Casa 12 179 A on 140; Part 179B on 145

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-YasharanArshi-

@-YasharanArshi-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1131

OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG !!!!

I read part 140 and 145 in a go ...

and I am DEAD ... Like Totallly DEAD !!!!

Aditeee ...

How Do you manage to set our hearts racing even when the leads are Separate !!!!!

The Detailing .. The Dialogues ... PHEW !!!!!

Stunning !!!!!

OMGG ... I so want her to stay back on Dadi's insistenceee !!!!

And Can Shantanu punch Prad ONCE if he misbehavesss !!!!

Pleaseee ????

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priya

@priya_cool_123

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+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#1132

did he kiss her nose or not on the balcony

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dishbhan

@dishbhan

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#1133

Maar Dala .. gotta go ... rest on the new thread I guess ...

Congrats 13!!!!!!!!!!!!

~Cheers,
Dish

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-YasharanArshi-

@-YasharanArshi-

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#1134

Dead Again ...

Dunnno how many times i died today !!!!!!

She begins to shake her head, eyes closed picturing how it will be to have everything back again "The man his moods, his laughter, his hands, his tees, his brilliance"

Sigh ... So Trueee ...

And the Blueee Lineee ... OMGG ... Wowww

Sigh Sigh Sigh Sigh !!!!!

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SachDJ

@SachDJ

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#1135

Adi...damn you are good...WTH, this update is just about made me crazy...

Dadi rocks, Ritu is never gonna make it in the rain? I almost hope not, Khanak will eat hers and kritik's portion too, so no worries about food...as for Prad making out with Khanak...Shaan ki imagination is working a bit on overtime...but then Prad does that to him, Prad is a natural yaar...love him for being Prad.

Shaan kitna bhi ignore kare, when he see Khanak like that, wild horses are not gonna stop him, 😳😳😳

And Dadi will be more than happy to see any results, mostly good I am sure come off this dinner, at the end it was all worth it...

I doubt that Shaan is gonna let her walk out without dinner...Now I am almost wishing that she stays over, lekin Prad dropping her to VK will be more exciting and dangerous and adventorous indeed...not sure if Shaan can stomach that...

Brilliant writing Adi, absolutely top notch. Your story comes to life from your writing...

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SachDJ

@SachDJ

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#1136

Adi we need a new thread to gush...almost there, don't sleep yet, bus thoda aur...

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Daebak

@Daebak

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+ 7

Posted: 14 years ago

#1137

Ahhh I wanted a karaara pink line from her in reply to his accusation of prad trying to make out with his wife !! LOL !!

Cant wait for the next part..

He was eating chewing gum to get the smell of beer out...so that he can kiss her...ROFL !!

Edited by togepe30 - 14 years ago

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Sonali

@adventure_gurl

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+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#1138

wow what an intense update, keep it up Aditee would love to read more!

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Daebak

@Daebak

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+ 7

Posted: 14 years ago

#1139

Song Dedication !!

Aaina dekh ke bole yeh sanwarne wale
Ab to be-maut marenge mere marne wale

Dekhke tumko hosh mein aana bhool gaye
Yaad rahe tum aur zamaana bhool gaye

Jab saamne tum
Jab saamne tum, aa jaate ho
Kya jaaniye kya ho jaata hai
Kuchh mil jaata hai, kuchh kho jaata hai
Kya jaaniye kya ho jaata hai

Chaaha tha yeh kahenge
Socha tha socha tha woh kahenge

Aaye woh saamne to, kuchh bhi na keh sake
Bas dekha kiye unhein ham

Dekh kar tujhko yakeen hota hai
Koi itna bhi haseen hota hai
Dekh paate hain kahan ham tumko
dil kahin hosh kahin hota hai

Ho jab saamne tum, aa jaate ho
Kya jaaniye kya ho jaata hai
Kuchh mil jaata hai, kuchh kho jaata hai
Kya jaaniye kya ho jaata hai

Aa kar chale na jaana, aise nahin sataana
De kar hansi labon ko, aankhon ko mar rulaana
Dena na beqaraari dil ka karaar ban ke
Yaadon mein kho na jaana
Tum intezaar ban ke,
Intezar ban ke

Bhool kar tumko na jee payenge
Saath tum hogi jahan jayenge
Ham koi waqt nahin hain hamdam
Jab bulaaoge chale aayenge

Jab saamne tum

Haa haa jab saamne tum, aa jaate ho
Kya jaaniye kya ho jaata hai
Kuchh mil jaata hai, kuchh kho jaata hai
Kya jaaniye kya ho jaata hai

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Anu179

@Anu179

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1140

THUD THUD THUD...and ☺️☺️☺️...

Aditee, sab ko ghayal kar rahee ho...its becoming very difficult to comment too...takes a while to stabilise oneself after the updates...

Daadi the life saver, the cupid, ... and her microscopic eyes...she doesn't miss anything...how come she missed the gloss mark on Shaan's tee or is it not visible???

Khanak comes in Pink tee...'LIFE IS GOOD', how good we all know😉... and brings Saree as change of clothes... lol...iraadey nek nahin hai Khanak ke 🤣...tempting...alluring someone😉

Poor Shaan is a goner, he still can't believe Khanak is actually there...uski nazarey biwi se hath hi nahi rahi...he's trying hard but all in vain...

Kudrat too is playing cupid, baarish...ab to Ritu aa gayi zaroor!!!

Hai aditee...seriously Prad is going to drop Khanak back...plz send Shaan too!!!

BTW...my curiosity is at peak...Khanak telling daadi...your grandson threw me out...so can we understand that Shaan had asked her to leave the house????

Anyways...Waiting for the much awaited makeout...teaser de de ke maar rahi ho abhi tak...hope you'll give us a proper kissy...😍

😍

Love, Ann,xox