss green stripe cotton, with shoulder straps''' "Its prolly illegal in some part of the world to look this handsome" she concludes

Shaan: Did you see Vijendar?

Khanak: Kaun? (confused)

Shaan: The guy that drives me in Delhi, the Hertz guy

Khanak: Umm..mmm

They both walk towards the huge imposing double glass doors with a huge brass rod for a handle

She pushes, it wont budge, he pushes it for her, and they step out'..

Vijender is waiting'.. its drizzling'

He smiles at her as if he knows her for years

She smiles back politely

He gets the door, she slides in, "Vasant Kunj" says Shaan Driver nods knowledgably

Its strewn with Shaan's stuff

She collects it and places it in the pouch gently

The driver looks curiously as to why the couple wont speak

Shaan is on the phone, or texting, she looks at her fingers in the dark, he sees it all but doesn't say anything

When he hangs up'..

Khanak: Did you have a good day?

Shaan: "Pretty good", he says with a drawl

Khanak: Hmmm

Pause

Shaan: How was yours?

Khanak: Good Who jo

Shaan: Hmmm?

Khanak: Oh! Nothing'..

Shaan: Hmmm

Khanak who jo 4 designs ki baat chal rahi hai I don't think they will pass

They talk about work for 10 minutes''.

When she has nothing to say she quitens down

Shaan: No fighting on the agenda today? (softly)

She shakes her head looking out the window''

The driver gets her home.

Khanak gets down, Shaan brings her stuff, like always, it reminds her of Pradeep and "home"

She takes her stuff and pauses, he does a "You first" with his arm, and she climbs

Gets to her door, finds her keys after some fumbling

Unlocks, hits the lights...

Khanak: Aap chalenge andar?

"Nahi" he says firmly but politely, waits for her to enter and shut the steel door

She looks at him, he is looking at her bobbing earring, before he turns away and slides down two steps at a time...

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Posted: 13 years ago
yay!!! mil gaya update..
*edited*
oh no..shaan didnt enter..
she called him inside na..
shaan might have 1000 questions in his head now as y khanak asked for ride n all..
adi need shaan's thoughts abt this..
if possible give a wat shaan felt when she asked him to drop her home n ask him whether he'll come in..

Edited by RB81 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

hi aditee... I am expecting my baby soon and is on maternity leave for last few weeks. casa has been my companion for the last three weeks at home. its been wonderful to read casa. I loved the way you write...and has become your fan...I read all the parts of it twice now...

I have started watching the serial after I read casa.

I also saw the discussion going on regarding casa moving to somewhere else. I am not sure if I am a right person to comment on what's been discussed, as this is my first post on this forum and haven't been with you guys for long enough. I completely understand your disappointment of not being able to get the proper response. But I would like to request you to consider using the forum than moving it to somewhere else as I think the basis of this story was from the play. Thanks.

Once again, its been a pleasure reading your writing... sorry that I didnt post any comments earlier... I will make sure I do it regularly from now on...

Shri

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: saishri

I am expecting my baby soon and is on maternity leave for last few weeks.

congrats shri..i'm ramani..eat healthy n stay healthy..
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: RB81

congrats shri..i'm ramani..eat healthy n stay healthy..

Thank you ramani...nice to chat with u...getting a bit tensed and eager now...

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