thanks to dear ones who commented nd liked my otherwise so so ff.u guys r reading it that in itself vry motivational.thanks fr your praise...luv all rbo luvrs.
part 2b
jhallak shah khanaks big sis has come to her gona with her hubby nd twin daughters.she also lik khanak ws married in childhood(lucky to have jatin as her husband).she was 14 nd he ws16 when they were married nd it ws decided that when she'll turn 17 her gona would b done.bt destiny had some thin else stored in fr them. after givin his 12th papers , jatin askd his father to go to delhi fr further studies.on approwal frm his dad he went there nd studied enginering nd works with an mnc.nw he is 26 nd is well settld with his small family in gurgaon , delhi.toh jab jhallak 17 ki hui toh uska gona nahi hua bulki jab jatin ki job delhi may hi lag gayi tab hua.undono ki ab 4 saal ki twin daughters hai.
jhallak ne is dauran gaon mey apni 12th puri karli thi.aur jab woh delhi ayi toh jatin nay uska admission non collegeate may karwa diya .usney graduation puri karli aur issi wajah sey woh ek play school may art nd craft ki teacher ka job karti hai(hui na woh lucky in love).
khanak's room
dhulwadi
jhallak:khanak...khanak...(callin her vry softly),idhar aa tere mehndi lagani hai(enters her room nd finds that khanak is admirin herself in front of mirror wearin a chunnar over her head).
jhallak:khanak tere chunnar toh sundar hai shikhar nay di hai na?(gigglin)
khanak:arrey kahan behna,cheen kay lai hoon.
dono behnay khilkhilakar hasney lagti hain,tabhi unki maa ajati hay,undono ko aisay dekh kar maa man mey bahut sukoon mehsoos karti hai(wth tears in her eyes).
khanak:arey bai tu kabh aayi? aur tu roh kyun rahi hay?
bai:roz roz kahan dekh pati hoon tum dono behno ko aisey aur parso toh tu bhi apnay sasural chali jayegi , aankho may aasu toh ayengehi.
jhallak:bai khanak toh tere pass hi hay na ,jab bhi milney ka man karega bulwaliyo apnay jamai say kehkar.tere chori ki har baat jo manay hay.
khanak:acha behna!toh theek hay tu kehti hai toh ussay hi ghar jamai bana lete hay.
jhallak:pakka toh kal uski doli hamaray aangan may aayegi.
yeh kehtay hi jhallak aur khanak aur zor say hasnay lagti hay aur bai bhi dabe hoto say has dati hay.
kaveri fai:enters with a bowl of red chillys nd a matchbox in her right hand)hay ram!yeh dono choriya na jaanay kab sudhrengi.yeh jhallakdi toh mery sidhi sadhi gao ki chori ko bigaar degi ek din.tu yaha mat aya kar tera bura assar padta hay ispar(speakin angrily).
bai:aray didi yeh dono toh bus mazzak kar rahi thi(ghabratay huay).
kaveri fai:hanhan may sab jaanti hoon.aur bigaro bhabi inhay,phir yahi aakar dhar jayengi toh mujhe kuch na kehna.
khanak:fai ab mere nazar toh utardo.
khanak ki bua phir us laal mirch kay bowl ko uske sar par 7 bari pherti hay aur phir matchis say un mircho ko jalla deti hai.khanak ki fai uske maathay ko baray pyaar say sehlati hay aur uskay gal par kiss kartay huay ronay lagti hai.
khanak: fai ab tu bhi ro rahi hay.(teary).
bai:ari burthal , tere maa say barkar hai woh teray liye.apni chori kay sasural jaanay par har maa ka je bhar aata hay.
kaveri fai:na bhabi may toh khush hoon ki yeh balla maray sar pas se taljayegi.
