FF: Partial Amnesia Pt 31Pg145-6th Dec

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-YasharanArshi-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#671

Originally posted by: tofeees
Thank you and hugs to everyone who read and liked the update 🤗 Should be fun now with the crowd in the house lol.😆

"LIKE" my comment atleast ... Tumhe Mere Pyaaar Ki Koi Qadar nahi !!!!

When are you updating next ?

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tofeeees

@tofeeees

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Posted: 13 years ago

#672

Sorry Shalu yaaar whenever you post I have to make sure i jaldi say read it because your sig is very dangerous :s i am in the office na. I won't change my settings so don't tell me to lol. And you could have commented on the update rather than question my love for you :(

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-YasharanArshi-

@-YasharanArshi-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#673

LMAO ... She is COOKING Chicken for him ???

Eeekks ... LOL ... This is gotta be the Uniquest way to get to him !

Make him her slave ... as if he s already not one !

LOL !!!!

Woman .. The Mitul-Natasha CONVO was amazing ... Hilarious !!!!

Boo's Mood Swings ... Can imagine the Tantrums ... LOL ... I MISS EVERYONEE RIGHT NOWWW !!!!

LIKE RIGHT NOWWW !!!!!

Sigh ... Loved to read about everyone having breakfast together ... Reminded me of the RoleReversal scene .. when Shaan cooks food ... Sigh ... what a classic scene that was !

So Natural ... Feels like watching a real Family !

I miss RBO / ShanaK and the Yasharan magic !

Thankss Baybeee for giving us this wonderful story ... Told differently !

Sigh ... Loveee you ... muaaah .. Update sooon !!!!

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tofeeees

@tofeeees

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Posted: 13 years ago

#674

^^ hehe that's better Shalu! LOL! Thank God you mentioned the Mitul Natasha conversation I had fun writing that! and also Shaan's conversation with Khusbhoo at the table lol. Yea i miss them too :( so much it hurts :(

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snigdhanagar

@snigdhanagar

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#675

omg khanak n chiken...😉
loved it...next update soonnn...

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-YasharanArshi-

@-YasharanArshi-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#676

^^ hehe that's better Shalu! LOL! Thank God you mentioned the Mitul Natasha conversation I had fun writing that! and also Shaan's conversation with Khusbhoo at the table lol. Yea i miss them too :( so much it hurts :([/QUOTE]

Yes ... It hurts a bloody lot !!!

Uparse I went to that new forum and saw some Pictures in the gallery ... new pair pics ... I CANT BEAR to watch !!!!

Ugggh ... especially when KT doesnt have any issues clicking pics OFFSCREEN with his co-stars !!!!

WE DONT have ONE ... NOT EVEN ONE Yasharan offscreeen pic ... 😡

LOSERS ! 😡

Edited by rbo_d_best - 13 years ago

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Anu179

@Anu179

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Posted: 13 years ago

#677

HIYA Beeni...what a lovely update!!!!

I was just re-watching the poona trip scences 2 days back, where Khanak is all set to manaofy Shaan...and him saying we can't be friends...and all...superb Beenz...love how you incorporate the scence and dialogues from the show...thus sustain the continuity in your FF... and now here this time around Khanak repeating what Shaan had voiced earlier...just brilliant...brings back the memory in good way...RBO nahin to BEENI JINDABAAD!!!!!

So our burthals are finally sharing the same room...Shaan all shy and hesitant...and Khanak bold and daring...Kya boolon...I'm just being repetitive...mind blowing...I'm loving this role reversal!!!

GOOD LORD!!!!! Is family really thinking that...their first night together and things have been resolved and they have *ahem*...yeah BOO ko toh BOOO karne ka mann kar raha hai...love bite...LOL!

Shaan's and Adi's convo was very heart rending...I fully empathize with Shaan...wish that part of memory never comes back...but not possible...dunno what will happen when that happens...in a way it will be healing too...esp for Shaan...my heart goes out to him...poor thing is enduring so much and portraying a strong and brave front...sab kuch jaante huye control karna is the worst kind of punishment esp when the one person with whom you can share your deepest emotions/feelings/thoughts, is the one from whom you have to hide it all...Irony of life!!!!!

Thank you so much Beenz...each and every word is Excellently executed...dil Kush ho jaata hai update pad kar ke...afsoos intezaar lamba ho jaata hai...nevertheless worth the wait!!!!!!

🤗🤗

P.S.- This line..."Aap kay dil kay rastay tuk pohanchnay ka acha raasta ata hain mujhay----Chicken!" she thought and turned to her side of the bed too... when I read it the first time round...I thought she is calling him "chicken" for behaving the way he is...🤣🤣...

After reading the last line...and re reading this again...🤣🤣...she is cooking chicken for him...That's something new...I'm all for it!!!!...wish they had shown in the show too her cooking non-veg for him!!!

BTW...I just re activated the avataar and banner option to see your sig...beautiful indeed!!!!!

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tofeeees

@tofeeees

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Posted: 13 years ago

#678

Ann i just LOVE your long comments they always make my day! I read them 5 times! :O lol. Thank you so much for the effort it means so much! *hugss* I'm SO glad you understand the sorry start Shaan is and as you rightly said KNOWING everything and not being able to share his grief with the person he has emotionally bonded with is really torturous for him. I was hoping i could bring that out. And his dilemma that if he tells Khanak he will have to face her grief though it will lessen his pain if he shares it with her and if he doesn't tell khanak that would make him suffer too :s

LMAO @ the chicken story! and yes the dialogues! I was wondering if anyone noticed that roles have changed lol and this time it is khanak who is saying we can;t be friends and Shaan not being able to do anything about it! hehehe

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Anu179

@Anu179

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Posted: 13 years ago

#679

Thanks Beenz...Its your beautiful narrative that compels us to comment...so all the credit indeed goes to you...keep writing...God Bless You!!!!

You are carrying forward the story very well...its better for Khanak to get flashes herself, and remember things, esp abt the accident and its consequences...waiting for the moment when she'll realise how much pain Shaan went through to put up this pretence in order to keep her happy...Great going Dear...I absolutely love your style of writing...I get lazy posting comments at times, esp after reading the wonderful posts by other co-readers😃!!!!

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deepalisawant99

@deepalisawant99

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Posted: 13 years ago

#680

hey!!!! awesum update... khanak giving tough time to shaan... loved da bedroom scene...

shaan Adi convo was superb...

! this was a killer line "

"Aap kay dil kay rastay tuk pohanchnay ka acha raasta ata hain mujhay----Chicken!" she thought and turned to her side of the bed too.. "wow !!!! khanak making chicken for Shaan...!!!!

beautiful update... loved it...

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