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Jessica

@jparker

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#21

Beautiful... such a beautiful intro... I can visualise and hear it.. like I am there.. in the fields with Khanak... and Shikhar.. sigh it is very magical mystory... your story... 😃 I believe your name is Priya? Correct me please if I am wrong.. but your talent is simply outstanding...

Loved Shaan's intro too.. and in essence with ShaNak...

waiting for the next update as I am bowled by your unique way of telling your story mystory.. 👏👏👏👏

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mystory

@mystory

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#22

hey jessica thanks yaar fr such beautifull comment.btw they are in sandunes of gujrat.runin on desert sand. bt thanks for the idea abt fields. surly use it in nxt parts. ya my name is priya.

Edited by mystory - 14 years ago

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mystory

@mystory

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#23

guys plsss tell me u lik it or nt.nobody is comntin .there r only few of u guys who r telin me to contnu.if u dnt like it i'll stop writin it.m not sulking,its jst a request.do comnt.

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Jessica

@jparker

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#24

Lmao... mistake ho gayaa re Priya... tehehehehe😛 Sorry my bad...

But yes... Kutch ke rann (desert) ki aur hi baat hain.. Sigh I love your unique style Pri.. and do call me Jess. jessica is too formal.. and makes me seem like a buddhi😆😆😆😆😆😉😃

do continue.. here at the forum all read.. some do comment but all love and appreciate good writing... 😃😳 The RBO forum is the most beautiful place that can happen to anyone.. Am speaking from personal experience.. gave me a lot and still is...😳😳😳

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Manita

@-Manita-

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#25

I just read the intro and the parts...wasn't able to read previously as I was very busy !!

Beautiful intro Priya...and very well written !!

the dialogues are well written and in sync with Shanak characters !!

Nice start...waiting for more !!

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Ramani

@RB81

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#26

hei priya,
u have a different style of writing..
the time spent shaan n his friends spent in the bar..
khanak's mom scolding..
its nice..
i wonder when will these 2 meet..
continue soon..for now the story has not yet started na..
wish to read more..

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Prerna Kandpal

@Prernarbofan

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#27

loved it and I am a burthal

as I was about to miss this update !

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mystory

@mystory

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#28

hey jess , rb81,prerna, manita thanks all of u fr support nd appreciation. u guys r such sweethearts. actually my motivational level ws droping bt u made it sail through .i'll write my nxt update preeety soon.again thank u . luv u alll.