FF ~In A Heartbeat~update 13 pg39 She is the one !

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minnu345

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Posted: 14 years ago

#121

Hey prerna 😊

it was really good and dont say that u r not a good writer u do have skills buddy👏

whoever reads ur FF they can easily say that u r great at ur task👏

keep going yaar 😊

and update quickly its really interesting and give us long ones yaar yeh short updates tho nahin chalegaaa😡

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Prerna Kandpal

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Posted: 14 years ago

#122

thank you minnu di and ya will try to make long updates !

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Simi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#123

Awesome job Peru!!

Btw call me Simi!!

As for the work...it isn't that bad!!!LOL

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Prerna Kandpal

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Posted: 14 years ago

#124

no simi di not at all your ff is awesome I was just joking

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Priyasree

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Posted: 14 years ago

#125

wow!!! very cute update...luvd it

precap seems very interesting...update soon

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.sariminoz.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#126

wow another lovely part ...it was gud

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Ramani

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Posted: 14 years ago

#127

hei prerna,
s..as u mentioned i demand for long updates n u just ignore it..
before the story starts it is ended yaar..
ok so khanak hearing shaan's words enjoyed the rain..
hope she is having high fever..
ok..for ur chotu update my chotu comment..😃😉😃😉😃😉

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deepali

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Posted: 14 years ago

#128

Hey Prerna
Just read your all parts of FF updates and all of them was amazing and nice
New concept and new story looking great
Waiting for next update:)

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Anu179

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Posted: 14 years ago

#129

Thanks Peru, for the PM and the update and clearing my doubts as well bacha...its sooo cute..Shaana Shaan...wants to go slow in the rain...waise good...coz bike can easily skid during heavy rain...per pad rahi ho...LMAO...poora nautanki!!!

Khanak is hygiene conscious...hmmm...arey sadak par paani puri nahin khaaya to kya mazaaa...I love "Puchkaas"...no one can beat paani puri in Kolkatta...yummm!!!!

Jhatka on the bike brings them closer...haye khanak ... kuch kuch hona shuru ho gaya...her thought process reminded me of song...milo na tum to hum ghabrayain...milo to aankh churayain, hamein kya ho gaya hai...she's even enjoying the Rain...

Lokesh wants to meet Shantanu...cool...friendship between guys...aana jaana shuru...love story becomes more interesting!!

Shaan is intrigued by Khanak not having paanipuri and not enjoying getting wet in the rain...and checking with Akshay..

Prelude shows Shaan desperation too...woh aayi kyun nahin...aag dono taraf barabar ki lagi hai...lets wait and see...what Khichdi is cooking in your mind Peru...

Your studies should be your priority...then update...bas itna hi bhashan kafi hai...so post when you can...

Loads of love and hugs...Ann,xox