FF: Partial Amnesia Pt 31Pg145-6th Dec - Page 108

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Posted: 13 years ago
Part 30?! Okay that means I have 6 parts to read up on! How long will that take me? Are they long parts?😆 How about you sum up what's happened in the last 6 parts?? :P Lol sorry i'm just being lazy!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wonderful update beeni👏

beautifully penned

awww he bend his head... loved it

the dress description was to die for

but finally they are married... yipeee

hmm now how he's goin to tell her the actual reason for being away and abt the consummation😳

poor guy... shaan kitna pareshaan hoga

mrs.malhotra is a peace... poor mittul but it was actually fun reading😆

loved it

update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Beeni that was lovely🤗oh i jus loved it😊especially the way u wrote the marriage functions,it was not too short and not too long jus perfect👍🏼👏...finally they are married😃...i liked Mrs Malhotra😆oh poor mithul,she is really embarrassing🤣...well Beeni jus one doubt,is there gonna be a storm during the next few updates😕cause since all the functions and everything went smoothly,i had this feeling that u made it that way to prepare us for a storm😕...well i really dunno wat to expect next,but i cant wait for the next update😃thnx for updating🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
⭐️👏...Whenever I have to post a reply Beeni I get stuck...Becuse there is so much to say and I can't always express it in words and I may sound repetitve😳...Once again I will say how prefectly you created the RBO world...Even new characters such as Mitul's Mum are perfect...
OMG she is so hilarious😆...Poor Mitul...K-family rock as ever...I could just picture poor Akshay...And Sunil Uncle enjoying everyone esle's issues😃...Shaan watching Khanak dance *sighs*...His conversation with Madhavi, awww😊...ShaNak's moonlight dance 😍...Natasha & Megha dressing Khanak and their conversation😆...Funny and heart-warming...And on Shaan's whole khandan being perverted 🤣😆😳...
Awww and the wedding⭐️😍👏...I could just picture YashAran and they looked heavenly...When Shaan bowed his head to Khanak I loved him even more...What a love!...Love their love❤️😍...And you ended it perfectly on Khanak thoughts and ShaNak's complete happiness😃...
I guessed you would wait till Shaan would have to tell her and she knows something is missing...Now is the right time...I can't wait to read it...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: .-BalleBalle-.

Part 30?! Okay that means I have 6 parts to read up on! How long will that take me? Are they long parts?😆 How about you sum up what's happened in the last 6 parts?? :P Lol sorry i'm just being lazy!


Oye no summing up okay! Parhna hain toh parho hubby jee!😆 Aur faltu main don't spam my thread. yashan only comments are allowed by those who have READ the parts! Miss you Jodha <3 Humari shadi ko Ek saal honay wala hain!!😃I am SOOO excited!!! Let's make Shanak celebrate our one year in this FF too what say? hehe. 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
Again simply LOVED all your comments guys! thank you so mucchhh! I agree I didnt want to make the wedding a drag and please forgive me if the reception that is to follow is short too hehe. I'm so happy you guys liked it! I added Mrs Malhotra for some new fun in the wedding. I was apprehensive since her entry had got nothing to do with Shanak so I thought you guys might not like her addition in the story but am SO happy you all did! thank you! Means a lottt <3 <3 Writng the next part now :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update Beeni 👏

Beautiful part 30 I always feel like i am watching RBO when i read ur updates

Me too miss our RBO Yashran and everyone very badly 😭

Ur updates are just mindblowing making us relieve with Shanak RBO wonderful memories 😍

I want our Yashran RBO back in our lives i am sure they will be back praying and waiting for that day...

I completely agree with @Shal's post loved ur post Shals u said it all 😊

Perfect person to play Mitul's mom character I love her 😊

Haaye Shanak's romantic dance one of my all time fav song 😍

Jab koi baat bigad jaaye---- jab koi mushkil pad jaaye

Tum dena saath mera ----o humnawaa

Pure bliss Beeni i am lost in Shanak's paradise 😍

Finally Shanak got married the wedding was so pure, perfect,serene,beautiful and complete ⭐️ 😍 😃

Beautifully written 👏 ⭐️


I am quoting the last portion loved it so much


Khanak came closer. Everyone was right. Shaan WAS really tall. She lifted her head slightly to figure out an estimation of how easy or difficult it would be for her to put the varmala around his neck. She realised that never before today had she noticed that Shaan was almost a foot taller than her. Shaan continued to smile with hands folded. Khanak's eyes met Shaan's and in that instant that Shaan looked into her eyes he knew that his entire world was hers. This was where he belonged. In her eyes, in her heart, in her smile, in every breath she took. And automatically, as though an invisible force was pushing him, Shaan bent his head forward in front of Khanak, making it level with Khanak's head so that she put the varmala around his neck with ease. Many guests gasped, many cheered, and many clapped and hooted. Shaan straightened up as chants of "Dulha jhook gaya" engulfed him.

"Ub toh saari zindagi tumko iss kay saamnay jhukna paray ga Shaan----" Shaan's aunt said loudly amist cheers and discussions at Shaan's latest act.

Shaan looked into Khanak's eyes again and felt that same feeling that he had felt a moment ago. "Mujhay manzoor hain, Mausi" he said, putting the garland around Khanak's neck now not breaking eye contact with his wife.

They took the seven rounds of matrimony, each more meaningful than the other, each more significant than the previous. Khanak kept her eyes open when Shaan was putting the sinddor on her forehead just like she had when he had put it once previously when her hands had mehndi. She wanted to capture the moment that Shaan tied the new Mangal sutr around her neck and the moment when Khanak's mother did her kanyadaan. She wanted to feel the touch of Shaan's hand into hers for her entire life, and the rest of the lives that were to follow. She wanted to promise herself that she would be his wife in all the lives that were to come, to love him for eternity and more. At the end of the ceremony she felt she had got all her wishes. Everything was calm now. Everything was beautiful.


Thanks a lot for this lovely part its pure bliss 😃

Love u always 🤗

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Posted: 13 years ago
finally the marriage is done... now waiting to know if Shaan tells her the truth..
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Posted: 13 years ago
sorry for the late replay...
thank u for the Awesome update Beeni!!!😆
he bend his head... loved it
shaan always "joru ka gulam"yaar...
wedding is done... perfectly
wow!!benni u update wedding part very nicely...i love all the ceremony ...
and song during Valentine day that was very beautiful...
i love this song very much...
and mitul mom? i like...
cant wait now beeni...
update next part soon...
know the which one...😉
thank u thank u so much...




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Posted: 13 years ago
Oh man!!!!
This is really Fantabolous.. AWESOME YAAR!!!!

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