FF- Compltly Ur's FF COMPLETD on pg 83! MODNOTE PAGE 85 - Page 19

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Posted: 14 years ago


PART 9

Amazing update

Natasha again ''''.. the way shaan treated her I felt he's love sick puppy but for khanak

so khanak is jealous

shweet of him explaining khanak still saying it doesn't matter wht u think

jealousy factor always work

khanak must 've scard the hell out of him

the bedroom scene was fab

I loved it when he tells her that she is his fianc and his responsibility for 6 months !!!... he was so right he's a real man wht khanak needs

PART 10

Fab tia'. Luved it

The way he actually showde his ownership or authority was damn gud

The description f party was superb I actually felt I was there'.

Wohoo'. Now he's acting as a fianc '''.. taking care of her

Drunk khanak'' she's really adventurous far diff from the actual khanak we saw

The walk was quite romantic but then the beach house part

Haye'. I was abt to faint'.. I need some cold water' finally I managed to read but not able to comment it was too hot and passionate

That is actually shanak's magic ' and ur writing makes it freaking hot

Goin back then sitting on chaise'''.. GOA hai itna to banta hai

HELLOOO SUNSHINE''''''.

I wanted to comment on each and evry line but em nt gud wid words

Where were u gurl till now'''''' we really needed this kind of ff wen rbo ended

Thx for such an amazing updates

It was totally shanaklicious'. Waiting for more moments of bliss

Shaan smiled down at her and kissed her forehead. What am I going to do with you Khanak he thought to himself. You're weren't in my plans but now I can't imagine any sort of plans without you. Looking down at Khanak he saw that she was fast asleep against his chest. Shaan smiled and closed his eyes too... superb
Edited by IF_rida - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Sorry for late comments...
Part 9 & 10 were fab...
Khanak is so adorable after taking drinks...
Shaan is cute nd hot too...
I loved.. It.
Keep updating...
Nd abt ur 2nd ff
i would lyk u to go wid 1st one... Contract marraige nd love to blossom between dem is wat i always appreciate...
Do continue...
Keep smiling...:-)
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Posted: 14 years ago
haayila!

☺️

~Cheers,
Dish
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Posted: 14 years ago
Loved the Shaan taking over the relationship ... Keeping a check on her and she being in control with him being around, taking care ...beautiful !

Their attraction is more as of now, not sure of Love though...

Its a different type of relationship ya ... Can't wait to see how it moves ahead!

~Cheers,
Dish
Edited by dishbhan - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: abhaylover

as all of u said about first 1 , but believe me i can't write it know i will go for 2nd chap ok ?? and will write 1st one when this will finsih :)


ok..happy shappy story bhi humein pasandh hai..it will be fun to read..go ahead..
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: RB81


ok..happy shappy story bhi humein pasandh hai..it will be fun to read..go ahead..

Yup its ok withme too...

U said u ll update the next part this moning... Right...
Yahaa India me toh afternoon chal raha hai...😭

Morning toh kab ka ho gaya...😭
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: abhaylover

as all of u said about first 1 , but believe me i can't write it know i will go for 2nd chap ok ?? and will write 1st one when this will finsih :)


Hey i would love to read this story too ...as i love your style of writing it is unique.

So waiting for the New FF...Yiiipeee i am excited.

What about Part 11 & 12 u said u 'll post in the morning abhi to Shaam ho gayi.😉

Waiting for the next parts
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -pranjal-


Hey i would love to read this story too ...as i love your style of writing it is unique.

So waiting for the New FF...Yiiipeee i am excited.

What about Part 11 & 12 u said u 'll post in the morning abhi to Shaam ho gayi.😉

Waiting for the next parts

I guess Tia Canada ke timezone me morning bolrahi thi...
That means for us it ll be NIGht...😭😭😭😭😭


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Posted: 14 years ago
I guess Tia Canada ke timezone me morning bolrahi thi...
That means for us it ll be NIGht...😭



@ bold ...Yupp i guess u r right, 😊

Actually we all are Enthu catlets cant hold our excitements. egarly waiting for the next parts . 😉
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Posted: 14 years ago

I guess its early morning in Canada nw...
Cant wait any more...😃
Edited by hotchpotchRBO - 14 years ago

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