FF ~In A Heartbeat~update 13 pg39 She is the one ! - Page 15

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Posted: 14 years ago
Nice one Peru!!!
Khanak is beemaar and Shaan is bekaraar!!! haaye!!!
Thanks for this cute FF..;)
Love, Simi
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey u updated😊...it was a short but sweet update ..khanak ill and shaan so concerned about her absence awww so adorable...waiting for the next update...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Sorry ramani di no complaints I promise iske baad

Guys this is my extension of the 6 th update as I didn't complete it J

Shaan rings the bell many times but still no one opens

SHAAN- arre koi ghar pe nahin hai kya

Then suddenly someone opens the door a smiloe comes on shaans face

SHAAN-( without looking at the person and looking straight at the rooms as if khanak would be there0 khanak ghar pe hai kya

RAMU KAKA- haan hain par aap koon

SHAAN- mein shaan uska dost

RAMU KAKA- who toh theek hai parkya kaam hai

Poor shaan he what excuse could he give then something came to his mind !

SHAAN- actually khanak ki books mere paas reh gayi thi toh unke return ' mera matlab hai lotane aya hoon

RAMU KAKA-theek hai hum unhe de dete hain

SHAAN- aap de toh sakte hai par usse tests aur baaki padhai ka bhi patana hai

RAMU K- theek hai

Khanak in her room is frantically searching for her books she has everything down on the floor her clothes , books just everything

KHANAK- now where have these books gone

Ramu kaka outside knocks on the door and leaves

Khanak ab koon hai hmph chalo ab kholna toh padhega hi

Bur shaan is one step forward then khanak instead of waiting he opens the door himself

Much to khanaks good luck she trips on a pile of clothes and shaan cathes her he is about to say something but something stops him he just stares in her eyes holding her tightly to him not a movement was made by the two of them they were just into each other shaan felt her warmth he felt good near her for the first time he since he had known her had he felt like this he loved her eyes her lips he liked her touch and so did khanak she had never seen that side of shaan she always thought of him as a very good friend and a fun loving onetoo but stoday what was it was he more than a best friend or what ?

Soon they snaped back to reality khanks moves away fast shaan trying to lifghten up the mood

SHAAN ' arre khanak yeh kya haal banaya hai room ka ( his cheeks are red )

KHANAK-(softly) acually I was finding my books (her cheeks even redder)

SHAAn- oh who toh mere pass hain here they are

KHANAK- oh I must have left them

SHAAN- and here is your syllabus booklet

He then touches her forehead and it is burning hot

SHAAn- you have a high fever and you are jumping like a monkey here and there come now in your bed

He pushes her in her bed covers her and then tels ramu kaka to bring soup for her

KHANAK- (joking) wow you are fit to be a house wife

SHAAn- hain wph hogi na kismatwali

KHANAK- ya hogi

SHAAN- (smiles) well I will bring you your soup

Khanak nods as soon as he goes she is in deep thought she speaks to her self

What happened khanak at one touch of his you melt when he is around you are happy you cannot say no to him you hate him at his childish things but at the same time love it too what is it is he the one?

Khanak remember shaan and you are only good friends but now this ! I am confused ! I need help !

SHAAn- soup is ready tata

KHANAK takes the bowl and finishes it

Shaans keeps on seeing her until she finishes

KHANAK- why did you bink you collage hat is bad

SHAAn- yeh kaisa sawaal hai wjen mu cutie friend is not at collage so how can I be at collage

KHANAK- what about ducks

SHAAN- tumhe uski kya chinta ho rahi hai ( irritated) maine usse ring kar diya tha

KHANAK- ok

SHAAn- well I am really sorry tumhe meri wajhe se bukhaar chadh gaya mujhe kal teez chalana chahiye tha

KHANAK- arre it is not your mistake I don't feel bad about it actually I didn't keep my self warm that is why I got a cold but lokesh was ther

SHAAn- of your brother well I really want to meet him

Just then the bell rings and likesh comes in

LOKESH- sisy pissy how r you'''' ( seeing shaan) who is he he resembels a guy on tv I forgot his name well never mind

KHANAK- this is shaan I told you about him right

LOKESH- oh toh who ap hain suna hai you r a good friend of khanak

SHAAn-(smiling ) yes I am one and I wouls like to be yours too

LOKESH- well lets think about it ' do you like basketball

SHAAN- is this a question I live basketball

LOKESH ' well will you teach me

SHAAN- sure why not

LOKESH- oh then we can be super friends

KhANAK- you are too much lokesh

SHAAn- it will be fun teaching him

KHANAK- will it be

SHAAns phone rings

AKSHAY ' shaan come wher are you come home fast please

SHAAN- but I am with khanak

AKSHAY- ya duck told me but I need you poonam is taking shopping with me yaar mein kitna boor ho jata hoon

SHAAn- but khanak ! she is ill

KHANAK- you must go shaan why not now lokesh is here please don't make your bro feel bad

Now he couldn't say no so

SHAAN- ok but assure me you will nopt get out of the bed ok

KHANAK- ya promise now go

SHAAn- ok tomorrow is a weekend so I will come to meet you

KHANAK- sure bye shaan

SHAAN- bye take care !

COMING UP

He keeps checking his phone

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Posted: 14 years ago
hei prerna,
chalo maaf kar diya tumhein..
as u gave a lengthy extended part..
waise i was thinking who is this ramu kaka who was never there earlier..n he never bothered to inform abt shaan to khanak..he should enquire whether she knows him r not n let him inside na..no courtesy kya??
aay..haaye..the first time both feeling something more than they thought..
shaan taking care of her..so cute..
khanak's self thought..he is just ur friend n nothing more..looking forward to their realisation of their feelings for each other..
n shaan feeling bad that coz of him she is ill n she saying its her mistake that she idnt keep herself warm..
there comes lokesh..so shaan n lokesh got their intro..
lokesh thinking abt shaan that he has seen him somewhere..n te boys gelling up well..n the deal they made..shaan is to teach lokesh basketball..
akshay its not fair to call ur bro when he is at his friends place as u r bored with the shopping spree of poonam..
wat did he do to sit with u..bolo..bolo bolo..
so after khanak's assurance that she'll take rest he is leaving her house..
looking forward to his weekend visit to her house..so when is her parents returning??
will wait for the next part..
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Posted: 14 years ago
so both of them hv started feeling sumthing 4 eacg other...hmmm,interesting
shaan & lokesh r also freinds now...very nice...BIL kam ayega bad me...lol
well very nice update ...luvd it
continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
res

love yaa

priya di
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Posted: 14 years ago
just luvved it prerna..gr8 going...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Lovely update...
Sorry for late comment.. Got caught up wid college nd tests..
Beautifully penned down... Shanak too be teenagers r amazing to imagine..
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey prerna...
awesome update...
simply beautiful...
thanks for d pm...😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awww!

Such a caring friend, is he going to be more than a friend, the realization period is the most awesome one I guess ...

Waiting for the next update..

~Cheers,
Dish

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