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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow!!!!!! woderfull name, My Passionate Desire..😉...luvd it
waiting for the update...update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#92
Tia

You are toh Gayab after announcing New name


Waiting for Mr. & Mrs, Malhotra to Rock the World just like The Perfect & Most adorable Mr & Mrs. Singhania

Waitng for the update ...C'mon start posting soon

Love
Pranjal.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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yaar pranjal i am sorry i din knew d that thing will turn so bad i just got a horrible news my exams dates r changed ! right know i am trapped with revisions and plus i have started taking tuitions which is more horrible i got time on wed ! But some tragedy happened with me and ma frnd so i wasn't able to get outa bed! and today Thursday! 11th October it was karan kundra's bDAy and and upcoming 25th will be kritika kmra's bday so we decided as they both r in diff cities and r far away from ech other so me n ma frnd decided y don't we celebrate their bdays hehe and we did today we was celebrating their BDay's by a wild party and tomoorow i have outing with cousin see, soo hectic schedule so u guys have to w8! :'(

I know i am always doing like that but last 2 months have me got dead and so r another too i'll be free til 3 december my last exam ! :P
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: --Tia--

yaar pranjal i am sorry i din knew d that thing will turn so bad i just got a horrible news my exams dates r changed ! right know i am trapped with revisions and plus i have started taking tuitions which is more horrible i got time on wed ! But some tragedy happened with me and ma frnd so i wasn't able to get outa bed! and today Thursday! 11th October it was karan kundra's bDAy and and upcoming 25th will be kritika kmra's bday so we decided as they both r in diff cities and r far away from ech other so me n ma frnd decided y don't we celebrate their bdays hehe and we did today we was celebrating their BDay's by a wild party and tomoorow i have outing with cousin see, soo hectic schedule so u guys have to w8! :'(

I know i am always doing like that but last 2 months have me got dead and so r another too i'll be free til 3 december my last exam ! :P


Tia

First of all best of luck for the Exams

First concentrate on that & Do well (i am sure you will)

We will wait for the update ...First finish your Exams

& Specially Wishing A very Happy belated Birthaday to your favrate Karan Kundra

& Advance Happy Birthday to Kritika kamra (you are a bif fan na you can anything for them ...Lolz i recognise u were gushing that ur Boss looks like Karan kundra & thats why you loved your Job 😉

Chalo Koi nai ...I understnad your hactic sehdule 😆 camprises of Wild parties & camping 😉 😉 ...Enjoy & have fun 😛 😉

BEST OF LUCK 👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Tadaaa !😆

Guess who its Tia finally time nikal hi liya khair hai jo v hota hai update to dena hi pardega haina? So brought a news the peeps who were readers of my other ff , Ek baat sulo

This one is a typical one , Like too ... um kisa samjhaun jo v hai baad mein pata lag jayega its hindi types huh! so usually it will be tia new style to write 😉

So be prepared update will be in half an hour just editing it 😳


Edited by --Tia-- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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tia when are u posting it my dear .just cant wait for teh story to unfold
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks for all the support plss like this post to get a Pm :)


Shaan ad khanak are working in the same cabin, checking papers , file . for 1 hour, they both were silent, while taking out the files, and walking here to there in tension,embarrassment just then there eyes met, which made the situation more awkward, something is bothering them, but they cant figure out,while taking out file from cabin,khanak broke the silence "Damn this Sari..."
"So take take it out" said shaan and the realizing.. , khanak gave him a shocking expression, "i,ahem,i mean, So why did wear it?" shaan corrected
"I am not interested in doing experiment,its dadi who had put me in this horrible prob..."explained khanak. Shaan concentrating on his own work, "You can't face problems..."said shaan
khanak:Huh, Ahan So mr.Malhotra why don't u give this advic to yourself first!"said khanak giving him a smirk.
Shaan got angry, because he know, that she know , he is afraid of dadi only. she was struggling with sari and her files fall, she was about to grab them. but Shaan strong grap hold her arm tightly ,her sari slipped from her shoulder,
" Shaan leavee my hand"said khanak struggling with her haand
"Neither i face problems nor i solve them, i just finish them"said shaan
by saying this, he moved her sari to her shoulder, and open his broach,from his shirt. he moved his fingers, under her blouse strips, 4 fixing the sari. "Aise khtam krte hen prblms" he looked at her face, by seeing her red blushed face, he realized what have he done, his fingers are still under her blouse touching her bare shoulder. they were looking into each other eyes.Her heart beating fast and he became breathless. Suddenly Akash entered the cabin...
"yar dadi... oops...wrong timing" Said akash and turned back.
Shaan and khanak looked away and turned facing each other back.
"What is the matter Akash" asked shaan
"Dadi Have called u both at home" Said Akash.
"Tak her i have work to do" Said shaan getting irritate.
"So what was u doing till now?" Giggled akash..
"shutup" Said Shaan
"Yah i want to go home"said khanak.
I am waiting at parking lot" Left Akash laughing.
Khanak ran toward the door, but she heard a voice, "no, it cant,it impossible...
they both turn back, and saw Khanak sari was stuck in Shaan sleeve button, and because of da broach ,it was tore form the mid...
Shaan mouth open wide, while she start crying,and said " Know how will i be going out? I don't face probs i just finsih them hun, hun my foot"
he took out his coat, take dis no 1 cud see da tear part.
Khanak: itni sari dhup men coat, log pagal smjhenge.
Shaan: ek rasta he...
in da parkng , Akash,Mehek was laughing, Shaan and khanak came, khnak wearing shaan coat, while he wrapped her in his arms.

