FF ~In A Heartbeat~update 13 pg39 She is the one ! - Page 3

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Posted: 14 years ago
#21
liked the idea.. whens the next update??
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Posted: 14 years ago
#22
hey guys thank you for liking my idea

I have written the update but as my internet is too slow I will post it soon today
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Posted: 14 years ago
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oh..luv u prerna..i always wanted a colege based story on our fav shanak...thanks tumne bina kahehi mere dil ki baat sun li...thanks a lot...and pls update ASAP
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Deepali88

Are you Saw My Siggis Box mani.. 😛
I have use 3 siggis and 1 avis at a time😊


aint that yasharan i love you siggie cute I was in heaven when I created it !
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Posted: 14 years ago
#25

NOTE

as I told before that this is a collage love story

so the language used will be simple and will be a hindi and english mix I did this cause most of collage going kids speak like that

so dont mind that there is a mixture of hindi and english !

1st Update

Its 11pm and khanaks best freind ankita has come up to her house for a sleep over one day beore their first day at collage

KHANAK-Pata nahin wahan kaise log honge'' aur kya padhai mushkil hogi. Ugh this is so frustuating humara kal collage hai aur hume pata hi nahin kya hoga!!!

ANKITA-Paagal!!sab log ehli baar collage jatein hainand I am sure that there will be lots of people from our school aur waise bhi tu toh hamesha top 5 mein rehti thi aur abhi bhi rahi gi toh tension kyun le rahi hai

SEEMA-Chalo ab soo jao kal collage bhi toh jana hai

GOODNIGHT !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Its 11:30 pm and shaan is sitting infront of his TV watcxhing a movie akshay comes in and switches it off

SHAAN-Yaar bas ending bachi thi baad nein bhi toh baat ho sakti hai na !

AKSHAY-bilkul nahin kal tumhara collage hai toh mein tumhen kuch important cheezen patana chahta hoon

SHAAN-YUP tell me

AKSHAY-Dekh chote collage school se bahut alag hota hai agar tum yahan par doston ke saath hi rahe toh gaadi age nikal jaye gi aur tum piche reh jao ge toh apne lectures pe dhyaan dena aur bache doosron ko padh ne nahi dete toh ghar mein bhi padhna aur yaad rakhna apne notes kisi ko mat denaa you see mein keh raha hoon that you need to be more serious par mein yeh nahin keh raha ki bahar mat jaana . jaana par thoda sa kam kardena


next update is on the next page

Edited by Prernarbofan - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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SHAAN-Don't take tension bhai Collage mein doosron se baat karne ka time nahin melaga aur aap bahar jane ki keh rahe ho.

AKSHAY-(in a naughty mood now)aisa tabhi ho sakta hai jab hum machein hon .Waise tumhare collage se meri kafi yaadein judi hain jaise ki poorna. Ho sakta hai tumhare saath bhi kuch aise hi ho .Tumhari zindagi mein bhi who koi aa jaye( laughs and goes of to his room)

SHAAN-YES I will wait for that KOI

Then he switches on the TV but the movie is over so he goes to his room and sleeps

Guys hope it was good and not boring please be honest the next update will be on Monday or Tuesday

Please reply

Love

Prerna

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Posted: 14 years ago
#27

Hi Prerna,

the prologue sounds interesting,esp,shaan and khanak in college.none of the ffs so far have presented them as college goers.

pls update soon.😉

love
sangita
Edited by sangitasengupta - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#28
hey prerna superrrb update...
loved their characters...
i love collage nased love stories...
and ur ff is realy very interesting ...
so khanak is nervous...lets c wht will happen on d first day of collage..
looking forward...
conti sooon..
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Posted: 14 years ago
#29
prerna its beautiful😊

plzzz continueee👍🏼

College meetings and Romance wow i think this is first FF that where shaan and khanak r college students sound interesting😍

thoda lambhi updtes dena yaar😭

Love u🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
#30
peru
loved it
keep writing peru🤗

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