Hey Imane,
Awesome……….Beautiful piece of writing.. 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
Lovely story…… u are to superfast yaar ….sorry actually I am super slow….. sorry for the late reply…..was real busy but the new story is awesome..i am just not able to wait for the next part. It was awesomest. 👍🏼
First of all special Wow for the VM… … I saw it last night and belive me u are just amazing at video aditing. B'coz of u I can certainly imagine Shaan as airfoce officer. Maine kam se kam 10 times VM dekha kal. Wait clean edit man……u rock…… 👍🏼 it was amazing. 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
When I started readiong the part the first line it self made me hald my breath. You have described the atmosphere of the so well who has lost their loved one. & little 5 year old boys emotion…… his confusition….his hope that his father will definitely came…..11 year old trying to handel his little bro……..*phew* u really made that picture alive for me. 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
Than after 12 years …….lady u have created a picture of actual Panjabi house having a large joint family …….& typical Panjabi dialogues. Loved it completely loved it. Biji is super cute. U have created a cute affectionale, loving, caring, eldrly figure which evry house needs. She & mahdvi shares a wonderful bonding.
So Shantanu is at pune camp. I can so imagine the happiness & joy & exictment of the house when they receive the call their laadla. Hey u gave wonderful name to Khushboo….." khushi " 👏 👏 👏 its damn cute. & loved her character as responcible bahu who is doing each & every household work. Biji is very smart B'coz of her Shanak got engaged na……please give her a big hug from my side.
So Khanak is Doctor. & Shanak are childhood friends Wow loved the flashback u were too dood in describing that never felt disconnected with the present while reading past. Awww………she brought Choclates for him lovely discribtion.😍 ( par ye kaam hamare hero ko karna chahiye tha anyways but shantanu sounds little Shy kind of a guy in the story. and if yes to please yaar mat banana unko Shy ) 😉Are you a Punjabi kya?? coz ur detailing on their accent, the house atmosphere, the way they address each other is so real its fantastic yaar. So hamarre Shanak ka Roka ho chukka hain. Waiting for their tele communication. If I am not wrong u will be giving in the next update. 😊
I loved the Khandelwal family….. waiting for shantanu's arrival on his holydays ….. it will be real fun to read the update ………..also waiting for More FB….. I am damn curious to know abt how they fall in love or it is a arrange marrage as Biji planned. 😃
Can I reveal a secret actually I am loving this story more than "KMK"…… coz I can see wast improvement in ur writing. *hugs* to you. Special request looks like there is some jugaad in their age as you took 12 years ka leap coz if it is like that Shaan will be only 17 year old matlab must be doing his 12th 😳 ( Sorry intne badiya story mein aiise faltu nuks nikaalne ke liye but I always love ur detailing so couldn't control my self. Please forgive me) 😳
Waiting for the next part……….. jaldi jaldi dena. 😊
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