PART 9
Amazing update
Natasha again ''''.. the way shaan treated her I felt he's love sick puppy but for khanak
so khanak is jealous
shweet of him explaining khanak still saying it doesn't matter wht u think
jealousy factor always work
khanak must 've scard the hell out of him
the bedroom scene was fab
I loved it when he tells her that she is his fianc and his responsibility for 6 months !!!... he was so right he's a real man wht khanak needs
PART 10
Fab tia'. Luved it
The way he actually showde his ownership or authority was damn gud
The description f party was superb I actually felt I was there'.
Wohoo'. Now he's acting as a fianc '''.. taking care of her
Drunk khanak'' she's really adventurous far diff from the actual khanak we saw
The walk was quite romantic but then the beach house part
Haye'. I was abt to faint'.. I need some cold water' finally I managed to read but not able to comment it was too hot and passionate
That is actually shanak's magic ' and ur writing makes it freaking hot
Goin back then sitting on chaise'''.. GOA hai itna to banta hai
HELLOOO SUNSHINE''''''.
I wanted to comment on each and evry line but em nt gud wid words
Where were u gurl till now'''''' we really needed this kind of ff wen rbo ended
Thx for such an amazing updates
It was totally shanaklicious'. Waiting for more moments of bliss
Shaan smiled down at her and kissed her forehead. What am I going to do with you Khanak he thought to himself. You're weren't in my plans but now I can't imagine any sort of plans without you. Looking down at Khanak he saw that she was fast asleep against his chest. Shaan smiled and closed his eyes too... superb