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Nisha

@ABlank90

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Posted: 13 years ago

#111

Nice update though thora mushkil tha to follow it cz of the short forms 😕 But i liked it. Now waiting for you to unravel how Shaan and Khanak got married. What is Shaan hiding? They're obviously attracted to each other tou problem kahan hai Tia do tell us soon. 😊

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jyothi1989

@jyothi1989

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Posted: 13 years ago

#112

hayeee hottt the fall from the table the rat thing them sleeping together shaan admiring her in that sleeping state and cuddling into him and putting her arms around him hayeee dead and the part hayeee i am just speechless it was ousing with hottness yarrr this would have been the hottest way ever of keep a zip of a dress .sighsss blisss moment .and the kisss dead .u stopped at the wrong moment tia now i am go all mad thinking wht will happen next to them cant wait plzzz dont take long to update plzzz and one request plzzz it is really hard to read in hindi can u plzzz write the update in english plzz humble request

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--Tia--

@--Tia--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#113

Originally posted by: RB81
thanks for updating finally..
short but nice..
waise if u have planned it with arjun-arohi n write it that way finally replace arjun with shaan,arohi with khanak na..n jay with akash..at times while reading these different names sometimes confuse us..just a suggestion..but this replacing wud be easy if u update from computer..if not mistakes do happen..so i'll try to correct it that way..

too much to unfold to know the exact scenario that is revolving around them..do continue soon..

Sorry yaar bohot confusion hojati hai ! Actually meri ek cousin hai wo b same story arjun-arohi k naam se ikhti hai to kabhi kabhi agar main busy hoti hun to us ki updtaes mein editig kar k un ko engish mein kar k aur some lines add kar k post karti hun waise whre did u saw it ! :P

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_sweet_

@_sweet_

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Posted: 13 years ago

#114

Hottt..zipne kamal kr diya isikaran wo pass to aaye..hey tia kya tm convo jb hota hai to thoda space dalo...

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Ramani

@RB81

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Posted: 13 years ago

#115

Originally posted by: --Tia--
Sorry yaar bohot confusion hojati hai ! Actually meri ek cousin hai wo b same story arjun-arohi k naam se ikhti hai to kabhi kabhi agar main busy hoti hun to us ki updtaes mein editig kar k un ko engish mein kar k aur some lines add kar k post karti hun waise whre did u saw it ! :P

arohi was there in the previous update..looks like u changed it..(prev update had mr.Malhotra/this update had Mr.Singhania..so wat is shaan's surname actually..,Khanak,jay sat in the car.
) n in this update too(arhoi(lookng dwn): han us ne btadya ,)..
this update was hottie hot..
they kissed..waise wat was their exact relation before marriage..need a clear picture of that..
initially khanak misunderstood him n slapped her n all..after knowing did she ask sorry??did he forgive her??r their relation change now is as a result of his revenge??
but looks like both r very much attracted to the other..may be they didnt confess earlier due to their ego r something..
do continue soon..

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Sharon

@sharon18

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Posted: 13 years ago

#116

Wow Tia great update😃 but im really really confused what happened between them i thing we need some flashbacks to kno exactly what is the story...im in a confused state of mind😕...ur update was really good👍🏼...they do love each other but due to some unknown reason hate each other...plz clear my confusion soon...waiting for ur next update😃

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deepalisawant99

@deepalisawant99

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#117

Awesum update Tia...

loved it...

update soon... waiting...

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IF_rida

@IF_rida

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Posted: 13 years ago

#118

wow wow wow☺️

tia it was hot ... awesome👏

even the zip can work as cupid sum time😉
😛
the shoes and shaan running from dadi was super cute at least mr hottie is scared of sum1😆

hmmm and mrs hottie is scared of mouse😛

the part where he was pulling the blanket and admiring her was lovely... that part was so lovey dovey... super cute😍

hmm dadi is suffering from cancer but there is still sumthing behind it... em very curious abt it and now the michael twist ... if i've guessed it right wht michael has done so how can she forgive him😲

finally ... action speak louder than words... ☺️

but wht if they think that it was a weak moment😲... kuch tragedy na ho 😳

loved it continue soon.

Edited by IF_rida - 13 years ago