skipped golden shanak scenes...3rd pt updt on pg 8 - Page 3

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thanks to all once again 4 appreciating my first attempt😊...right now working on d second shanak scene...🤔

wowww cant wait for it reena do it fast i am feeling so bored today

hei reena,
me too not in a good mind frame today..
so part the next episode soon..
let me dream of shanak n make my mood up..

Egarly waiting for the next one...Jaldi dena 😊

hey reena i m egearly waiting for next prt...😛

reena where is the next epi re..
we r waiting for that..
continue na..

yup
the track was changed in the middle

SECOND SHANAK SCENE...😊❤️

hey first of all sorry 4 delaying d update...feeling unwell...

n ya before reading these scenes just want to request u all that plzz while reading this just keep our shaan n khanak in mind...n their way of delivering d dialogues..

Second shanak scene consist of 3 shanak scenes...

so here comes d ...

1st SHANAK SCENE...

(shantanu apne room main laptop ke saath aaur uski nighahein kar rahi hai besabri se khanak ka intezaar)

shaan : ye khanak kahaan reh gayi...mujhe keh kar gayi 5 minute main aati hoon par itna time ho gaya abb tak nahi aayi...kahaan tha maine mat jao par nahi! meri baat sunta kaun hai...jarur apne favourite corner(kitchen) main gayi hogi...waha jaane ke baad toh woh sab bhool jaati hai...but abb aisa bilkul nahi chalega main khaank se saaf saaf keh dunga ..khanak'ab sirf aaram aur koi kaam nahi...aur agar nahi maani toh...toh..bohat gussa karunga!!!!! hhmmm..nahi yaar usspey gussa kaise kar sakta hoon...haan ussey apne pass bithakar pyaar se samjhaoonga...waise bhi iss kaam mein toh main maahir hoon...

(khanak enter karti hai room mein)

shaan : khanak tum kahaan thi ab tak, main kab se tumhara intezaar kar raha hoon...time dekha hai tumne itni der raat tak jaagna tumhare health ke liye bilkul thik nahi hai...

khanak : woh shantanu main mumiji se baat kar rahi thi..

shaan : mom se !!!

khanak : hmmm...

shaan : kyun ???

khanak : "kyun" matlab...main mummiji se baat nahi kar sakti...

shaan : arey khanak mera matlab tha mom se kya baat kar rahi thi tum..

khanak : shantanu woh main aap ko nahi bata sakti...

shaan : kyun???

khanak : fir se kyun...woh mere aur mumiji ke beech ki baat hai...woh kya kehte hai english main, haan... "secret" hai...

shaan : wah! khanak kya baat hai...aaj angreji ki jagah "english" not bad...

khanak : waise shantanu aap kuch der pehle kya keh rahe the...ki raat ko jaldi sona chaahiye mujhe...

shaan : haan khanak woh actually pregnancy ki haalat mein raat ko zyaada jaagna accha nahi hota,u know...

khanak : accha!!!!!... (khanak dhire si kehti hai) ab tak to hamesha der raat tak mere jagne ki wajah khud the...

shaan : tumne kuch kahaan!!!

khanak : nahi toh...maine kuch nahi kahaan...umm..accha ye sab chodiye mujhe batayiye ki aap kya kar rahe the...

shaan : main...

(shaan khanak ka haath pakadta hai aur usey apne pass bithata hai)

shaan : khanak actually main sab information nikaal raha tha jaise ki pregnancy period main kya kya karna chahiye,kya nahi karna chahiye...u know like kis tarah ka food intake karna chahiye,kya exercises karni chahiye...like that...

(shaan khanak ke pass dekhta hai'..)

shaan : kya hua khanak...

khanak : shatanu aap ye sab mere liye kar rahe ho na...

shaan : nahi!!! padosiyon ke liye...of course khanak...meri biwi pregnant hai to apni biwi ke liye hi karunga na...

khanak : shantanu.. aap bhi na ...

(shaan khanak ke chehre ko dono haathon se pakadta hai)

shaan : khanak kehte hai ki papa banne ka asli ehsaas tab hota hai jab baccha pehli baar apne papa ke haathon mein aata hai...par main ye ehsaas hamare bacche ke aane se pehle mehsoos karna chahta hoon...

(shaan apna haath khanak ke pait (tummy) par rakhta hai)

shaan : khanak ..main hamare bacche ki har ek choti si choti harkate jo woh tuhare andar reh kar karega usey mehsoos karna chahta hoon ...apna harr ek pal uske saath bitana chahta hoon...uske aane se pehle hi usey batana chahta hoon ki uske papa ussey kitna pyaar karte hain...