sabhi 4 ladies zor se has parti hain.tabhi gaon ki aur ladys ,sabhi rishtay dar jo aangan may baithey they ghar kay andar aanay lagtay hai.khanak is vry happy.uskay charo taraf chehal pehal hay.raat kay 9 baj rahe hain aur sara ghar lighting ki roshni may jagmaga raha hai.uski do frnds uskay haato may mehndi laga rahi hay.her relativs nd village ladis r singin gujrati mehndi songs.khanak ki bua dholak baja rahi hay. her mother nd sister r servin snacks nd tea toall the ppl present in there.khanak ki 2 cute niece's r dancing on gujrati songs(ladis singin).they both r wearin identical lehnga choli(one is in pink orange combi nd the other one is in red green)and ghungrooin there ankles.ghungroo kiawaz aur dono kay baby dance steps say sabko bara maza aa raha hay.her jijoo is coverin all this in his diji cam(ofcos apni dono angels ka dance).
aur ek taraf baythay uskay ada ki aankhay khushiyon kay aasuon say nam hay.
khanak:(gets up frm where she's sittin)aada so karay choo.aap sabh toh mujhay bhi rula dogay.pehlay bai fir fai aur ab aap.mein kahi dur thori na jaa rahin hoon,paas walay aangan may toh hoon na.chupan chupai kay khel may aapkay aangan may hi chupnay aya karungi.
aada:burthal tu toh abi bhi meri nanni si guria hi hay.paray din apnay gharonday maychupi rahegi aur mein dhondta reh jaoonga.
khanak:(ye bat suntay hi zor say ronay lagti hay aur sisak tay huay kehti hai)nahi aada mein toh phir yahin chupi rehti hoon,aur shikhar dhoondta rahega.
uskay aada usay galay say laga latay hay(khanak kay jijoo yeh daughter father kay emo momnt ko apnay cam may hamesha kay liye kaid kar latay hay.
oikos,
house no 101,
civil lines,delhi.
shaan reaches his home at around 2:30 am in the momning(frm cheers bar nd grill).this was the first time in many mnths that he had reached his home earlier than his usual time of 4 am .harilal (servant)opens the huge beautifully crafted teak wood (custom made)gate fr him.
harilal:(rubbing his eyes in confusion)shaan baba aap?itni jaldi? kaisay?
shaan:kaka,aap apnay par saak mat karo,mein hi hoon(guessing frm looks on harilals face).
shaan was climbing up steps on way to his room bt in btwn notices that the light of rec room is on.he comes down midway nd enters the rec room nd found his dad watching tv.
shaan:hay dad wats up?u r nt sleeping?
sunil:hai dude ! itni jaldi agaya?
shaan:yaa . the grls were with us today,jaldi aana para.
sunil:sounds cool.chalo isi bahanay tumsay milna toh hogaya.(gets up nd they both hug each other)(click click kodak momnt)
shaan chatted wth his dad for another 15 mins nd they watched an english movie(sci-fi)together(with coffee nd snacks which harilal made fr them).
nxst night
shiv mandir,9:10 pm,
dhulwadi.
while shikhar ws almost runing onhis way to the shiv temple, khanak who had already reached therews paseing frm right to left(ofcos angrily)in front of the huge 1000 pedis(steps).jaisay hi shikhar waha pahuchta hay khanak ko waha dekh kar woh sapno may khogaya.coz khanak ws wearin the same chunnar that he had brought fr her the other day.
chunnar ke laal laal rang nay
rang diya gori ko sunharay rang may.
gotay ki jhilmil may chori ka chehra jo damkay hay
phikay par gaye saray taray jo chamkay hay.
khanak ki churi ki khanak say,shikhar ka dil dharkay hay
piya kay aanay se aankhow may pyar hay magar jhuki palkay hay.
kuch logo ki zindagi alag hoti hay,magar alag hotay huay bhi ek jaissi hoti hay.najanay kyun?
9:10 pm
oikos,
civil lines,delhi
shaan:yaa yaa pankhu(irritated), i knw m late.wait fr me fr another 15 mins.delhi ka taffic ! u knw naa.
pankhu:u always do that baby(almost crying kind of voice).have been waitin here fr an hour now.m super hungry.
shaan:on high pitch)dont start againok.m comin.aur agar nahi hota wait to tum dinner karlo.(whispering)btw aana kaha hay?
pankhu:(controlin her anger)shaan baby u r hopeless.retro club , c.p. nd i'll wait only fr 20 mins more.(ended the conve by hitting the phone on the table top vry angerily(culd have been some ones head if not the table)).
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