Casa 12 179 A on 140; Part 179B on 145

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souma

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Posted: 14 years ago

#91

Loved the updates!

Will do a detailed "what i love" during the weekend!

Have been super busy at work

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priya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#92

Siritha Sirippu Siraiyilae, Sikkikkolla Adam Pidikkum

Ragasiyamaai Ragasiyamaai, Punnagaithaal Porul Ennavo?
Adhisayamaai Avasaramaai, Moli Tholaindhaal Porul Ennavo?

Solla Thudikkum Vaarthai Kirangum
Thondai Kuliyil Oosi Irangum,
Ilai Vadivil Idhayam Irukkum,
Malai Vadivil Adhuvum Kanakkum

Siritha Sirippu Siraiyilae, Sikkikkolla Adam Pidikkum

Nilam Neer Kaatrilae, Minsaarangal Piranthidum
Kaadhal Tharum Minsaaramo, Prabanchathai Kadanthidum

Nijamaai Nee Ennai Theendinaal
Nijamaai Nee Ennai Theendinaal, Paniyaai Kaniyaai Uraigiraen
Oliyaai Nee Ennai Theendinaal,
Nuraiyaai Unnil Karaigiraen

Kaadhal Vandhaalae Vandhaalae, Aenno Ularalgal Thaano?

Adhisayamaai Avasaramaai, Moli Tholaindhaal Porul Ennavo?
Adhisayamaai Avasaramaai, Moli Tholaindhaal Porul Ennavo?

Velli Tharai Poalavae, Yennidhayam Irunthathu
Mella Vandhu Unn Viral, Kathai Ondrai Eluthuthu
Oru Naal Kaadhal En Vaasalil... Varavaa Varavaa Kaettadhu

Maru Naal Kaadhal En Veettukku
Adimai Saasanam Meettudhu

Adhuvo Adhu Idhuvo, Idhu Edhuvo Adhuvae
Naam Ariyomae, Oh-Oh, Oh

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purvimeh

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Posted: 14 years ago

#93

AD...

👏

I am completely overwhelmed right now.. U r the finest FF writers i have ever ever come across in this generations.. Casa will always be so special and i pray pray to GOD this gets published and rest of the world get to know you as well...

This is it... ! The really turning point in their relation... Sin's and punishment was truly a dedication to " She will teach him to feel" and that what it has done..! He has truly got to know what it feels, how she feels.. She has always been a quite a girl.. He knows her life revolves around him... but not to this extent that he is at equal priority like his fly.. maybe a little more.. both their reasons and explanation were justified.. & now both know where each other come form..! They deserve this ,He deserves it... she deserves,,,it & i cannot wait to see now " He will teach her to live" Live without any fears, to live a happy life.. To live a peaceful life...

Wow !Ad.. Wow !!!!!!

Oh ! PS.. Congrats on the 12th.. Unbelievable.. 👏

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shalini_s

@shalini_s

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Posted: 14 years ago

#94

the pink and blue lines.. killing..

ant the way Khanak talked abt her fears and the way he explained his POV.. too good.. poor guy is so J abt Ritu, Aada and everyone...

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Aditi S

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Posted: 14 years ago

#95

170--A

Mangal Kunj

Malabar Hill

2:45 AM

12^th July 2011

For the love of Law😉

Shaan: I seem to be making a habit of screwing up. You have to start working late nites coming up with punishments (laughs derisively)

Khanak: I will just go ho'.. Aada ke saath.

His expression changes to one of fierce passion, he hugs her tightly, knocking the breath out of her, buries his face in her shoulder/neck.

Shaan:That would be like placing me on death row!

She gently extricates herself from his grip, cups his face like he did moments ago'..

Khanak: Then well have to come up with something less harsher then'.. how about I stay here but sleep in Ritu's room (smiles slowly)

Shaan: Ouch!

He finds her tracing his jaw gently with her index finger, as she slowly runs herslf against him'..

Shaan :You cant possibly have forgotten the Doctor's orders!? (groaning)

Letting his fingers sight see under her camisole''

Khanak: I never claimed to have a good memory! Shantanu!(husky)

Brings his head down''.. stands on her toes , meets him half way for the most hungry kiss in a week'..

