Bulandiyaan-Flight Beyond Skies l Prt 49 A Pg. 146

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dishbhan

@dishbhan

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#161

Wow ... hearty conversation!

Of fears of separation, likes, love, of vocal admittances not happening.

Shan is all open and ready to talk, asking her to do the same. Khanak explaining why thats not required.

Waiting for u to reveal the ups and downs of life for these together...

~Cheers,
Dish

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Roshni

@Roshni_M

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#162

awesome imane...

beautifully written...

the way shaan cleared d insecurities frm khanak's mind... was too good...

loved it...

continue soon...

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Krithika

@k.krithika

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#163

Hi Imane 😊

Finally caught with all the parts from 8-10C loved it all ❤️

Beautifully written and described very well

Really enjoyed reading the lovely parts

Khanak's surprise, Mr India act, their convo, loved the way he consoles her explaining the situation and love the strong Khanak who understands his dream and duty. U have penned down everthing so well hats off to u 👏

I loved these lines very much superb 👏

"He smiles his stunning smile as his gaze takes a tour of her pretty face, stopping only to admire her beautiful dark eyes. They held so much for him, every single ray of compassion, every little pigment of the word love, each and every spark of burning desires that only he was permitted to fulfill. He would literally need eternities to decipher what those beautiful eyes of her were always chit-chatting about and she would gladly hand over her eternities to him in a heartbeat."

Thank u for the awesome parts 😃

Love u 🤗

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Pranjal K.

@-pranjal-

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#164

Hey Imane

Awesome & emotional update……loved it…. 👏 ⭐️ 👏 ⭐️ 👏 ⭐️

Loved the update. But it was a the chotuest part of the FF. 😊 u described Khnaaks fear very well. She get scared hearing about him being posted to Kashmir. Loved the Shaan console her & assure her about him & his safety.

Loved their convo Emotional, understanding & romantic. 😍 Shaan make her understand his duties & responcibilities & also tell her to think positive. Loved the storng Khanak & her confession that she got scared for a minute. But she understand his duties & responcibilities & dream. Loved the way Shaan tease her on Mr. India incident, awww…..poor girl. She have to jalofy this teasing for lifelong now. 😆 😉

Loved the last part …..super romantic. U wrote it so beautifully that I read those last two paras several times …..hats off to you …..thanks a ton for giving us a fantastic story. 👏 ⭐️ 👏 ⭐️ 👏 ⭐️

Waiting for the next part...Jaldi dena...😳 🤗

Love

Pranjal,

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sunitha

@ashwanth

Beginner

Posted: 14 years ago

#165

hey,

what an emotional romantic part ,

please update soon

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Sonali

@adventure_gurl

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#166

lovely update imane, great job as always!

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Pooja

@candy84

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#167

Hi Imane...awesome update!

Main to deewani hoti jaa rahi hun is Captain ki 😳...since day one, i feel this FF is like Yash Raj movie..a complete entertainer with all flavours of Romance, Emotions,Fun & Masti..👏

Your video on page one is KILLER...

P.S : why so chotu chotu updates???

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Yasharanrocks

@Yasharanrocks

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#168

imane sorry havnt commnted n last parts.nice fic plz cont soon...

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Aussiegal

@Aussiegal

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#169

Hi Imane, excellent updates. The twists and turns are keeping me on my toes. The interaction between Shaan and Khanak was wonderful. Looking forward to your next update... xx 👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼

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Ramani

@RB81

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#170

hei imane,
wonderful part..
no one questioning them for going gayab after tea..
the dinner went on quite well..loved the way she made him eat vegetables..he sulking n teasing her when said 'good for ur body'..real besharam..but we love shaan that way..n khanak getting embarrassed..
khanak feeling at home doing all chores n did shaan's usual routine of biji's good night..
he dragged her to his room..wow!!! waiting for the next part..

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