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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: deepa_01

Ohk ek confusion..(kinda stupid)so he didnt kiss her ryt??and she just smeared off his tee wid the lip gloss..and Shaan jst watched her all amused??

Mujhe Neha yaad aa gayi...kya clarification manga hai...😎
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Posted: 14 years ago
I thought you promised us a SHANAK makeout session !! LOL !!

Who is that on the door?? If its Ritu then she is dead !! If its Prad then Khanak is dead...!

No wait...Khanak toh is already marked for death😆😆😆😆😆😆...!! Prad will just hasten her time of death !!
Edited by togepe30 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -Ray-

Hi everyone !! 😊

Hi Rups...how are things? all ok?
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: togepe30

I thought you promised us a SHANAK makeout session !! LOL !!

Who is that on the door?? If its Ritu then she is dead !! If its Prad then Khanak is dead...!

No wait...Khanak toh is already dead...!! Prad will just hasten her time of death !!

Maybe Hari Lal aaya hai, seedha Bombay se special Dadi ne mangwaya hai Shaan aur Khanak ko "home" wali feeling ke liye...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Adi tera ye thread to aaj raat ko hi khatam hone wala hai...
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Posted: 14 years ago
OHHH EMM JEE !!

Sonaliii /Pooojaaa !! Aagayiii tu??

Walk karte karte duuur nikal gayi thi kya??? Kitna India cover kar liya path yatra me??
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: SachDJ

Hi Rups...how are things? all ok?


HI

I m good rey, just too busy in offc, nd thing gets worse when I take offc wrk home...didnt find time to come nd read any update so far...nd this wll continue for some time now, may b a week or a month... :P ...not sure ...:(

how r u all doing ? How is Adi ?
Edited by -Ray- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -Ray-


HI

I m good rey, just too busy in offc, nd thing gets worse when I take offc wrk home...didnt find time to come nd read any update so far...nd this wll continue for some time now, may b a week or a month... :P ...not sure ...:(

how r u all doing ? How is Adi ?

Adi is unstoppable, she is on a roll...updates pad ja ke saare...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: SachDJ

Adi is unstoppable, she is on a roll...updates pad ja ke saare...


I knw she wll rock the show, nd if I come here I wll nt able to stop myself frm joining the gushing-bandwagon , hence refrained myself, wll read all of them today / tomorrow.😊

bye for now.
take care .
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Posted: 14 years ago

Part 179 B

Malcha Marg

7:32 PM Onwards

He leaves her standing at the balcony, she goes back inside in 5 or so minutes, to find Pradyun seated on the sofa, his back towards her, Dadi is talking with him. His hair is longish now, she walks to the front slowly, her husband is seated facing Prad, and is on his ipad, his phone rings intermittently.

Prad turns around when he senses her and his face breaks into a happy smile. She can see he has started to grow a goatee

Prad: Hi! Khanak! (gets up politely)

She hesitates, her husband unwraps a gum sticks it into his mouth and balls the wrapper and shoves it on the coffee table

Dadi: What are you doing Shaan?

He doesn't respond

Prad walks over to where she is, goes to hug her "Mere kapde geele hain"

Smiles warding him off, Dadi notices, "OMG! You are soaked beta"

Khanak: Mmm, main bahar baarish mein khadi thi Dadi

She can see her grandson's tee is soaked on one side, and the coffee is almost black

Prad: You have a broken foot, you should be careful

Khanak: I am (sits carefully)

Dadi: Go change first beta!

Khanak: Abhi? Yahan? Mera matlab, in this (house?)

Dadi: Haan

Matter of fact!

Khanak: I am fine

Dadi: No beta Shaan blasts the AC and the apartment is freezing jao jaldi

Prad: Do you have change of clothes (concerned)

Prad: Hey where are the famous glasses?

She turns red

Dadi: Gosh Pradyun you are observant beta! Even I forgot, I am so used to seeing her without them (in Mumbai)

Prad: Dadi, I hadnt seen her wearing them she posted a message on FB months ago saying "Brighter and more colorful"!

Shaan looks up at his cousin

Prad: Dadi she has almost totally disappeared from FB Dadi'.

Dadi: I know beta, I have her on mine, but some how missed that status.

Khanak: Umm' pata nahi kidhar rakha'. (squeamish)

Her husband chews gum and taps away on the screen oblivious

Dadi: Go change, chai coming up

Prad: Dadi can Khanak make Gujju chai for me?

Khanak: You have to bring that first

Prad (serious) from where?

Khanak: Don't be silly bahar baarish hai

Prad: Bahar baarish hai (repeats)

Khanak: Hey nahi Hai!

Prad: Lessons then?

Khanak: No! (shakes her head)

Dadi shoves her towards a room

She turns around blushing wondering where she is being sent

Dadi whispers "MY room, silly girl"

Khanak: Oh! Par Dadi main to saree layee (worried)

Dadi: LOVELY! Go wear it'..

