FF: Partial Amnesia Pt 31Pg145-6th Dec

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Krishna

@kubare

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#101

Beeni have I told you how cute you are...pulling cheeks* Your first comment on speeding the FF up as you can't wait for them to fall in love ...cute...LOLYour cutness and humour comes out in your story too..I coudl so see Dr. Geeta played by Ragni making all those faces and Dr. Mitul's voice playing in her head...sigh...cuteness ki hadhSigh...my darling Shan...love him to bit and my baby Khanak...you Beeni are brilliant you truly are...am all ready to buy a book when ever you write one and get one published no joking...Sigh..this was one track that I so wanted to see...in RBO...Partial Amnesia and Khanak losing her memory...

P.S.Sorry for the B'day mix up...LOL

Can't wait for the next part from you soon.

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purvi08

@purvi08

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Posted: 14 years ago

#102

beeni di

just loved it

you made me cry

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tofeeees

@tofeeees

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+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#103

OMGGG thank you everyone!! <3 You guys are sooo nice!! I love you all for loving my writing. You guys all make my day!! :D Btw I don't know if you guiys noticed but i just thought I'd tell you anyway because i think i didnt make it clear in my writing (not sure) that the Flashback in the last part was a flashback which was being relived by both Shaan and Mitul at the same time. I thought i didn't bring it out very clearly.

@Vandu: haha you can predict all you want I'm not going to tell you ofcourse. But rest assured I have the entire story planned out in my head till the end! :D just wait and watch.

@Shalu: Nope the doctors have not told her that she lost her baby yet. You will find out why in the next part hopefully :) If you're thinking on the lines of medically "how in the world does khanak not know?" i have an answer to that too 😆

@Krishna: You just made my day a thousand times brighter 🤗

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purvi08

@purvi08

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#104

we love you too beeni di🤗

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jyothi1989

@jyothi1989

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#105

OMG Beeni this is just outstanding piece of writing from u are making me cry with these updates goshhh so heart aching to read these stuff if it would have actually happened in the show it would have be a crying all the while its complete horror for me. goshhh completly perfect scenes dear .so much of emotional and pain in these updates hmmm finally khanak knowing that shaan is the one she got married .cant wait for khanak reaction waiting for it

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deepali

@-Deepali-

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#106

So finaly shaan decleared in front of her that she married with him..cant wait for khanak reaction after hear that.
Awesome update Beenz..beautiful and realistic:)

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smitha

@SPN_JD_Addicted

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#107

Just so damn beautiful!!!!!So can imagine ShaNak going thru all this,thats how beautifully you have written.So wish we could have had this to see in RBO!!!AWESOME!

BTW,ur sig is amazing!!Maang bhari scenes of ShaNak!

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Priyasree

@shonai

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Posted: 14 years ago

#108

very nice update...

finally she ws told that she is shaan's wife...waiting 4 the next part

update soon

& try 2 giv a long part

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tofeeees

@tofeeees

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#109

^^ thanks Smitha *hugsss* hehe stay tuned for the coming parts! I'm going to make it kinda amusing lol and OMGG thank you for liking the sig! I made it lol! kidding! Hinna made it ofcourse! I asked her to make this one for me specifically as an early birthday present :D and she DIDDD! :D :D

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minnu345

@minnu345

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Posted: 14 years ago

#110

Hey beeni😊

finally the truth was out😕

i am seriously waiting for khanaks reaction 😍

after khanaks reaction i think romance will begin all over wow i am really exited😍

beeni update quickly

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