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Posted: 14 years ago

I love Dadi ! Ear plugs...btw wat is she listening to Music or Bhaajan 😉???
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thanks for the update,
loved Dadi- khanak, ,Ritu-khanak conversation
and ofcourse Shaan's perfect timming...👏👏👏👏👏
Edited by ashwanth - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: candy84


I love Dadi ! Ear plugs...btw wat is she listening to Music or Bhaajan 😉???

Yeh Jazz and Rap waali daadi hai...Bhajan waali nahi...
Or maybe Michael Jackson ya Shakira sun rahi hogi😆😆😆😆
I seriously ROFL'd at that earplugs part😆😆😆😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
Superb aditee👏

luved the conv between dadi khanak and ritu

buk and ear plugs... 😆

badey sahab nite means hindi teaching session ??😕

3rd time was 10 in the morning☺️

obvious she's doing better

luved it continue soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow.. Shanak's communication starts over the messenger.. how she wishes not to add him to her messenger before.. and now, checking when he is going to return home.. and the final Aditee punch... Shaan overhearing Khanak-Ritu's talks.. hopefully he only heard the last line 😉😉😉😉
waiting for them to work together again and its been a long time since Paul came into the picture..
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Posted: 14 years ago
One Day... -
I want Khanak to add him on FB and put a "Married" to "Shantanu Gujral" on her FB Profile !! Eee !
And I want to "like" that notification !!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi Adi,
Thanks for giving us this brilliant read. Enjoyed immensely. When's the next update..xx👍🏼
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Posted: 14 years ago

12th July 2011

8:40 PM

Mangal Kunj

Part 171 C

Ritu: OMG! Here I am walking thru the muddy icky sidewalks to get to work and YOU are in bed, making love. I think I fully hate you!

Khanak: Thanks! Me too! You drive me batty

They both hug!

Shaan: I agree! (leaning on the kitchen door frame)

Ritu turns startled, "Hey Shaan! This is called "the kitchen" (mocks)

Shaan: And that would be "MY wife"!

Straightening from the door frame and walking inside

His wife looks at him and is greeted with a "Hey"

She has a "Gee! You did make it to dinner" joyous look on her face.

He saunters to where the two are,wearing grey shorts with black stripes on and a black Puma tee with the motif up front.

He stands by Khanak, and peeks into the pots and pans

Shaan: Cooking?

Khanak''. Up a storm! (softly)

He chuckles

His left hand slowly reaches behind her back and tugs at one end of the apron's bow string. It comes loose.

Khanak: Tchh! (dropping the stirrer with a clutter, and reaching for her back)

Ritu is making a boogey man with carrot shavings she doesn't notice.

Shaan: Did you two have a good day?

Ritu: SHE obviously did! (sulking)

Shaan looks at his wife in shock "Kyon?"

Ritu: (sweet smile) Ghar se kaam kiya, 2 baje tak uthi nahi, subah usko)

Khanak drops a plate on the floor to stop her friend from going any further

Shaan: did dPradip pick u up on time? Hes always confused with those bylanes.

Ritu: well, if I can have him for a year I could train him (innocent)

Shaan: You should then! (unfazed)

His hand is back on his wife's waist, slow color crawls up her face, she looks up at him as if pleading "Please stop!"

Shaan: Nahi! (out loud)

It inches upward from her waist, the thumb a few cms ahead of its siblings'..She binds the hand by pressing her left arm close to her body. He lets it stay in that clinch'''..

Khanak goes back to make sure the subzi is not burnt at the bottom, using only her right. The pan bobs a little.

Ritu: How was your day?

Shaan: Full! Looks like there wont be any rains the next couple days.

Ritu laughs out loud "Do you guys employ a weather guy?" (shocked)

Shaan: We do! (matter of fact)

Ritu: (squealing) I was only joking!

Khanak takes a step sideways, moving away from him, he moves in tandem, she doenst loosen her arm, his hand is still bound, under the folds of the saree and apron.

Shaan: Third world construction is a whole different ball game🤢.

Something about that annoys Khanak, she responds with " Especially if you are building for first world citizens😡"

He loves seeing her hot and bothered, oh wait! He loves seeing her, period! After work, dressed in a saree, cooking, holding his hand captive on her rib.

Shaan: I cant deny that!

Ritu and shaan talk about a Hafeez, Ajemra project from 3 years ago, while Khanak does her own thing, he can if he wants to yank his hand free, he lets it be...

His wife is in her shell, doing what she loves... surrounded by one of her most fave person in the world, Ritu, and her husband who is enjoying tormenting her...

Shaan: Is your Dad home?

Khanak: Hmm!

Her arm is losing control of his hand, she looks up at him to warn him not to start again. He looks at her blandly

Ritu: They are all filling out the various forms and pasting 1500 passport pictures on it.

He chuckles, shakes his head "That's all?"

Ritu: thered be more when she actually starts

His hand starts to flirt with her buttons in front, since Ritu is facing them, all she can see is his arm around her waist... or even that from the angle.

Khanak: I

Ritu: How long can I stay before I get kicked out? (grins)

Khanak is horrified she shakes her head with a "No! don't go!"

Ritu: Abhi kitchen mein nahi you nut, at home

Khanak colors profusely "Ummm"

Shaan: Another day may be? 😉😆(softly)

Khanak is mad "You can stay for ever! Ritu" (commanding)

Ritu does a mock sigh of relief looking at her friend and makes a face at Shaan

She drops a spoon exactly at the time he releases the bottom hook...

Ritu: I left my phone up in the room... Ughhh😳😳

Leaps from the counter and runs

Khanak stands up facing him, furious as he says "You wanted me home for dinner didn't you?!" 😆😆(laughing under his breath)

Edited by aditee - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Aditee.. what an update... poor Ritu had to run from the hot hot kitchen 😉😉
so when is the next update?
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Khanak stands up facing him, furious as he says "You wanted me home for dinner didn't you?!" 😆😆(laughing under his breath)

OMG Adi, that was brilliant.. I bet Khanak has no idea what's she's let loose now. 😆😆. I know you'll be giving us ups and downs in this relationship but I have to say the ups are definitely worth it. Though you only gave us a few updates this weekend (and today), the quality have been outstanding (more then usual). Yeh to 200% hai definitely .. 👏👏👏👏👏
p.s should we even ask where you get your inspiration from..😛😛
Edited by Aussiegal - 14 years ago

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