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Posted: 14 years ago
#31
Hey Saaz abhi Amit ka kya pirablem hai yaar..

Aur yeh Khanak, yab mann hua.. ut gayi aur gaana shuru... like our Shaan would say Khandaani bimaari hai kya??

you know Saaz its always easy ( though easier said than written) to build up the story till the confession and then its always a question mark as to now what??? But here you're treading an all new path.. they already are married, they know they are their supports, they know it all or atleast think so.. I really wonder how on earth you manage to weave such an amazing plot from there on...

πŸ‘ respect for your writing skills...πŸ€— for making me get back to reading which I had thought was my forgotten hobby...❀️ you for continuing to create the Shanak magic!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wow already a second thread congrats...keep updating...loving it so far
Edited by sweetvidisha - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: saaaz

THANKS all of you...the new thread is totally a dedication to yu guys...


All of my readers who have and have not been tormented and have or have not hit like and have or have not commented..

THANKS ONE AND ALL

So the queschen really is

WHY DID HE NOT KISS???


may be shaan doesnt want to chance marofy always..the other times when she said "SHANTANU" they were in their room all alone n he did that n they were discussing something lighter..now kasturi is standing with them..they have not yet entered the house n she was in some confusion for coming here..shaan doesn't want to kiss her after taking her to the room..his kisses were instant reaction whenever she calls "SHANTANU"..moreover now they didnt converse properly for the whole time they were in the bike as she was angry with him for taking her home like that..my thoughts went like this only saaz..may be if she called him "SHANTANU" after they entered their room he could've kissed her for sure..
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Posted: 14 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: saaaz

THANKS all of you...the new thread is totally a dedication to yu guys...


All of my readers who have and have not been tormented and have or have not hit like and have or have not commented..

THANKS ONE AND ALL

So the queschen really is

WHY DID HE NOT KISS???

congrats 4 2nd thread.im very happy 4 katras 2nd threadπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
and awesme update.loved the payal talk.and kiss siliye nahin hua kyunki tumne nahin likhaπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
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Posted: 14 years ago
#35
Congrats for the new thread Saaz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

And what lovely updates, both of them!

Khanak and Shaan first lover's tiff is it?

but whatever happens the night good night and good morning is not going ...πŸ˜›

I loved their closeness ... they are starting to depend on each other now ... Haaye!

ye doston se milne gaye aur udhar hi ruk gaye lonawala mein ... alag alag rooms mein ...πŸ˜•

judaai judaai ... haaye kaisi ye judaai...

tujhe bola tha ache romantic se update de... tu tho inka jhagda karwane par tuli hui hain ... lonawala hain, married couple hain ... 😳 pls do something!

~Cheers,
Dish

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Posted: 14 years ago
#36
Many many congratulations on ur 2nd thread... πŸ‘πŸ₯³πŸ‘

Here i go for the parts
PART 26
A very sweet update... the elevator scene was nice i was worried dat sumthing bad might happen as they were standing far but luckily all went well... he is alwayz concerned abt her... shweet.😊

The garage scene was very nice no awkwardness due to tina and amit ... shaan is happy go lucky kinda guy.

The helmet scene was really cute... super cuteπŸ‘πŸΌ

Tina is miss J coz he's over protective abt khanak... oye hoye

PART 27
Luvly update... handinf over the jan was natural koi break nai maara ... the bundles would i've been lighter πŸ˜‰

everything related to farmhouse scenes was very nice

the song she was singing suits the situationπŸ‘πŸΌ

Khanak: (turns): Aapne tho mujhe darra diya..

Shaan: (smiles): Aapne mujhe jagaa hi diyaa... very cute

she wants to meet dadi... really eeger to gel with the in laws😲

the payal scene was very well described

aww... he's already missing her payal☺️

the romatic ritual of gud nite and gud morning...😍

luking fwd to the temple part

plz continue soon.


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Posted: 14 years ago
#37
aww congratz on new thread i am so in love with this shanak Theya re simple cute genuinine and what not? my fav scene was her searching for payal and he asking if it was a gift( i think there is a hidden jealousy factor there) later him missing it 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Purvi here I think u r wrong!! The not kissing her now has got nothing to do with Amit & Tina. He is long over Tina or else he wouldn't make it a point to mention to Tina its not a date when he went to see her last Thursday, he wouldn't leave her like that & nor would he have a smile guessing it was Amit on the bike with Tina even before he could take his helmet off. If he was still hankering over Tina then that smile wouldn't be there. Tina or Amit is not that important to him now.
For Khanak it wasn't important at all, Amit is just one of Shaan's friend to her, Tina she met for the 1st time & neither did she hear anything about her nor did she see or feel any special vibes between Shaan & her. So she was also clear on that regard.
They didn't kiss because Kasturi was there 1st of all & that moment passed between when she said 'Shantanu' & when they entered the room. I think he would have kissed her if she had called him Shantanu in the night when they were chatting. And 2ndly they were carrying their baggages from B'bay. She was still upset for his taking her to his house like that & also for Mad's behavior & Shaan was guilty for taking him to his house without any prior warning, ashamed of his mom's behavior & heartbroken seeing she was on verge of tears. All this together was more than enough to stall him from kissing her then & there.
And then the heavy convo they had after that, I loved it!! So meaningful, 'trust' was never an issue between them or else she wouldn't have lived with him in that small room & so openly she acclaims it as well. But when it comes to disappointment she asks a sensitive question & there he got stumped, he knows he has disappointed her about taking her to his home like that & got tongue tied, obviously in that situation he can't kiss her.
This is what I think, Saaz clarify kar. But I don't think it has got to do anything with Tina or Amit!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Saaz, ye neend song again...Dono ko neend waise hi ati nahi, and then she hopes that Shaan ko bhi neend na aaye...sweet, we do that all the time πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†.
Saare gaane neend udane wale daal rahi hai. Shanak ki bhi aur hamari bhi...
I really liked the "trust" part...and Khanak's response...
And he is missing the payal...awww
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: lghosh

Purvi here I think u r wrong!! The not kissing her now has got nothing to do with Amit & Tina. He is long over Tina or else he wouldn't make it a point to mention to Tina its not a date when he went to see her last Thursday, he wouldn't leave her like that & nor would he have a smile guessing it was Amit on the bike with Tina even before he could take his helmet off. If he was still hankering over Tina then that smile wouldn't be there. Tina or Amit is not that important to him now.

For Khanak it wasn't important at all, Amit is just one of Shaan's friend to her, Tina she met for the 1st time & neither did she hear anything about her nor did she see or feel any special vibes between Shaan & her. So she was also clear on that regard.
They didn't kiss because Kasturi was there 1st of all & that moment passed between when she said 'Shantanu' & when they entered the room. I think he would have kissed her if she had called him Shantanu in the night when they were chatting. And 2ndly they were carrying their baggages from B'bay. She was still upset for his taking her to his house like that & also for Mad's behavior & Shaan was guilty for taking him to his house without any prior warning, ashamed of his mom's behavior & heartbroken seeing she was on verge of tears. All this together was more than enough to stall him from kissing her then & there.
And then the heavy convo they had after that, I loved it!! So meaningful, 'trust' was never an issue between them or else she wouldn't have lived with him in that small room & so openly she acclaims it as well. But when it comes to disappointment she asks a sensitive question & there he got stumped, he knows he has disappointed her about taking her to his home like that & got tongue tied, obviously in that situation he can't kiss her.
This is what I think, Saaz clarify kar. But I don't think it has got to do anything with Tina or Amit!!

I always love reading your POV. 😊 Ab Saaz bata na?

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