She grabs her overnite bag and goes away

She can hear Prad kick up a convo. Shaan is serious asks about school

Dadi's room is elegant and huge, she changes into a lovely chiffon in peaches and pink color, it has a sleeveless blouse, she braids her hair as she has too many things to worry about like pallu and the front folds

Steps out, Prad's jaw drops, he is having a drink, her husband has a SOR placed in front of him, he doesn't look up from his laptop, his ipad lay on the side

Prad: Come join us.

Khanak thinks "I don't think so" "Let me go check if Dadi wants something?"

Prad: Dadi doesn't want you (I do!) (grins)

Khanak: You are a awful guest, I am going to be a good one

Walks away, confronts Dadi in the kitchen in a heated whisper "Aapne mujhe bataya kyon nahi yeh ghar Shaan ka hai?"

Dadi: I must have forgotten!

Khanak: Dadi I have to leave soon! (firm)

Dadi: Well see about that beta!

Khanak: Dadi you tricked me, that was not nice (hurt)

Dadi: I want the guy to see you!

Khanak thinks "He more than just "saw" me, he gave me a heart attack! My nose smells like beer, I can feel his chin on my eyelid. I am trying to rid myself of him, this is BAD, His eyes told me what he wanted"

Khanak: Dadi, you are so cute for trying (but its over?)

Dadi: I am not trying beta I am just showing you both what you need.

Khanak: I don't need him (blurts) ( I WANT him more than life itself but I don't need him)

Dadi smiles dryly in disbelief

Khanak: is it OK if I leave early tonite? I was here early.

Dadi: You will be breaking your promise, you said you will stay the nite!

She starts to turn crimson " Who AAPKE ghar par tha"

Dadi gently squeezes her hand "This is too, this is yours first"

Those words thrill her, promise her something she has taught herself to abstain from

She begins to shake her head, eyes closed picturing how it will be to have everything back again "The man his moods, his laughter, his hands, his tees, his brilliance"

Khanak: Main ghar jaane ka soch rahi thi (softly)

Dadi: You can go home with me (smiles subtly)

Khanak: Dadiii (husky)

Dadi: His room is a mess, he needs to straighten his act

Khanak: Ummm mmm (sad)

Dadi smiles, she knows she is making headway, it might take time but she will get there

Dadi: It's a crome to wear that gorgeous saree and stand in the kitchen, get out

Dadi shoves her back to the living room, escorts her "Guys cant you keep a woman entertained?"

Prad: I told you! (smug)

Shaan still doesn't look up

Dadi: shaan shut down that darn thing beta

He chews on his gum and looks up to find his wife and Dadi, he totally checks her out from the bare arms to the plunging neckline to the flat belly and the tease her pallu was offering of her belly button, he can feel his ears heat up instantly, despite the gum his mouth goes dry, he leans forward to pick up his SOR, her pallu sways in the breeze from the open window and grazes his arm'''''.

Dadi: Sit down Khanak!

Prad: I brought some cool pictures from school

Dadi: Relax beta, enjoy, Shaan she looks lovely take some pictures beta

He looks at his wife she looks nervous and hopeful

Shaan: I don't want to Dadi! (gets up and walks to the CD case)

Khanak sits down bummed, Prad brings her his phone, and shows her the videos and pictures

Khanak is aloof, faraway, tries to enjoy, makes comments here and there.

Khanak: Isme kya ho gaya?

Prad: They were trying to hang me upside down from a tree near Miranda House. The girls would have seen me die

Khanak: You stay at the Intl Students Hostel?

Prad: I am not telling, you have to visit

Khanak: I'.

Prad: Yes you (laughs)

Khanak: I don't know'..

There is another one where 18 or 20 of them are all leaning on the shoulder of the person next to them the picture looks like a human Japanese fan

Khanak smiles and rotates it''.

Prad leans and shows her how, at the exact moment her husband notices Prad's cheek his goatee rub on her arm

She squirms and jumps up "My phone's in Dadi's room!"

Prad's rings too he answers

She goes for hers, folds her clothes, zips up her bag, readie sher purse

Turns around her husband is leaning on the closed door!

She ignores him, super annoyed her phone rings again, she answers "If you are not here in half hour I am heading home she says tersely

Listens and then says " Its raining a lot Ritu, mujhe ghar jaana hai!"

Listens

Khanak: OK 25 minutes exact!

Hangs up

Shaan: Kidhar ja rahi ho?

She does not answer

Shaan blocks her exit

Khanak: Dadi bahar hain!

Shaan: And you forgot Pradyun, what a sight! Watching him trying to make out with my wife! (blistering)

Khanak: He was showing me pictures! Not making out with me (aloof) (completely unaware that she just admitted to being his wife)

She is leaning on the door with her bag and purse in one hand, the left clutching the edge of her pallu, crushing it, he is by her, turns and places both hands on either side of her face.

Shaan: Hmmm! So you are still my wife then? (searing)😳😳

They exchange breath capable of soldering iron, hers comes out in gasps while his is long and labored...

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