FF: Partial Amnesia Pt 31Pg145-6th Dec

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Sairaaaa

@Sairaaaa

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Posted: 14 years ago

#891

Beeennniii...I read it upto chapter 23! ALL! Yayyy!

Now, you updated again! Do you want my honest feedback? 😆

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Sharon

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Posted: 14 years ago

#892

Beeni that update was emotionally fab👏...it was beautifully written👍🏼 i feel so sorry for Shaan he is dealing with everything alone😔...its really sad ...he definitely is very brave😊...i wonder how he is gonna stay away from her for 2 more months🤣...well i guess he will have to play a real life hide and seek in order to stay away from her...he shud hide and she shud try to find him...but i feel sorry for khanak a lot ,she is gonna be really distraught wen she knos bout her baby😔...waiting for ur next update😊

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dqkytm

@dqkytm

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Posted: 14 years ago

#893

awww! that was so emotional!! :(

i love it tho!! :)

cant wait for the wedding, but i want khanak to know about their baby.. she should know that their special day would have been their past's special day as well!

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tofeeees

@tofeeees

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Posted: 14 years ago

#894

Thanks guys! Yes I intended to make this update emotional <3

@Saira: Err YEA ofcourse i want your feedback! read this part and give it together! Pleaseee

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shalini_s

@shalini_s

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Posted: 14 years ago

#895

OMG.. Shaan has to stay away from Khanak for 2 months and now their wedding is on 15th Feb... what does detiny (read Beeni) have in mind??

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afiya.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#896

Awwh!! 😭 God I love your writing Beeni!

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foreverRBO

@foreverRBO

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Posted: 14 years ago

#897

amazing!!

brilliantly penned update beeni...👏

it ws wrth all d wait 😃

i jst luv d way u hv sketched khushboo's character...

all her tantrums n mood swings r xactly d way we wud hv xpected her 2 show if she ws shown preg in d show... bt sadly we never gt a chance..

bt as i always say i m reliving all d golden rbo moments wid ur ff...n creating sm fantasting new moments also ... thanks.. 😃

for shaan n khanak i believe dis is d true role reversal.. khanak being all betaab😉

n shaan pondering over sm serious issues... 😭

dese 2 mnths r gonna b more difficult 4 shaan dan d last 4-5 mnths... coz nw khanak will xpect him 2 b intimate.. hw will he maintain d physical distance??

poor him 😭

awww!! wat connection u thought abt d wedding date.. 👏

continue soon 😊

loads of love..

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tofeeees

@tofeeees

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Posted: 14 years ago

#898

@Shalu: Thanks LOL @ what beeni/destiny has in store hehe. don't worry it'll all be good!

@Afiya: Aww thanks! aray roh toh nahi :( waisay even i found the dadi shaan thing a bit emo----maybe i should have followed it with a cheerful para lol.

@ foreverRBO: I forgot your name! Gosh!I'm so sorry! Is it Nimisha? anyway thanks a lot! i always had the wedding date and the birth of the child connection fit in my mind even before i started writing this :D :D so yea it's really special when i actually put it finally over here!

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Ramani

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Posted: 14 years ago

#899

hei beeni,
an emotional update..but loved it..
the way shaan didnt react to geeta when she said abt not to have any intimate relation for another 2 months..so lovely when shaan asked wat he shud do to ensure that khanak wud be 100% alright..
shaan cud never disclose abt their unborn child to khanak..so he wishes to postpone their marriage for that..but khanak is in hurry now..
i imagined khanak in the white n red saree coming down the stairs..moment of bliss..
feb 15th had this significance in his life..none other than daadi noticed the change in shaan's face..poor shaan..daadi is a sweet heart..the way she consoled him was sweet..
sushant wants his parents to have that as a memorable day..so nice..do continue soon..

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Sonali

@adventure_gurl

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Posted: 14 years ago

#900

loved the update! what an emotional twist, hope Shantanu and Khanak can get stronger and have more happiness this time around. Hope Khanak recovers soon and can forgive everyone when she finds out the truth😕

Edited by adventure_gurl - 14 years ago

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