He picks her up, and takes her to bed, hovers over her'''.

They look at each other with the most adoring eyes.

Khanak: I wore your favorite color last nite!

Shaan: You did?

Khanak: I kept it on until midnite''.. aap aaye nahi

He bends down and kisses her jaw.

Shaan: Wear it for me today

Khanak: Nahi!

Her arms go around him...

Shaan: Did you miss me at Pune?

Khanak: The lawyer kept me busy😉 (letting her hands slide under his shirt, as he returns the favor)

Shaan:I should have followed you and made love to you in your Kaka's house to show you whos the boss.

Saying that he crushes her on the bed,she whimpers audibly

Khanak: The lawyer was the boss then...

Shaan slides the shoe string strap off her shoulder...

Shaan: Really?

Khanak: Hes pretty cute!

Khanak yelps.

Shaan: I am cuter... and when I am naked I am off the charts...😳😉(smug)

Khanak:I havent compared yet...

Long pause, in conversation not in action, he binds her hands above her head, holds her down as he shows her what he meant. Her bangles, match the rhythm of her giggles and groans.

Khanak:Shantanu... (exhausted)

He kisses her punishingly.

Shaan:Stay away from the guy! Khanak.

Khanak:I had no desire to be a lawyer

Shaan: Lets keep it that way shall we?

Her camisole is off...

She can smell his shampoo and feel his faint stubble all over her ribs...

Khanak: Until I met him I did not like law...kya naam tha... Sehgal... Nishcha, Nishant!

Shaan shows her what a bad lawyer she would have been

Khanak:Stop? Please...

Shaan: You don't say a WORD most days... You would have been the worst lawyer (smug he knows her so well)

Lays on his back and places her on top

He tugs on her mangal sootra, trying to pull her forward.

Khanak: Shantanu...

Shantanu:Thats MY name...

Kissing her, as she slides up and down on him...

Khanak:Your thumb...(like a secret, his ear)

Shaan:I train it!😳 (like a secret in hers)

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priya

@priya_cool_123

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Posted: 14 years ago

#96

Dead !

Reading the update !

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Aditi S

@aditee

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Posted: 14 years ago

#97

Part 170 B

Mangal Kunj

3:00 AM

Spanish Lessons

Khanak: Shantanu...

Shantanu:Thats MY name...

Kissing her, as she slides up and down on him...

Khanak:Your thumb...

Shaan:I train it!

Their legs tango under the sheet... she feels his with her foot, her anklet scores a path on his calf...

Shaan: good God!😳

Pushes her back on the bed and slides over her...

Shaan: We need to be in bed for a couple of days to ride this (hunger) out'.(hoarse)

Khanak:Shantanu'..

As his hands flirt with the drawstring above her belly button...

Kisses her

Stops, removes his tee with a colorful expletive, and lands on her with force.

Shaan:Tienes un cuerpo muy erotico 😳😳(on her lips)

He can hear her moan at those words

Shaan:It means you have the most... (tells her in her ears)

Khanak: Teach me Spanish...

As he focuses on the task of undressing both of them...and says "Gladly"

Khanak: And Punjabi...

Khanak: How do you say Hello, Whats your name (squirming and fighting his hands)

Shaan: Quiero que besar tus labios... (softly, on her belly)

Khanak: Oh! That sounds so good...(her eyes are closed and she is clutching a fistful of his hair to stop him, wiggling)

Shaan: It tastes good too

Sliding up, hovering over her, she looks at him with confused eyes.

Khanak: Kya matlab?

Shaan: It means "I want to kiss your lips" Khanak!😳😳 (laughs throatily kissing her as she shrieks in frustration)

Edited by aditee - 14 years ago

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shalini_s

@shalini_s

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Posted: 14 years ago

#98

itne Hot Hot Spanish lessons 😍😍

lovely..

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priya

@priya_cool_123

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Posted: 14 years ago

#99

I m still reeling under the effect of the first one !

Thank u for another update Ad !

Ps . Shaals where are u !

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shalini_s

@shalini_s

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+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#100

and Khanak teasing Shaan with the lawyer.. she really forgot the doctor's advice 😉😉

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