(shantanu ki aankhein num ho jaati hain)

khanak : shantanu!!! main aaj aapka ek alag hi roop dekh rahi hoon..aapko pata hai mere nazar main aap duniya ke sabse acche pita saabit honge...

( shaan ki aankhein bhar jaati hai)

shaan : sabse acche ka toh pata nahi khanak! par main ek accha pita saabit hone ki puri koshish karunga...

khanak : aur main ye acche se jaanti hoon ki aap apni iss koshish main pure kamiyab honge...

(shaan ke chehre pe ek choti si smile aa jaati hai)

shaan : i love u khanak...

khanak : i love u 2...

(shantanu khanak ko hug karta hai aur shaan ko ek karamaat suzhti hai...)

shaan : waise khanak maine suna hai ki baby jo hote hain woh andar bohat masti karte hain ..mera matlab kick maarne se hai..

khanak : haan ...par aap ye sab kyun pooch rahe ho..

shaan : wow'fir to bohat maza aayega...

(khanak shaan ki taraf dekhti hai...)

khanak : kya matlab hai aap ka...aapne wow kyun bola...aur kya maza aayega..haan..

(shaan ek naughty si smile dete huye...)

shaan : arey khanak main to abhi se imagine kar raha hoon...tumhara reaction toh dekhne layak hoga...

(khanak shaan ko piche push karti hai)

shaan : arrey khanak...

khanak : bohat hassi aa rahi hai aapko ..haan...

shaan : nahi!! khanak...main to bas...

(shaan puri koshish kar raha hai ki naa hase)

khanak : main toh bas kya!!!!! haan...aap hass rahe ho na abhi lekin dekh lena jab aisa kuch hoga na aapki hasi udd jaayegi...yaad rakhna...

(khanak doosri taraf mud jaati hai aur shaan hasna band karke khanak ke saamne khada ho jaata hai...aur uska haath apne haathon mein leke kehta hai..)

shaan : khanak meri taraf dekho...khanak..dekho meri taraf...

(khanak shaan ki taraf dekhti hai..)

shaan : tum khud ye baat ache se jaanti ho ki main tumhe taqlif mein nahi dekh sakta..agar dard tumhe hota hai toh tumse zyada taqlif mujhe hoti hai...

khanak : pata hai mujhe shantanu...par aap bhi na hamesha koi na koi bahana dhoondte hai mujhe pareshaan karne ke liye...

(shantanu apne kaan pakadta hai...aur...)

shaan : ye lo maine apne kaan pakad liye...sorry!!!!!...ab toh maaf karo...plijjj...

(khanak ke chehre par ek pyaari si smile aa jaati hai...aur khanak shaan ko hug karti hai...)

khanak : shantanu aap aisi chize karte kyun hain jinki wajah se aap ko sorry kehna pade...

shaan : khanak tum samajhti nahi ho...agar main tumhe chidhata nahi to meri khanak mujhse naraz kaisi hoti aur agar naraaz nahi hoti to main tumhe manata kaise ...aur agar manata nahi to tum mujhe itna pyaara sa hug kaisi karti...

khanak : accha ji...

shaan : so... agar dekha jaaye toh main tumhe pareshaan karne ke bahane nahi dhoondta,balki tumse pyaar karne ke bahane dhoondta hoon...samjhi meri budthal...

khanak : shantanu aap kabhi nahi sudhroge...

shaan : woh toh hai..jahaan sawaal tumhe pyaar karne ka hai wahaan tumhara ye budthal kabhi nahi sudhrega...

(khanak shaan ki taraf dekhkar muskuraati hai aur gehri saans lete huye shaan ko kass kar pakadti hai...)



2nd SHANAK SCENE ...

phone conversation ...(afternoon time )

mobile rings...

khanak : shantanu ka phone...

(khanak ke chehre pe smile aa jati hai...)

khanak : hello..shantanu

shaan : hey khanak...kya kar rahi ho..

khanak : aapko miss kar rahi hoon...

shaan : main abhi tumhe bohat miss kar raha hoon khanak...aur hamare baby ko bhi...waise babay kya kar raha hai...

khanak : filhaal to baby bol raha hai..papa mummy ko hamesha phone karke kitna pareshaan karte hai...

shaan : accha ye baby bol raha hai ya baby ki mummy...

khanak : dono!!!!! baby bhi aur baby ki mummy bhi'.

shaan : ab kya karein baby ke mummy ko toh baby ke papa ki bilkul yaad nahi aati..

(khanak smile karti hai...)

khanak : bus ho gaya shantanu...aapne ne phone kyun kiya...

shaan : arey apne biwi ko phone nahi karunga!! toh kya dusroan ki biwwiyon ko karunga...

