Katra Katra 2- Pt50-Pg145

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purvi08

@purvi08

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#51

saaz di

you are superfast in updating

loved it .awesome writing

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dishbhan

@dishbhan

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#52

Too good ... "Wives wont wait"

Thats true!

But he isn't wrong as well, his career is riding on the prototype and so is Muril's ... Murli will understand .. Shaan has to make him understand, to keep Karthik in the team and working.

bahot complication hain ...

Saaz,

kya yaar ... mere life mein kya kam complication hain jo tu idhar bhi badha rahi hain ... vaise hi mera prototype ka design approve nahi ho raha hain ... u so remind me of my work when I want to run away from it!

Shyte!

have to rush for office .. bye .. TC

next update acha wala ... rona dhona jhahgda bilkul nahi chalega ... sort out karwa de yaar ... idhar tho at least ... sab tere hathon mein hain~

~Cheers,
Dish

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Lana Ghosh

@lghosh

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#53

Purvi let Saaz clarify about Tina being Shaan's baggage!! He was going around with her but had no serious intentions!! His life is centered around his work, project & studies. Tina inn sabse kosho mile dur hai!! If u ask him who was the priority he would go for his work not Tina!! But he may have truoble in telling Khanak about Tina being the one he was seeing before he had to marry her. But my gut feeling she was not that important.

He didn't kiss her because of his guilt feeling which he had about acting without not thinking & putting Khanak in a spot by taking her home & then seeing her coil in front of Madz. It was several of those feelings combined together.

Saazy clarify kar pls.

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saaaz

@saaaz

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#54

hey Lana..already posted my answer in the Thank you note..Trust is not an issue here as the dialogue clearly brings that out..however, with regard to dissap..it works both ways..in the sense..when Khanak says..'yourself or others'..she meant to ask what was her position in his life? becos to her, shaan seemed to be comfy introducing her to the help and Phalke daadi..but not the cute girl in the elevator or anyone on the elevator for that matter..or even his friends..

Some of this is dealt with in the next update..Page 6- part 28.

Katra Katra yeh bhi jaan jayenge..

@Purvi, DJ, Chris, Neha and Lana: Thank you so much for your thoughts and answers..all I can say is Chris and Lana are the closest at least for now..aage kya hoga..pata nahin..but your answers were frankly more interesting than my updates..I swear..

Edited by saaaz - 14 years ago

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roadsidejunky

@roadsidejunkey

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: saaaz

<font color="#cc0000">kahan thee?? thank you jee..</font>

Kinda of busy with entrance and all..par fursat mein likhuge apni vishesh tippani!!

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saaaz

@saaaz

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#56

@Dish...arrey yaar...agar judaai nahi hui..tho make up kaise karenge...all part of the game boss..

don;t worry shanak are not Khatarnaak...😃..they are two people with no egos ..they take things as they come..they shall go through ups and downs and shine through it all..end of the day, this is a light story..but even a light story needs some drama..otherwise constant everything is okay makes it an 'okay' story...

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souma

@Souma.N

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#57

Saazy I love what you have written but I am not understanding it...

Why is Shaan angry? because he saw Amit with Tina? because Amit winked at Tina? What?

Why is Khanak upset? because of Madz's indifference or Tina?

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saaaz

@saaaz

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: Souma.N
Saazy I love what you have written but I am not understanding it...

Why is Shaan angry? because he saw Amit with Tina? because Amit winked at Tina? What?

Why is Khanak upset? because of Madz's indifference or Tina?

Maydam...aap aagayee...follow my lecture..next time read and come to class ...this time you are escoosed..becos you are cutie..next time that cutie escoos will not work..yaad rakhna..😡

Khanak starts with being upset becos Shaan is careless in thinking he can take her to his house just like that..his hhouse help giving them a sweet welcome lifts her spirits..him telling her that he wants to show her his balcony lifts it some more..so much that she gets a tad excited when he suggest staying back..hence misinterpreting it to mean shaan invites her to stay at home with him..Mad's attitude confirms that she may not fit in..Shaan's picking and choosing on how he should introduce her is also playing in her mind..while Shaan thinks he has made amends by taking her to Phalke's house..she still wonders what is her place in his mind..she holds back..he is irritated..

Class khatam..paisa hajam...

BTW..patutie would have got it in a heartbeat..just saying..hmph!!

Edited by saaaz - 14 years ago