FF: Partial Amnesia Pt 31Pg145-6th Dec

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shalini_s

@shalini_s

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#291

Beeni.. totally loved it... very funny.. liked the addition in Part A and Khanak's questions..

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May

@The_May_Rose

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#292

😆...Brilliant Beeni👏⭐️...I can imagine where this is going...Shaan friends try to help, but everything backfires😆...In the end Shantanu Khandelwal will say ' Woh meri biwi hai, ab jo karna woh mein kud karo ga"...By which time Khanak will have left the house for the 5th time...Or is it 6th?...Does the leaving with Shaan count?😕😆...

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Manita

@-Manita-

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#293

Beautiful...as always !!!

Each n every emotion...each n every dialogue...each n every nuance treated with a finesse that it leaves a person in awe !!!

you are absolutely a treat to read !!

Loved teh checklist...I remembered the numerous discussions we had on CCC and DT about how you were so particular about checklists !!

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Amritha

@OlicityFan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#294

tashu and her overacting! amazingly done Beenz!

im still laughing...i could clearly picture the entire thing happening! how i wish this was shown in the show! it would hav been an amazing track!

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tofeeees

@tofeeees

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Posted: 13 years ago

#295

Thank you sooo much guys for all your lovely comments! I'm SO glad you all enjoyed this part! Haha watch out for more of this hehehehe but at the same time watch out for more sadness as well :s

@May LOLL: nice thought :D Bechara Shaan. When I was writing this part I wasn't feeling so bad for Shaan but when I read it I was like bechaaraaa LOL. Stay tuned about whether Khanak will leave the house or not lol

@Manita: OMGGG yeaaa!! LOL i am SO obsessed with checklists i thought kyun na main unko yahan daal doon! LOL

@SKD: Haha I can assure you that Khanak has indeed lost her memory! I don't think she would have tortured Shaan like this with such a straight face haha

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IF_rida

@IF_rida

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#296

Fantastic beeni👏

hmm jealousy at the peak 😉

they outlined a plane...unbelievable😆

the guitar part or i shd day the tanpura part was beautiful😍

i was laughing throughout while natasha and shaan were fighting🤣

the most craziest and funniest fight😆

penned amazingly... continue soon.👍🏼

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Sharon

@sharon18

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Posted: 13 years ago

#297

wow awesome👍🏼...it was so different and beautiful😃...the fight between shaan and natasha was hilarious😆 and the part were khanak enjoyed being with shaan learning to play the 'TANPURA' was too good😳...plz update next part soon

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-mesmerised-

@-mesmerised-

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#298

Haha awesome update Beeni! Just what i needed today. 😊

Tanpura... reminds me of a certain Shanaklicious scene... *sigh*

Could totally imagine how all of them would have acted it out if we had got this in the show! ⭐️

Shanak playing the guitar together was so cute! 😍 Natasha was hilarious and lol at Shaan's comment regarding Geeta's checklist! I make lists for everything... maybe that's why i'm single too! 🤣 😳

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