(khanak hass padti hai...)

shaan : waise ye sab chodo... pehle batao lunch kiya tumne..

khanak : haan kar liya...

shaan : thik se khaaya na..koi aana tani nahi ki na...

khanak : haan shantanu thik se khaaya...

shaan : aur tablets li tumne..

khanak : haan baba..shantanu aap kitni chinta karte hain...yahaan sab hai na mera khyaal rakhne ke liye...mummy ji,khushboo bhabhi !!! woh mera aur mere khaane ka poora dhyaan rakhte hain..aur to aur main ye bhi jaanti hoon ki aap mujhe phone karne ke baad mummy ji ko bhi phone karenge aur mere baare mein poochenge...kyun sahi keh rahi hoon na'.

shaan : khanak chinta nahi,tumhari fikra hai...

khanak : jaanti hoon shantanu,par aap mera khyaal rakhte-rakhte,apna khayaal bilkul nahi rakhte..

shaan : kya matlab???

khanak : mera matlab ye hai...kya aapne khaana khaya...

shaan : woh...

khanak : woh ..kya..haan..main jaanti hoon aapne ab tak khaana nahi khaya...

shaan : woh khanak...darasal kaam bohat tha na...tum tension mat lo main kha lunga...

khanak : tension nahi shantanu...mujhe bhi aapki fikra hai...

(shaan apni aankhein band kar leta hai...aur chehre par choti smile laate huye kehta hai...)

shaan : khanak tum kaise jaan jaati ho ...

khanak : shantanu main aapko aapse zyada jaanti hoon...aisa kabhi ho hi nahi sakta ki mere shantanu khud pehle khaana kha le aur fir mujhe phone karke pooche ki kya tumne khaana khaya khanak?...unhe khud se zyada apni khanak ki fikra hai...toh ab aap jaldi se phone rakhenge aur pehle khaana khayenge...

shaan : ok madam jaisa aap kaho..but apna khayal rakhna...

khanak : waise baby ne abhi abhi kuch kaha...

(shaan haste huye )

shaan : kya???

khanak : baby pooch raha hai ki papa ghar kab aayyenge!!!!usey papa ki bohat yaad aa rahi hai..

shaan : accha!!!! ye baby pooch raha hai ya baby ki mummy!!!!

(khanak smile karti hai...)

khanak : baby bhi aur baby ki mummy bhi

shaan : baby se kehna ki baby ke hone wala papa usey bohat yaad karr rahe hain,so aaj woh jaldi ghar aayenge...aur aane ke baad baby ko bohat pyaar karenge...

khanak : accha...baby ko???

shaan : haan...waise agar tum chaho toh option badal sakta hai...

khanak : shantanu..ab bas ho gayi aapki masti..aap phone rakhiye aur khaana kha lijiye...

shaan : haan!!! kha lunga..

khanak : aur ghar jaldi aayiyega...main intezaar karungi...

shaan : ok..

khanak : shantanu...

shaan : haan ...khanak...main wait karr raha hoon!!!!!

(khanak smile karte huye...)

khanak : i luv u...

shaan : luv u too khanak...bye!!!!

khanak : bye...

(dono pyaari si smile ke saath phone rakkhte hai...)


3rd SHANAK SCENE...

( MORNING SCENE...)

(khanak apne room mein nahane ke baad aayine (mirror) ke samne khadi hai...n shaan so raha hai...khanak apne pait (tummy) ko haath lagati hai aur apne aap se baat karti hai...)

khanak : khanak tumhara pait to sachmuch aage aa raha hai...

(khanak ek pyaari si smile dete huye apne niche ke hothon ( lips) ko apne daanthon se dabati hai... tabhi shaan ki aankhein khulti hai aur woh khanak ko dekh leta hai..smile karte huye ...)

shaan : ahhem..ahhhem..

(khanak piche ghoom jaati hai...aur baal banane lagti hai...shaan bed se utt jaata hai aur hamesha ki tarah khanak ko piche se hug karta hai...fir apna face khanak ke kandhe par rakhta hai... khanak ko kiss karta hai aur poochta hai...)

shaan : khanak tum kya kar rahi thi...

khanak : main!!!...kuch bhi toh nahi...

shaan : accha...par maine to tumhe aaiyine ke saamne khade rehte huye dekha...

khanak : woh!!!..umm..haan..woh..main...

shaan : woh ...main ...kya???

khanak : shantanu woh main baal bana rahi thi ..

shaan : accha ...toh tum baal bana rahi thi...

(shaan kuch sochta hai..aur khanak ko apni baahon mein utta leta hai...)

khanak : shantanu..ye aap subah subah kya kar rahe ho...