Mehek: Khanak are u alryt?
Khanak stard Shaan..
Shaan: I won't be coming with u guys,she would miss me so i gave her my coat so... (looking down)
mehek: sir ,how romantic
Shaan: better v get back 2 work. dy leave,while Khanak,Akash sat in the car.

Akash:Khanak U know what i am damn happy !
Khanak: Why did u got Malaika arora phone number
Akash: o ,Nah,For Shaan ,for u both.
I Still remembered 2 months before, Later on u got to know that i did the accident and u blamed Shaan,he was innocent me n ashish were friends i was the only one that brought ashihsh in hospital and remember Shaan handled abhi's company abhii the man who misbehaved with u in inte
rview U thought it was shaan...
FLASHBACK


It was her 1st day,Sunil introduced dem. dy pretend that they dint knew eachothr, they shook hand, bt Shaan pressed her hand tightly, 4 shwng his anger,it was painful , she want to took out her hand, bt not so..Sunil was busy on his phone.She closed her eyes and wid all her effort , she pressed her nails in his hand, Shaan shouted and leave her...
Sunil: wt happen son?
he still holding his hand bcoz of pain.
Khanak:N..nothin
Shaan lft, dy both hv 2 share da same cabin, Shaan mood was Horrible bad, he was writing, Akash entered, and looked his hand, da marks were visible

Akash: hey Shaan, hey whats that!?
Shaan:a..a kuch nhi
Khanak enterd
Akashh:hi khanak , she pretend to wrk, Shaa push him: Go away lemme concentrate! Its coz of ..a...Table yeah table.
Akash: jhoot na bol, mujhe experence he, k ye kis situatin k hen.
SHaan raised his eyebrow:kis situatin ke?
Akash: yar mujhe tujh se to ye umeed nhi thi, aesa kya krdya jo nubat yahan tk aagai
Khaank file droped,
Akash: sory men bhul gya ta tum yahan ho, lekin kya fraq prta he , men to aisa hi hun.tum aadat dal lo. aur as a 4rnd tum btao, grls apne nail press kb krti hen??..

SHaan grab his collar 4rm back" Come with me i'll xplain.

AT PRESENT

Akash: He hit me soo much that day,lo ghr aagya...
tum dono k bich kuch to he, wo to mujhe pehle hi pta tha, aur ab to mujhe ye bhi pta chal gya ko wo mark kis k the, dekha mujhe sb pta he.

khanak:(2 herself) tumhe ab bhi, kuch nhi pta akash.'..

Guys I'll be updateing from my mobile so it will be horrible to give long long updates and yeah ! So many spelling mistakes :P

1.i'll be writing in short forms

2.In hindi,Urdu

3>Short updates

Will try to update , check next post Pls till then press like button and comment

Chapter 4

Edited by --Tia-- - 13 years ago
shonai thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#98
nice part...loved it
Khanak's saree was tore bcz of his broach , & he gave her his coat & the excuse he gave to Akash & Mehek was very good,, i didnt expect this

& her comment of Malaika arora's phn numbr was very funny

short but very nice part
& add me in ur pm list
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Posted: 13 years ago
#99
Really nice part tia

i was laughing at the excuse

just like akash we even dont know much

the flashback was very gud

continue soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
the flash back is good looking forward
it is really good part

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