(shaan wid shocking expressions)

shaan : arey! khanak..ye kya hai! ...tumhara weight kitna bad gaya hai...

khanak : aap kuch bhi mat boliye...aur pehle mujhe niche uttariye...

(shaan khanak ko niche uttarta hai...aur mann hi mann hasta hai...)

khanak : abb boliye kya keh rahe the aap ...mera wazhan badh gaya hai...hmm'aap kya woh ho...kya kehte hain usey... haan!!! weight machine ho...jo aap ko pata chal gaya..

shaan : arey khanak...main sach bol raha hoon...waise bhi mujhe tumhe lift karne ki itni aadat ho gayi hai ki main tumhe utta kar bata sakta hoon ki tumhara weight kitna kilo bada hai aur kitna ghata hai...

khanak : shantanu aap sach bol rahe ho...aapko sachmuch aisa lagta hai'

shaan : haan khanak!!!!

khanak : aisa kaise ho sakta hai...ye dekhiye ...dekhiye mera pait(tummy)..ye toh abhi tak thik se baahar bhi nahi aaya...

(shaan hasna shuru karta hai...)

khanak : shantanu...aap mazaaq kar rahe the na...aap kabhi nahi sudhroge...

shaan : khanak!!!!..jab maine tumse poocha tum kya kar rahi thi ...tab tumne nahi bataya'kyun??? mujse kaisi sharam ye batane main ki tum apne pait ko nihaar rahi thi...tum yahi dekh rahin thi na ki woh kitna bada hai...

khanak : woh maine issliye nahi bataya kyunki mujhe laga aap hassoge mujhpar...dekhiye abb bhi hass rahe ho aap'

shaan : khanak maine tumse kahaan tha na ki main hamare bacche ki har choti si choti harqat ko mehsoos karna chahta hoon...fir!!!...aur ab jab woh tumhare andar badh raha hai to tum akeley hi usey mehsoos kar rahi ho...ye bilkul thik baat nahi hai...

(khanak shaan ka haath pakadti hai aur apne pait par rakhti hai...aur shaan smile karte huye...)

shaan : khanak!!!!! tumhara pait to sachmuch badh raha hai...ohh my god...khanak...

khanak : haan...shantanu...

shaan : main tumhe bata nahi sakta khanak iss waqt mujhe kaisa lag raha hai...ek minute...

(shaan khanak ko bed par baithata hai aur khud apna kaan khanak ke pait par lagata hai...)

khanak : shantanu...aap ye kya kar rahe ho...

shaan : main hamare baby se baath kar raha hoon...

(khanak ye sunte hi smile karti hai...)

shaan : hey hi baccha.. its...ur dad...aur andar kaise lag raha hai aapko...sab thik to hai na...mummy aapko zyada pareshaan toh nahi karti...agar aisa hai toh mujhe batao...

(khanak hasna shuru karti hai...)

khanak : shantanu...ye kya bol rahe ho app...

shaan : ek min...baby kuch keh raha hai...achha!! thik hai...mumy ko bolta hoon...

khanak : abb kya hua...

shaan : baby ko ek shikayat hai mummy se...

khanak : kya??

shaan : baby keh raha hai ki mummy papa ko bilkul bhi pyaar nahi karti...hamesha papa hi mummy ko pyaar karte hain...

khanak : accha...aisa kahaan baby ne...

shaan : haan ...

khanak : woh kya baat hai na baccha ki jitna bhi waqt hota hai papa aapki mummy ko itna pyaar karte hai ki saara waqt to ussi mein nikal jaata hai...

shaan : accha ...

(shaan khanak ek dusre ko dekhkar hasne lagte hai...ab bhi shaan unke baby se baath kar raha hai...aur khanak shaan ke baalon ko sehla rahi hai...)

shaan : kya kar rahi ho khanak...

khanak : aap hamare baby se baath kar rahe ho...aur main apne bade bacche ko nihaar rahi hoon...

(shaan khanak ke karib aata hai...)

shaan : khanak kabhi kabaar nihaarne ki jagah pyaar bhi kar liya karo,apne bade bachhe ko...

( khanak sharma jaati...)

shaan : haye!!!!...khanak tum aise sharmaya mat karo...kuch kuch hone lagta hai...

(phir dono ek dusre ko pyari si smile dete hain aur shaan apna forehead khanak ke forehead se touch karta hai')

scene khatm'.😉


hey friends tell me did u like it...if not den im extremely sorry 4 that but if u really like it den press like button...BTW just want to ask u all as d next scene is going to b d shanak romance scene so do u want me to go in deep...i mean do u want me to describe each n every gestures done by shaan n khanak...plzzz let me know...😕

luv u all❤️🤗...missing RBO n shanak terribly🥺😭...

Reena...